[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago

omgomg! woahhh you really are a rare case.. seen many crazy writers but you have just blown me away!

absolutely loved each and every chapter! the story is something else.. finding it hard to find words to describe it.
It really has a depth you know like.. each chapter tells it's own story and builds a bigger picture later on. everything is clearly visible while reading..the picture is just that vivid..
I swear you got me screaming at my laptop, sometimes reading with one eye open, afraid to read further, sometimes just had to stop for few minutes to digest all the things going on.. and rarely getting the "normal" vibe.. but yes seriously it was a great read.
And oo yeahh.. just to add, I read it all in one go, in one day, few hours.. yes its a bit too much and no I've never been crazy reader like this before ..but yeah.. I only ever do that when I really have nothing better to do.. like literally dying of boredom OR the story is THAT interesting to keep me sitting in one place, ditching the once in a blue moon "nice- sunshine" weather in London..like F* sake am I kidding you.. the FF must be epic. thank to you now I look like a zombie starring at laptop screen for good few hours.
YOu really are a star. will be waiting for the update! I know it takes ages, hard work and effort to write one chapter and dealing with constant update soon deadly fans gets a bit too much.. but I swear its all your fault for making us physco . haha
and also, i dont really follow this show anymore but its good to come back to read such FFs. keep up the great work.
EDIT:
lol dont be surprised if I come back here and add few more lines cos I'm just like that.. I like giving proper long feedback especially when you've done such wonderful job in giving us long amazing updates!
yeah just wanted to say how much I love the fact that you used TVD character names. reading this made me want to wach TVD again.. haha.. yeah kinda obsessed with it. and hell yeah JER is such a hottie. I agree and no chappal thworing for making him grey shaded.. infact I love it. but I do love virat more!
oh god, I love the songs you put in between! it's just FAB! I hear the songs and then I start imagining all.. and i'm like darn !
Enrique ilagisa is just <3 finally found you. my fav song too atm. hehe
Edited by Poojaa_P - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice Update.,~!! Since u know u have confused us and asked to keep patience I would...but like the update specially VirMan moments...Looking forward for the mystery to unfold..Thanks for the PM..!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Patience is something that i'm having from the time i started reading ur story dear 😆 😛
I've no complaints 😛
Your updates always makes me happie..!! 😃
I'll go with wateva u give me to read 😉
*No complaints sweetheart*
can i expect an update atleast by day after tomorrow.!?
Pm me wen u update 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kushal90

Patience is something that i'm having from the time i started reading ur story dear😆😛

I've no complaints😛
Your updates always makes me happie..!!😃
I'll go with wateva u give me to read😉
*No complaints sweetheart*
can i expect an update atleast by day after tomorrow.!?
Pm me wen u update🤗



A day after tomorrow? Crazyyy much? No give me tax thn will haha :p

Glad u started reading lol don't worry No more confusions from next chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

omgomg! woahhh you really area rare case.. seen many crazy writers but you have just blown me away!


absolutely loved each and every chapter! the story is something else.. finding it hard to find words to describe it.

It really has a depth you know like.. each chapter tells it's own story and builds a bigger picture later on. everything is clearly visible while reading..the picture is just that vivid..

I swear you got me screaming at my laptop, sometimes reading with one eye open, afraid to read further, sometimes just had to stop for few minutes to digest all the things going on.. and rarely getting the "normal" vibe.. but yes seriously it was a great read.

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And oo yeahh.. just to add, I read it all in one go, in one day, few hours.. yes its a bit too much and no I've never been crazy reader like this before ..but yeah..I only everdo that when I really have nothing better to do.. like literally dying of boredomOR the story is THAT interesting to keep me sitting in one place, ditching the once in a blueO moon "nice- sunshine" weatherin London..like F* sake am I kidding you..theFF must beepic.thank to younow Ilook like a zombie starring at laptop screen for good few hours.


<em>YOu really are a star. will be waiting for the update! I know it takes ages, hard work and effort to write one chapter and dealing with constant update soon deadly fans gets a bit too much.. but I swear its all your fault for making us physco . haha

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and also, idont really follow this show anymore but its good to come back to read such FFs. keep up the great work.


EDIT:

lol dont be surprised if I come back here and add few more lines cos I'm just like that.. I like giving proper long feedback especially when you've done such wonderful job in giving us long amazing updates!


yeah just wanted to say how much I love the fact that you used TVD character names. reading this made me want to wach TVD again.. haha.. yeah kinda obsessed with it. and hell yeahJER is such a hottie. I agree and no chappal thworing for making him grey shaded.. infact I love it. but I do love virat more!

oh god, I love the songs you put in between! it's just FAB! I hear the songs and then I start imagining all.. and i'm like darn !

Enrique ilagisa is just <3 finally found you. my fav song too atm. hehe

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New reader! Ahem I salute ur stamina!!! U read that in one go? Crazyyy... Shall I pat my back for it? :) thank u... Appreciated ur sweet feedback!!! N yes Jeremy is HOTTT
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Nice Update.,~!! Since u know u have confused us and asked to keep patience I would...but like the update specially VirMan moments...Looking forward for the mystery to unfold..Thanks for the PM..!!!



Ahem Virman ummm u gonna get plenty so don't worry abt it ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Supewrb...
Too good
awesome update
liked it...
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol so much cobfusing falsh bck n present n future loldo confuion n ckear this confusion plsss...:P
over all it is just fb intrstingi love vihannn haye name suggested by my virtat to achha hi hoga na lol...
love the part manvi talking to her princes
chho chwwet..love it do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345



Yes look at page 88 :)


thnk youuu👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...
loved vv bro part... dey r so adorabl...
oh ho... vihaan is in big troubl... plz dnt let him gt punished again...
he is so cute...
n plz unfold d mistry soon...
thanx 4 d pm dear...

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