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Chapter 22

Since I'm posting this one a little early the next part will be late cuz rite now my evil mind is pouring ideas n I wanna work on them then give u lovely dovely scenes psh ok read ahem :)

Haaalllooo how are you all???
Good ? Great

Things that you sud KNOW & DO!

- this chapter is a turning point so u must pay attention to the TIMING, PLOT n some of the DIALOGS! (it has some hidden clues that will help u to solve the mystery.. If u r not sleepy n paid attention then u will know wat exactly it is! n if u can't find it thn not to worry u will know later on, so have plenty amount of patience or else U WILL PULL UR HAIR! ) as if u haven't b4 rofl
U confused souls might say IM CONFUSED! Psh that I can do IGNORANCE IS A BLISS! Cuz u r meant to be confused darling

- from now n onwards the story will move a little fast forward as I already burned ur bloods for not giving u ur "desired" scenes!
U know u sud not ask for any VIRMAN scenes cuz u will be bored reading way too many virman scenes (got enough to make u say "ok now I wanna read some other character's pov")

- this one is important: u may find virat a psyco ashiq or a insane creature cuz his action, reaction n way of living his life n philosophies r ahem complicated! He believes in the stuff that normal people do but takes everything in a weird way n tries all kinds of crazy attempts to make Manvi understand the concept in his way! (soon u will know y I enlightened u about that :p)

Am I scaring u already? Well u sud be cuz ur manvi is... She is having difficulties to deal with his insane ways of treating her! (not physical assaults n all ok! That's cheap n my boy is not cheap >___< but his acts r kinda dangerous..
Secret: I have written some scenes where he crosses all his insane boundaries n makes her cry but pacifys at the end n makes my evil mind grumpy. For me that's crazy so i don't know wat ur POV will be for that. Time n update will say!)

Ok now for my FB friends U better get this right, please don't embarrass me for the cosy scenes that might come sooner or later. Already hiding for that :( ... I won't tell this again cuz if u do Incase the consequences will be ummm not good!

Ok enough of lecture read ahead if u r not sleeping already :/


Recap
-Virat got drunk again/ inside manvi's room with her on her bed (sounds awkward grrr)

FUTURE (Goa) this ones for all the Karnia/jiju-sali fans!

Manvi was sitting on top of a big rock, inhaling the cool breeze, smiling childishly while watching Vihaan playing with the golden retriever puppies

"ahem ahem... May I say hello to the princess?" said viren standing behind her, breaking her imagination

M- turned back n replied with delight "oh hi jiju.. Of course you can..
Princess said hello back to her mausa ji"

Viren- sat beside her n asked with concern "u r doing fine right? No complication n all?"

M- mummy n her baby is absolutely fine n healthy, it's just I'm craving for coffee n I'm so in verge to steal the jar from dii n just make a cup for myself.

"Urggghhh u know it's so mean of the doctor that they don't allow pregnant women to drink coffee, however they say 'give the mother wat she wanna eat!' Stupid logic isn't it?"

Viren- "you are crazy.." smiling a bit

M- "blame ur brother for that, learned all that from him." shaked her head

Viren- well then reduce ur craziness.
A mummy can't be crazy enough to take care of her child being a silly girl.

M- wats so silly about it? I'm not the only crack head here u know.. Oh very much less then he was...
Do u even remember what he did after we returned from GOA? His actions were dangerous. what he thought or meant u cudnt understand at first try as it so quick like a lightning to even function in ur small brain!

Viren- chuckled n said "how can I forget I pushed his button n he took that as a challenge n said it!"

M- oh great! u were the main culprit behind his unexpected confrontation? Unbelievable!
That's so mean of u jiju, do u know how nervous I was that day? I almost fainted listening to his words n observing everyone's expression!

Viren- but u didn't so it was fine I guess. But yah challenges were his forte so he aced it!

M- don't even praise him okey? U have no clue wat he did to me while we were here.. One day I almost died out of heart attack cuz of his crazy act n absurd demand

Viren- "what really?"

