[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 17

Originally posted by: virmanhus

OMG!!!!!!!!!! dat was bloody brilliant!!!!!

u really have a rocking brain!! the way u wiped away virat's guilt & proved manvi dat she too is an equal contributer to the awkward moments were mindblowing!!!

mahnnn this piece is more than perfect!!

u grabbed alot of time in virat saving manvi on conditions,, it showed her extreme EGO & his extreme need to fix up the issue... again she leaving the place vtout listening to him, not giving a bit of thought to the condition showed how arrogant, egiostic, rude & attitudinal she is and at the same time, not to forget, it shows dat how much she's hurt & hates virat for watever happend.

very clever of u to deliver their character thru their actions..

dat slap was epic!! but never thought dat he wud come back...

salute to his patience!! u just made virat the gud one & manvi the rude in this chap ryt??

ofcoz the highlight of the update is this & the following incident ''I was wrong to regret for my action and If I really wanna regret something I wanna REGRET this''

by this u made virat to prove manvi her role in the mistake...

u are damn clever!! keep up the excellent job!!!

and i LOVE ur pranks & enjoy them alot..

''Ops she died the end :/ RIP Manvi'' hilarious, delivers ur uniqueness.. i love it & enjoy it.. u really are funny!!

and ''Unknown person: Virat Vadhera... You so gonna regret this.'' u cant do this... wat are u trying to do?? are u trying to do watever a typical mind does at such an incident?? i mean planning to suck our blood giving another horrible mistake??? if so nooo u cant.. u shudnt!! how can u say enjoy pausing at such a place??? i wud love manvi to get up from that place & run away.. or are u planning dis unknown character to rescord watever happend & spoil the couple's character.. or completely a different motive??

plss make the next part quick...

and yeah um happpyyy that i happend to be the first to press the like button & comment.😛.

awaiting the next part impatiently...

get going!!

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Eeekksss thank u for the long comment! N CORRECT u got me right :) always remember a clap doesn't happen with one hand only :p hehehe well she was at fault tooo!!! N yes I made her rude n virat good on purpose like I said whatever u will read from this point will be intentional :)

N for the new character n his deeds lol just wait n watch. Will update the last section very soon!

Originally posted by: virmanhus

waiting... want to really badly know about dat new character

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">what the hell was that gosh itna sab kuch ho gaya😲😲
the update was just bang on just awesome with soo much of twist and turns...
shocking stuffs and few least expected things...
that part wer manvi was hanging from the cliff that was just so damn funny specially their convos sacchi itni difficult situation mein bhi virat ko mazak soojh raha tha aur flirting bhi bechari manvi😆😆
and those same doubts which all have i too have it dunt wanna repeat them and irritate yu😆
awesome update very well written👏👏
update next part soon thanx alott for the update and the pm tooo😊</font>