[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Thanks for pm dear
fab part
virat is such amezing in this story...
Too good
awesome work

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

woww you actually again updated a real long one thanx alott for that 😃

and this one was not at all evil ek dam cute sa aur happy wala tha loved it 🤗and your crazy notes in between again makes me laugh on your foolishness 😆

and the drunk virat omg he is sooo cute and adorable haye wanna go to mumma homie homie manvi bad gal... manvi chudail ...fatty all his dialogues soo cute just like a kid loving this crazy sa cute sa virat ...❤️

and his madnees in manvi's restroom was damn hilarious imagining him in manvi's nighty gosh thats crazyyy 🤣🤣nd manvi's whole stuffs destroyed gosh manvi will destroy him😆😆

and jeremy he is acting like an ekta kapoor's shows vamp doing all those stupid things like changing the menu and stuffs😆😆 but am loving him...😉

and i wanna know the secret of viren wat is he hiding
and no confusion at all now its all good😃

waiting for the next one 😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Amazing..!! like the way u have written with past and present...and this update was sad, funny and their mixed feelings of love and hate...Virat is hilarious when drunk...he actually used Maanvi's wardrobe...superb..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM..!!!

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@anu0555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

freaking amazing !!!! loved it !!! update was cute !!!!

thnxx for PM !!

do updae soon !!

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ashfaqmiyaann

@Anees.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

omg fariaaa!!!!!

wanna hug u

wht really he made a muahh face hahahhaha

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

n maanu grinning her teeth hahahahha i can imagine it n dare u if u wont update 2day then wait n watch what i will do on ur fb walll plsss update pls pls

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ashfaqmiyaann

@Anees.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

OMG fariaaa u updated hahahha sorry yaar

bt wat a freaking n awesome update ufff

tali virat cracked me up 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 n vihaannn awww poor babby nw this update was hell hilarious

pls pls pls update soonest plssshhh

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Mind blowing udate
this is getting more n more interesting n exciting
loved the first part of update
hillarious drunk virat
esppecially wen he hides behind mamvi to be saved frpm fatty
n wrecks her things up lolzz
Ooohhh sleeping in each others
wonder wat morning will bring for them
totally loved this update
really cnt wait for next part
im getting too excited for it
plzzz yaar do udate soon 😉

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Halfway through. Will read the rest and edit my comment.

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: JennyKryan
OMG fariaaa u updated hahahha sorry yaar
bt wat a freaking n awesome update ufff
tali virat cracked me up🤣🤣 n vihaannn awww poor babby nw this update was hell hilarious

pls pls pls update soonest plssshhh

Thank u XO XO! Update working on it!!! Trying to make it more decent :p

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Virat is changing and I'm loving it and love how even Manvi is sensing that he's changing, I wont comment on all his crazy antics after getting drunk but it was really fun to read those parts.

the future parts were cute with the Vihaan moments but its confusing for me as to where Virat is in the future and I know your never going to tell us so wont go there again.

The taxi drive was really sweet, love how Virat is trying ti show to Manvi that people can change, she needs to get it through her thick skull that Virat although bad from the outside has a good heart unlike Jer who acts all high and mighty but just wants to mess with Virat and show his mistakes to Manvi,

now you said alot will be revealed in the next few chapters so waiting for them and I'm really happy that you give me exclusive peaks as well. Makes me feel all special 😉