M- no kidding! He almost killed me that morning. Very Bad guy :/

"I'm not laughing so I'm not joking" that was his words when he was doing that prank!
HE ACTED SO SERIOUS n nautrally that I cudnt figured out if he was playing with me or not.. U know I hated nyfa for that. They made him a perfectionist in acting which is very dangerous for the girls who have a BF like him.

Viren- i knew he was crazy n gonna do cranky stuff but didn't know he was that bad prankster. He wasnt that hyper b4, until he met u.

M- now its my fault? Awesome yah blame me now! &bad will be an understatement. Even "bad" sighed in front of his crazy acts. Thriller, adventure n danger was like a piece of cake for him n that's wat he lived for.

Viren- sure it was... He use to drink n drive while he was in India n I use to get scared n amazed at the same time that he never had an accident although his car flew in high like a rocket (making him an exception cuz in reality there is no human exist who rash drives while drinking n don't come across with an accident)

M- U won't believe but I said "I hate you" instead of "I love u" at least millionth times in those 7 days just cuz he lost his screw n tortured me a lot! &u know wat his response was?He said "I love the fact that u hate me more then u love me. Makes me feel like I conquered the mount everest cuz one way or other u think about me n that's all I need to breathe."
Unbelievable guy, I mean who says that to his GF that I love to earn hate more the love? Who does that??

Viren- "poor u.. glad u survived" smiled looking at her hyper expressions

M- don't even mention how I did! Stupid, monkey, irritating, annoying, shameless, dangerous, idiot, crazy psychotic n a mental.. All these adjectives wud be less for him!!! He was above all that. But I can't deny the fact how much he loved me.. His care, protection n feelings for me was so overwhelming that I hate my self for doing that one mistake of _______________ (leaving that for ending :p)

& I won't ever forgive myself for that

Viren- something's are not in ur hand manvi... Everything is already written so u can't change ur destiny. So feeling bad about it won't change the fact cuz whatever happened it meant to like that. Accept the Unwanted fate.

M- but giving a chance n believing in ur heart more then these blind eyes were MY CHOICE! I believed in wat I saw n denied my heart beats. I was wrong so wrong... Y did it happened jiju? Y? I wish I cud go back n fix it. I want him back for once I know I'm not worth of his forgiveness but I wanna make it up to him..

Viren- u r breaking his promise again.. don't feel bad n be happy... He is with u n will be always in ur heart.

M- living my life according to his words n terms is wat exactly I'm doing since past 9 years. I have been moved on like he told me to do n I'm happy in my present but then I can't forget him either. N I won't ever forgive him for leaving me alone... Never... It doesn't matter what my present is or future will be but the "love" that I had for him, have now n will be the same until I last breath.. No one can take his place nor will i let anyone to take it.
He taught me to love again.. He gave me a second life n I'm just living this for him or else I died the day he left us .

Viren- I won't force u to kill your feelings but will definitely suggest u to not to do injustice with ur present.
Don't forget u have moved on n going back to past won't be a good thing to do. Many hearts will be broken!

M- its kinda odd to take that advise from u. U know why? Cuz u haven't moved on either! U r also stuck on that same time period like im n not willing to move on either don't u?

Viren-" who said I didn't? I have.." looked down n replied her

M- oh really? Then y haven't u celebrated diwali, holi or any other festival since past 9 years?

Viren- "festivals r old fashion n I got better things to do then celebrating those loud adventures!" said composing a serious tone.

M- u may be the best lawyer of India but ur strategizes to avoid the truth won't work in front of me. U avoided everything cuz he is not with u n u miss him a lot. I can see that. So don't just avoid the reality cuz u r failing miserably

Viren- my priorities n positions are way different form u manvi n u need to understand that.

M- not really. When u love the same person ur priories n positions become the same

"vihaan don't go near the border line... There is a warning for high tides... Vihaaan... I'll be just back manvi...he is not listening.. Ok?" avoided the argument n left the spot

M- I guess I defeated the super genius lawyer again! U r hiding his diary jiju n I know for sure there is something that I need to know n I will figure it out wat is it...

