[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 18

Originally posted by: Sumana123

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">Aiyyooo Its is Rocking da ...ohkkk I must say the truth ..since I just came across it today only ...so I havnt read all the chapters ..but I will read everything ..in next few hours ..but basically I read your last 3 updates ...And must say they are Rumba Solid...Awesome ..so many incidents happening ...Viraat charged with molesting whyyyand Maanvi missing ...So Suspense has built up ..great...I m looking forward to the secrets to be revealed ..I have a feeling this a story with Dark sheds ..so I might soon see Viraat taking revenge on Maanvi right ??😉</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">Sumana</font>

Originally posted by: vamps1996

<font color="#990033">roflll🤣not my mistake lol its all ir bak baks fault na more than the update its fun to read what u write in the middle of it😉</font>

<font color="#990033">i sooo knew about this molesting thing when part 1 ended ... but hayee this suspense is going to kill me fariaaa sach mein UNKNOWN PERSON!!!!😲ur soo zalim gona make us wait till next update for it pshhh neva mind will wait and will pray that u write on ur phone again so we can get a fifteen page update hahahahaha</font>

<font color="#990033">but the upadte was awsomeee loved it and</font>People say nothing is impossible in this world but making that impossible task trun into a possible thing is not easy! You may cure any disease by proper medication but can you repair a wounded soul? is there any medicine to repair a broken heart n a wounded soul?this was my fav part

Originally posted by: sweettasi

👏huff aiyoo hands r paining da...bt u deserve more dan dis girl...i mean every bloody freaking dialog was bang on...👏👏another claps for dat...u r an awesome writer ya...i mean lyk seriously u should contact sid sir for writing d scripts no wonder trps will surely rise...nd ur money to...lolz

k enough of so much praising nhi to u will becum diabetic patient ...

cuming to d update lyk i said sundari it was bang on da...itna sab kuch ho gya ji...bicahra humara virat humko bahut sad lagta ji...😭

nd i guess dat unknown person did something with manvi lyk bollywood masla uski izat k sath khilwad nd all bt i dont want this to happen ya...otherwise poor manvi will surely die nd my poor viru boy will fall into really serious panga...nhiii esha nhi ho sakta g...i knw tum hone nhi dega ji...ya i knw my guessing power is so poor now...so plz ya continue soon da...

PS. hey faria yesterday i was watching tacker's b'day interview in which he got ur gift to dat black t...nd after reading ur name he was luk " i lyk her name ya faria kushal tacker yani adhi meri nd adhi kushal ki..." nd i was luk aww kya pyar hai dono bhaiyo ka...😉

Originally posted by: sweettasi

hey faria I have un-res my cument...

Originally posted by: Faria12345

"she is half mine half kushal's "iT WAS me babyyy ^_____________^

Hahah yes too much tarif diabetes hojayega lol but thank u!!!! For Bollywood masala lol that's old fashion :p I got more evil stuff coming up

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

OMGOD! Ye tuhne kya kiyaaa😲

Kaminiii go dieee nd torture yourself! how dare youuu how dare you put him in jail😡😭

and did that kamina mystery guy rape Manvi nd blame it on Virat

Have to say was amazinggg loved ittt

chal now updateee soonnn🤣

-Luv Pari