[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow shocking update virat in jail...😲😲
now what will he do????
but I like the update...
where is manvi??😲
i'm really worrying about manvi...
I hope she is alright...
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz try to update soon...
I really can't wait to read next part...
Edited by manvilover18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345




Tu toh baat hi na kar kamini saitan >.< emo blackmail Bohot achi tarha karti hai kamini!

Don't worry u think this is evil? But I have more evil things thn this ^_____^


naiii u just cant say no to me 😛😆 of which i take advantage 😆

i knooo ur evil mind 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
Too different and too drama
Waiting to read it more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ow awesome story 😊
Loving it
Waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww another anaconda updt...by godd its so long...its always treat to read ur updts...thnx a lot fr this awesome 1

chumeshwari updt...super se bhi uper...manvis outburts was expected but virats POV was even wrong...yes he had a point she didnt stop him nor she protest...so she cant put all blame on him only...but but but some other took this as a advantage...that person raped her...nooo...no no i cant imagine my manvi like that...its so disgusting...i hope she is alright n will release virat frm jail...cont soon n thnx fr the pm
Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hummm i think i know what is coming next , but will wait for ur next update ...and the unknow guy when he answered that "i had a wild cat so she scratch me " i know what have you done ...arhhh in this one update u have changed the story upside down...but but but don't make my maanvi a bachari abla narri hell nooo...that can't be, now i m scared what if u seriously have stored in it , what i don't want... fariaaa but i know u can't maanvi is a jungli billi u know lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
..TDAY I M FEELING SOO DAMN LUCKY 😛

UPDATE FRM U 😃

👏...AWSME ...👏...


BRILLIANT IDEAS IN UR HEAD😆

WILL BE WAITING FR UR NEXT ONE😆SOONER





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Posted: 12 years ago
omg cnt believe that happenedfeel so bad for manvi- wat happened to manvi im so scared- is it wat i think it is poor virat i bet he's gonna get punished for the one mistake he never even did at all bt he has to be there for manvi nw - hope he gets out of the jail soon n i want him to find manvi nt raj jus wanna say ur tremendous- i am literally sooo into this story - its sooo exciting full of suspense bt still awesome n ur a fab writer tooi really cnt wait plz plz jaldi update karna 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Wowww another anaconda updt...by godd its so long...its always treat to read ur updts...thnx a lot fr this awesome 1

chumeshwari updt...super se bhi uper...manvis outburts was expected but virats POV was even wrong...yes he had a point she didnt stop him nor she protest...so she cant put all blame on him only...but but but some other took this as a advantage...that person raped her...nooo...no no i cant imagine my manvi like that...its so disgusting...i hope she is alright n will release virat frm jail...cont soon n thnx fr the pm



Thank u for the complement... Did u mean Virat POV was wrong or rite?


At this moment I'm not thinking about manvi... My boy is in jail gotta fix that first :p manvi can come later heheh JUST KIDDING!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SNTG

hummm i think i know what is coming next , but will wait for ur next update ...and the unknow guy when he answered that "i had a wild cat so she scratch me " i know what have you done ...arhhh in this one update u have changed the story upside down...but but but don't make my maanvi a bachari abla narri hell nooo...that can't be, now i m scared what if u seriously have stored in it , what i don't want... fariaaa but i know u can't maanvi is a jungli billi u know lol




Don't worry I'm more evil thn that :p writing part 9 now

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