*This convo will be continuing as the story will progress till then I will give u little little hints about the future ! *


* I feel so happy I praised my boy ^____^ now it's time to give something for vihaan lovers!

B4 viren came to talk to manvi, vihaan was communicating with
Her.


Vihaan- mumci do u know my chachu?
M- I do.. Y u asked that?
Vihaan- no it's just I like him. He is cool.. I wanna meet him soon but no one tells me where he is .Do u know where is he?
M- he can't meet you.
Vihaan- y is he on abroad like in business trip ? The one papa goes on once in a while?
M- looked down not willing to answer
Vihaan- tell me na? Or is he playing hide n seek? I love that game u know
M- looked up n said "maybe..."
Vihaan- cool then I will wait for his return
M- but y r u asking about him now?
Vihaan- "oh cuz I read his.."bit his tongue... "Ummm just like him like that"
M- wat r u hiding? Say it!
Vihaan - promise u won't tell anyone?
M-promise
Vihaan- well one day I was in his room looking for a base ball since his room got all the sports stuff .. So while looking for it I found his book!

M- book?
Vihaan- yah secrets of life... N I was reading it :) he is very funny hehe..

M- "secrets of life" virat's diary!!
"where is it vihaan?"
Vihaan- oh it's with papa..He caught me stealing it :/
M-wat!
Vihaan- I'm sorry I was reading it secretly cuz papa kept it inside the locker.
M- when did u start reading it?
Vihaan- Since a month!
M- ok enough of spying now let's go inside I'm very hungry
Vihaan- mmhh she is making u fat mumci!
M- haha she is ... But thn I will be fit again when she will come!
Vihaan- :) let's go
M- let's go..
"jiju got his diary? y didn't he tell me?"



Morning 8 am[HATE WRITING THIS... So embarrassing]

Morning alarm just disturbed ur virman's peaceful sleep

However virat was sleeping like a hypersomnia patient, while manvi opened her one eye slightly denying to wake up that early n being lazy like me :)

After a while, she tried to turn her body on her opposite side, trying to make herself more comfortable, but got held back as he was holding her tightly like a little girl wud do to her favorite Barbie if it's in verge to disappear from her sight.

She opened her eyes quickly, thinking what made her halt from turning.When her eyes met his neck skin, she tilted her head enlightening her brain wat the hack was it. After observing his face for a min or so she screamed so loud that her voice got broke, but it didn't leave a damn effect on him. Instead he burried his face on her shoulder briefly, thinking she is a soft pillow n avoiding the loud sound which was disturbing his peaceful sleep.. (Old habit of avoiding the sound of alarm)

She froze for that moment, unable to digest the bitter reality n her awkward position. Then she recalled the events of last night n slightly calmed her heart thinking they didn't cross their limits n exhaled a long breath.

However, HE WAS SLEEPING WITH HER.. Wait no SHE WAS SLEEPING WITH HIM.. Urghhh... wateva both were way too close to each other like a married couple in a honeymoon suite.

She turned her face n shut her eyes tightly rejecting the reality, which left more space for him to make himself comfortable on her/pillow.
So he just buried his face more on her neckline while pulling her closer toward his body
(someone wake him up my mind is going crazy... :/)

Crossing all his limits, he begin to nuzzle her neck like "rubbing a nose with the palm when it becomes stuffy due to cold :p"

His actions were fluttering her heart. She begin to breathe heavily as he kissed her shoulder gently. Well u can say virat was dreaming "he is eating an Ice cream" cuz her sea coca butter lotion was smelling like a vanilla ice cream, delighting his dream like a cherry as a toping :p

She clenched her fist n twisted her duvet as his irresistible contacts were driving her nuts.Crossing the highest of the besharmies, he was playing a piano on her bare stomach seductively (his imagination goes wild so I don't wanna mention)

She looked down toward her lower body n found her tank top was pulled up upto her breast line n her lower abs were clearly visible giving him all the advantages n rights to caress it deeply . Ummm not his fault it's just when she twists n turns it happens. (let me die now! I shall not continue)

She gulped down nervously. His hot breaths were creating an unknown sensation down her spine. Goosebumps rose up n her heart was saying "oh dear... He is good but kill
Meee"
Her brain wasn't working but when the alarm ringed again as it was on snooze, she controlled her mind n tried to get up. However when I'm here y fear? She ain't getting up that easily :p
His grip was tight enough for her to unclutch! Don't know what the hell he ate, but every attempt of hers were backfiring n he was tightening his grip more harder.
Right now she was going crazy with the mere thought of wat if someone comes in n sees them like this? The door was open since last night n if people see them like this then there won't be a place for her to hide her face.

