[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 20

Originally posted by: jinaku

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Thank you <3

Originally posted by: jannat89

superb update dear
Too different and too drama
Waiting to read it more

Will update soon

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

naiii u just cant say no to me😛😆of which i take advantage😆

i knooo ur evil mind😡

Badi ayeee advantage wali >.< I won't give u anything until u give me urs! Humph

Hi all... Reading all of your comments n its so overwhelming to know that u all liked it .. So thank you for that... Now I decided to change my ideas for chapter 9! All thanks to u all ^____________^ but hope u like it n I can manage to live up to ur expectation :)

so sweet of unow eagerly waiting for update 😃

Promo is coming up!!!! Stay tuned.. Posting in 10 mins

Promo...feel the emotion :)

You know I hate this fact about myself.. That I can't wait >.< so u all get an advantage >.< here is the promo enjoy!


"Oh manvi... Thank god I found you..", Raj said with a relive

"r you ok??? Where were you?? And what happen between U n virat? I mean everything is so messed up... He is in jail and you disappeared.. Please tell me nothing bad happen"

He was sweating alot.. this boy is actually a good friend. A friend in need when a friend in deed. He didn't rest once since virat was in jail. He was searching for Manvi like crazy...
Can u find a friend like him in this 21st century ? Where people always see their advantage first and then think for others.
Well virat is no less then that he found a twin brother in him so since they became friend they are known as shadow :p

And why am I telling u this? Cuz u need to know in future it will reflect back ;) but u don't have to worry bout that.

Continue reading...

"manvi... Hey speak up", he tapped her shoulder with concern.

She Came out of her deep thought n replied "I'm okey"

Raj- thank god.. Now please come with me my boy is in jail since yesterday n I can't wait to bring him back.

M- was silent

R- khaha kho gayee?? Chalooo.. He literary dragged her n both zoomed away


L.A Police Station

Raj enter the office with a big smile on his face.. While manvi kept silent.

Raj- officer! Get my friend out rite now.

Lisa/officer- do u think this is a toy machine? Reduce your tone or else I will lock you up.

R- poor boy over excited is not good..so he sighed n said "no Ma'am, I know where I stand. But you don't know whom I brought with me. "

Lisa- confused.

R-This is Manvi Chaudhary, the victim. And she wanted to take her complain back.

Lisa- she smiled, R you sure?
Miss Manvi Chaudhary you wanna take your complain back?

M- nodded.

Lisa - with a smile she said "well then sign this paper which says I Agree that Virat Vadhera was not guilty.

And if you change your mind incase thn sing this which states "by all means Virat Singh Vadhera is guilty"

Till then I bring back your friend.

Raj- hugged her tight almost crushing her bones.
Thank you manvi... God bless you.

Virat's Cell

Lisa- ahem.. She cleared her throat n said "vadhera I guess this place doesn't suit you well"

V- looked at her in confusion.. "what you mean"

L- show me your smile. The Victim is here to take her complain back.

V- what? He looked down n a wide smile flashed on her face. He said Thank you.

L- don't thank me .. Thank that girl.
V- I will... This made him so happy that he forgot all the hatred for manvi... He wanted to give her a bone breaking hug even a Sweet kiss if she allowed :p
Finally he don't have to spend the vicious nightmare.. His career is not in line any more... Now he can make his family proud and live a peaceful life...

L- you wanna stay here?

V- what.. No way.. I'm so done with thi shitty place.

L- then come on.. Or else this cell won't live you forever.

V- he chuckled and walked with her..


Desk area.

raj- he ran n jumped on virat giving him a tight hug..."viraaat..."


V- wow...Gay maat ban... Control

Raj- oh shut up... Do u even know what I have been thru? U gotta pay for all my hard work.. Has been roaming around like a lost soul.. Pheww now finally can relax. I want a party a big one..

V- u r crazy.. Will give one for sure...

Raj- u better... N yesss now I can crump this paper n shove it on princy's mouth..

V- what? What's that?

Raj- your termination letter ... Aur kya...

V- his heart skipped a bit..

Raj- oyeee chill maar, abb iski koi jarurat nehi...

V- he smiled n said "yeh"

R- let's go I'm so hungry..
V- let's go n they move forward and stood in front of Manvi.

Lisa- hey wait... You can't go...

Both virat and raj looked at her with a confuse look..

L- Miss manvi you didn't sign the paper.

Raj- phewww officer u scared me.. Manvi go sing the paper.

M- she looked at him n walk toward the desk and signed the paper.

R- now we can go? Let's go virat..

L- miss manvi???

M- walk toward Virat n said "officer I don't want any mercy for this bas***d. Do everything possible to make him suffer n Rot in the cell. In fact I want him to hang till death.."
She said each n every word in pain.. Her eyes was red... If she can she was gonna murder him rite away...

V- didn't blink once while she was talking.

M- she walked by him.
V- he hold her wrist n brought her back to the same spot where she was standing a second ago.
"Thank you" and he smiled.

M- have a good life inside.

V- I will.. You have a great life too... And he gave his last sweetest smile and walked back to his Cell.

M- that left her amazed.. There was a lot hidden in that smile...
But she couldn't figure out...
She felt like he was a lifeless body with no heart. Someone torn his soul n burn into ashes.. Could see a lifeless ,hopeless, dead person...

But why she is thinking that after whatever he did that last night.. This kind of human should not allowed to live... They should be punished until their last Breath.

Her thoughts were broken by a voice..

V- "Raj... Your party is being postponed... May be in next life will give one. Take care buddy and thank you" saying That he disappeared from the venue.

R- cursed himself for bringing manvi here... He couldnt take the fact that he just lost his friend ... Forever maybe... So he just walked away...



I know u love me sooo much! I love you tooo! Muaaah XO XO..
Kaminooo galiyaaa maat denaaa n don't say go die cuz then you won't get any update..

OMG u know I love my phone so damn much that I don't let it out of my sight for 1 min :p but right now feeling like crushing it >.< this is crazyyy I'm afraid I might write 20 pages for this update... Kill me!!! God so much to explain.. So much going on ... Hating my self for writing this One mistake... Screw that... I quit!

Abhi DON'T U DARE TO SAY UPDATE SOON cuz I didn't even finish the 2nd paragraph n wrote this promo! Oh god I'm so dead!!! Tch tch me.

give me something to bang my head dear...