She tried so hard to get away from his grip but failed horribly. Was thinking to shout out loud but cudnt. it was dangerous since everyone use to get up on that time. Thought of biting him again, but he was looking so cute that her heart didn't support that dangerous idea. Also, she didn't wanted him to know that she was sleeping with him ALL night, hugging him in the same manner like he is now.

(Trapped from all side! Who will come to rescue? Of course me .. Duh)

There her thoughts were making her go weak on her brain n here his strikes were going extreme on her.. He begin to lick n gave small bites on her shoulder/side neck.. Making her super hyper. Creating havoc desires that she never wanted to encounter
(ice cream is delicious u see.. *shut ur F n mouth Faria*)

* I will never make him drunk again! *

She turned her face side ways n buried her face inside the pillow, unable to manage his naughty adventures. How can someone do such things when they r sleeping??? Must have done a PHD in Masterbuting. Didnt he?

(I'm quitting I hate writing this!)

His mouth was on her neck bone n he was going down. Before he crossed his limits, she just pushed hishead out of her neck n let him sleep on the pillow
Took a deep breath thinking thank god she manage to avoid him. His acts were seducing her in every manner which wasnt acceptable. However he is such a pervert, hates rejection I guess, so just shifted his head on her heart/ Chest

She paused her breath for one min as he was making himself comfortable on her upper body. Her whole body got frozen as he was moving his head, rubbing his spiky stubbles on her bare skin n thinking she is a soft pillow n was taking the pleasure of sleeping peacefully.
She bit her lips, cheeks turned red n began to sweat as his lips were touching the skin n now Her was thumping abnormally, which distracted him occasionally since his ear was on her heart.
Once in a while, he smacked her bare stomach thinking its a alarm clock button nmade himself more comfortable, squeezing her pitte body.

M- " Virat vadhera I will kill you today.. stop doing that" was fussing nervously

M- "think manvi think... He is crossing his limits now!"
Then a brilliant idea popped in her mind (stupid one): n she used her hair to tickle him on his ear.. First tires he avoided with his shoulder but when she did it over n over again he loosened his grip n remove the hair form his ear. She took that advantage n just got up quickly, ran toward the main door n locked it.

M- Now the question lies wat she gonna do when he will wake up?? Wat she gonna answer him that how they were in the bed n she was sleeping with him? >_< but wait it wasn't her fault. He was the one who came into her room n did all this insane acts!! She was fuming badly... Wiped off his saliva from her neck n then picked that rod by her side table n was in verge to hit him hard but then stopped. She was looking at him huffing horrendously
Her mind say "if he wakes up u will never able to lift ur head high in front of him so it's better to let him go."

She backed out n hid everything that proved he was sleeping in her room! took a quick shower n left the room b4 he woke up.

It was 11 am when a loud sound of a ring tone woke him up... It was her cell phone :p accidentally she forgot to take her phone on the way out.

He woke up the way he usually do.. But today was feeling strange cuz the bathtub was small for him n he was having difficulties to move his hands. He stood up straight n open his lazy eyes, rubbed his nose n smelled the coca butter lotion

"coca butter? But I don't use coca butter" he said looking at his palm. Thenlooked around the surroundings n blurred out "where am I? Why my room is pink? N why do I smell ladies perfume?"
He looked down on the bed n it was pink too. Then his eyes met the rub that he was wearing n he just freaked out! It was also PINK n wasn't his size..

V- what the hell.. He smelled himself n it smelled like he was dropped inside a girl's perfume pool...

His eyes grew big like a tennis ball n then he shaked his head from left to right babbling "nooo... This can't happen... I can't... Holy smufers... No no no no"
Then started to pat his chest checking something. Relaxed his heart, was satisfied for "the weird assumption didn't come true"
But then "wait... Still not confirmed yet.." breathing heavily.
"darling u better stay right or else.. " looked down was talking to something :p

"ok... Time to do this... Breathe in. Breathe out.. Check!" he was pacifying himself but his eyes was shut tightly...
"u can do this virat.. Check urself.. U don't wanna wear women's cloths do you? Do it" scold himself
Slowly n steadily he opened his eyes n remove the bathrub n looked down.

"oh my gosh ... IM STILL A MAN!"
He shouted out loud in joy

"thank god I'm a man.. But y am I wearing ladies bathrub n y am I smelling like a girl??" was confused now.
He stood up investigating the room but tripped on the rod which was on the floor, beside the bed.

"stupid rod! Wait wats that?" he saw a handle type of thing under the bed n then took it out.
"who keeps their luggage under the bed?" was curious now...

"shall I open it?" Looked around n thought "no its a girl's room n a man should not touch women's belongings without her permission!"

*someone please enlighten him about last night :p*

Was thinking for a while either do it or not. "u got no options virat.. U have to see if u wanna know who's room it is n y the hell u r here? So just open the damn bag!"

"but wait wat if there is ummm u know... Lingeries n stuff then it will be ummm awkward..."
Looked up n said "kya karwa rahai ho Angels... I'm a good boy y u r making me do a bad thing huh?"

*coughs out loud! Whom is he referring to? Not himself right? That's wat I thought!*

"Ok let's do this.. Whatever will happen i can handle it... I mean I have seen girl's in bikinis so it sudnt be a big a deal right.. Yah it shudnt be"

He squinted his eyes n open the zipper. Thank god no such awkward stuff was in front of his eyes! So he just mess with her luggage n found a family photo n got shocked!
"maanviii... Hell no... I'm in her room? What? That's impossible.. It's not true.. "
Then her phone ranged "u never have to worry If wat I say it's true.. Girl I have looking for u.. When I smile on u.. That I finally found u..."
That was it... It's her! It's her ring tone n there is no doubt about it. He got up n checked the phone; it was from Jeremy... (manvi was looking for her phone so Jeremy just dialed her number!)

He picked it up n said "hello"

Jer- who's it?
V- virat
Jer-" wat? Why her phone is with u? Changed ur profession to a thief huh?" mocked him
V- "none of ur business... Give the phone to her..." replied
Jer- looked up but found no one was there.. "manvi... Where did she go??" he blurt out n virat heard it.. N just cut the call...
[she heard the convo n ran away]

He was spinning the phone n was ruffling his hair "what happen last night? As far as I remember I was drinking at fattys shop then how the hack I end up being sleeping on her bed wearing her cloths, perfume n even lotion? Something is not right. Gotta figure it out.."

*finally tube light just lit up! Phewww*

He changed his cloths n sneaked out of her room n got down.
On the way his partner cross by n held him back behind the wall

G- "hey handsome... Where did u go last night? I was looking for u..." seductively playing with his chest

V- "what are u talking about?"

G- last night... Remember we were going 'homeee' dragging the HOME purposefully

V- "u have lost it!" Removed her fingers from his body n walked off

G- "hey... U were drunk last night.. It's not my Fault that u don't remember... Jerk!" shouted on his way back

V- just moved away.. Looking for manvi... Meantime raj came n informed him that HE IS LATE FOR HIS WORK n the officer called at least 10 x! n now he will do 12 hrs as a punishment! With an exception of completing 50 hrs
(8 hrs will count as the punishment punishment but extra 4 hrs will for being late to do his work!)
Also informed him that his phone is ahem not to be found.. N needa get one soon... He rush thru the pizza palace forget manvi cuz if he is more late he will be working 14 hrs each day until the time goes up.

[y I'm pakoing u with this workaholic schedule? Cuz soon he will be sick due to this!! U see he skips his meals one in a while n works like a nerd]

Fatty was doing his regular tasks.. When virat entered.

V- morning fatty? How are u? Wat are we making today?
F- ignored!
V- hello.. I'm talking to u.. Not the wall okey?
F- "excuse me" he passed by him n open the oven n put the pizza inside.

V- now y are u ignoring me again? Is it bcuz I drank ur whiskey last night?

F- looked at him n chopped the veggies in full speed without even looking down to the chopping board.

V- "phewww impressive.. u know u r a good chef.. I like working with u..." Sat on the counter n n started to chew cucumber.

F- people invented chairs for a reason! Counters r not for ur dirty ass to sit in!

V- ooo.. I'm sorry.. He got down.
Well then wat are we doing today?

F- ignored

V- what is it? Y playing silent mode game with me? What did I do?

F- he put the knife on the side n said bit harshly "fatty... Looks like a pumpkin that a tea pot can be hold on top of my tummy isn't it?"

V- wow wat?? Wat are u saying?
F- repeating ur own words son!
V- o hello.. When in the world did I said that? Stop accusing me.. Okey
F- mmmhh.. Whiskey makes u friskey n u slip ur tongue last night.
V- here too? Shit... I'm sorry... Look if I hurt u I didn't mean to do it intentionally.. I really didn't mean it..
F- "it doesn't matter how hard I try I can't change the fact that I'm so fat right?" said a bit sadly
V- Mr. Johns I'm really sorry.. I really didn't mean to hurt u... It's just urghjjj all my fault I always do such stuff that hurts people.. I sud be locked up inside the bar n let this idiot boy suffer! I'm really sorry please understand me.

F- "well I'm not hurt less like u to not to forgive u so.. Forget it u r good"

V- I'm really sorry!
F- u r fine but next time don't over drink as u can't handle!!
V- wont :) btw do u know wat I did?
F- ask wat u didn't do.. He told him everything upto nyfa gate but thn after that wat happen no one knows except manvi.. He worked hard n was done for the day so quickly went back to nyfa looking for manvi...


She was in the auditorium practicing alone when virat entered n halt her steps!

V- "manvi... I need to talk to u.."

M- she looked up n quickly shifted her glares n tried to get the towel as she was in short sports attire, but he didn't let her n took that away from the bleacher.

V- can I buy ur 5 mins please...
M- packed her bags n started to move forward toward te changing room. He was following her back n was calling her to stop, but she didn't n reached the changing room door.

Paused her steps as he was following her everywhere n no one was near.. She turned n looked at him with vicious eyes, gritting her teethes n tightening her fists. He moved forward n gave her the towel back saying "without this u can't shower."
She hold the towel n about to enter but he halt her back again..
"I'm not giving u this so easily.. After u fresh up u gonna give me ur 5 mins n I wanna talk to u... Please!" he pleaded.
M- her calmed her muscle n hinted him that she will listen to him therefore he just gave it back n stepped back!
She locked the door with a loud bam n took a shower. 1 hr passed she didn't came out... 2 hr passed no appearence.. He wanted to check her if she was okey or not but it wasn't right.. As she was taking shower n he is not a bad boy :p *controls laughter*
After 3 hrs she opened the door knob n sneaked out.. (purposefully delayed her appearence cuz she didn't wanted to see him again .)
Took a deep breath, when found no one apart from emptiness in the hallway. She turned back to get her stuff from the locker room but stepped back hitching her breath..
He appeared from no where n spoke forming a grinning face "hi again.."

She got scared n hit the back wall.. Still looking at him with big eyes thinking he waited that long for her which means OmG he is upto something... Is he gonna... (typical brown girl observation. No offense Cuz I'm a brown girl too. :p)

He stood in front of her leaving 6 inches distance approximately n spoke "didn't u shower since last month?"

M- :O:O huh?
"excuse me? I take shower 2x a day okey?" felt insulted n retort back agitated.

V- "oh u do?"surprised
"Well then u needa buck up ur speed cuz I just finished 1 full box of Stax lays, 1 poptart, 2 bottles of coke n one full box of ferrero" said irritated

M- didn't reply back n just moved aside, heading toward the doorway

V- he held her back holding her wrist
"where do u think u r going? I didn't waste my 3 hrs n ate like a pig just to say 'Hi again'. U can't go before I finish my part"

M- "leave my hand" Twisting the wrist
V- not until u listen to me...
M- she had enough not repeating the same mistake that she did b4! She won't be weak.. There won't be a second time when He will rip her soul again. Her anger was reaching to its peck n virat was slightly pulling her closer to him. She tighten her fist, suppressing the furious rage of her inner tigress.

V- "we can talk straight! Don't have to go hard way" b4 he cud finish his sentence she slapped him right across his face.

M- "Don't dare to touch me again"

V- released her. She walked faster n reached in front of the main gate but then he turn her back n blocked her against the side wall.

Placing one hand on the wall n leaning very close to her face he spoke "not interested to touch u... I just want my answers... After u tell me wat I wanna hear u may go. Won't stop u"

She shifted her face side ways not willing to look at him nor answer his questions

He stepped back a little n stood straight piercing her with blazing eyes
"what happened last night? How did I end up being into ur room?"

Her heart beats pounded loudly, knowing the ending won't be good if he figures out wat exactly happened.

v- "I was in ur bed wearing ur bathrub, looking like a cartoon character of Hangover 3 so this gives me all damn right to know what the hell happened last night.. n without getting my answer I'm not letting u move an inch. U hear me?"

She looked at him nervously, gulping down her fears but was more nervous instead... She was sweating..

He stepped closer n said politely "look manvi.. I was really drunk n I don't remember exactly wat happened so if u don't tell me how am I gonna know wat happened? So can u please stop this silent treatment n just speak up? Cuz I have allergy with IGNORANCE IS A BLISS n I hate it when people try to imply it on me. "

M-Still remained silent. What will she say that "oh virat I just made u comfortable in my bed, slept with u all night although I hated u the most? Or shall I say u were a retard last night n drived me nuts with ur crazy acts?"
She lowered her lashes not willing to gaze at those killer eyes!

He cupped her face n asked her nicely"did we spent the night together? Is it y u r not able to say wat happened?"

M- looked up shockingly n nodded her head slightly in negative response.

V- decreased his distance n asked again "then wat is it that u are trying to hide? Just tell me.. If I did wrong then punish me i will gladly accept it but don't stay silent"

M- bit her lower lip trying to control her unnatural n unwanted feelings

V- "manvi..." whispered softly
M- met her lashes with his
V- "can I kiss u?"his eyes were sparking like a bright star.
M- raised her eyebrows in disbelieve.
V- "may I?" whispered, caressing her juicy lips
M- her body got stiff.. Lips were quivering so does her body. She closed her eyes... Don't wanna answer
V- he smiled seeing her nervous face n leaned closer.. Here his distance was decreasing while her beats were beating unnaturally in super sonic speed... B4 he cud touch her lips she pushed him n just ran away...

V- ruffled his hair, curving a naughty smile on his lips he said "that's my girl.. Ms. Manvi Sharma be ready to save urself from this scavenger cuz baby I'm coming to hunt u down!"

Next morning!
Choreographer n miss Ria were discussing about the play n they wanted a best opening n ending!! So ms Ria specially requested Virat n Manvi to pair up n be the show stopper! Virat said yes in one go but manvi denied however had to agree ms Ria left her no choice!! <3

Sneak peak for next chapter:

Hai rama ye kya hua kyon aise humein sataane lage...Tum Itni pyaari ho saamne hum kaabu mein kaise rahein...jaao humko to aati sharam hai..Teri aisi ada pe to fida hum hain

Clears throat... Promo coming soon, just stay tuned!

super sorry for the lame update :/

with all that I'm saying sayonara... New readers send buddy req if u wanna get pms! <3
N thank u everyone for the sweet feedbacks!!! Appreciated all n hugs for that

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i juz luv ur way of writting...thanx for updating

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fariaaa today em nt having ny complains cz every word every line is cute n i like it :-)

I wish u keep us gving like these update only :-P

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