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nice teaser but confusing
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Sorry for the confusion guys :/ update will be soon then u won't be confuse
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fariaaa eeksss banner seems amzzzinnnggg <3 better update soon :-p hhehehehe waiting for it hayee
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heyyy faria!!! Auchaaa long update!! Sorry!!! M late but der aaye duruat aye!!! Lovely update!! :P but *Hides* haha!! U were almost giving ahem ahem scene!! Hhaha!! But warning k saath !! Pheuuu!! Hahah!! *Not my type* I was imagining our killer virat in towel !! But what a grip towel had !! :P *sigh* :-D hahha!! Goddd!! Kaminii U made me besharam!! :-D badtameez dil ;) but as always loved the update!! Keep updating ! :D

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<font color="#003366" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">heyyy faria!!! Auchaaa long update!! Sorry!!! M late but der aaye duruat aye!!! Lovely update!! :P but *Hides* haha!! U were almost giving ahem ahem scene!! Hhaha!! But warning k saath !! Pheuuu!! Hahah!! *Not my type* I was imagining our killer virat in towel !! But what a grip towel had !! :P *sigh* :-D hahha!! Goddd!! Kaminii U made me besharam!! :-D badtameez dil ;) but as always loved the update!! Keep updating ! :D </font>

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U were prohibited to imagine that remember I warned u all :p tch tch lol but thanks for the feedback ;) update will be today I think
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a very confusing yet interesting teaser itwas
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Read this story in one go... nd i definitely loved this one 😃
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Read this story in one go... nd i definitely loved this one😃

This is sch a great story..!!
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Read in one go phewww haha. Thank u :) might update today .. Still writing :/
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Banner is up ... It gives u a clue to upcoming events of One Mistake n I added Jenna n Raj's character sketch on page 1 :p do check it :))



Dedicated to my Boomstick Pari :)

Aiyooo kamini bohot tang karta Ji tch tch.. Muaaah



Part 8
Aiyoo sundaries how are u all??? Hope u all r rocking as always. I saw everyone was confused by reading the Teaser. But not to worry, u will know the real motive of that teaser at the end :)
Today won't give a free speech so just go ahead n read. I'll see u guys down there :)

Oh yeh b4 you go just to let u know from this point whatever u will read, it will be intentional and will reflect the future :) so pay attention
Till then adios


Recap:

A beautiful rainy day turn into a gloomy sad day when virat crossed his boundary n did the unexpected. Unexpected things leads to a bitter relationship and it's up to u how u balance it out. Will manvi ever forgive him for his deeds? Is he gonna regret for his action? R u gonna see a bright virman future or it will end here? Was it that one mistake???


When her phone ranged for the 2nd time, she ran out of her room slamming the front door.


V- "manvi" blurred out from his mouth.. At that time he couldn't do anything except stand there and watch her going.. For a moment his heart stopped watching her going away leaving him speechless n numb... An unhidden fear was sending chills in his body..Was he guilty?


M- ran out of that room and ran until she reached the dead end... She ran all the way near the jungle area n broke down completely.. She started to cry her heart out.. Drenching in rain..clenching in pain.. Somewhere inside a part of her was dead.. But Wat was it she couldn't figure it out.She recalled every single moment of last couple hours. Their close up moments. The great fall.. Virat nuzzling n kissing her... N thn finally his deadly sin.

She screamed out loud until her voice gave up..tears weren't stoping, her eyes n nose became red.. Face was pale u can see her vain's on her neck..her lips were dried n was quivering due to over crying.. Remembering His close encounters was making her crazy, and then suddenly she started to act crazy by rubbing her body trying to erase his touches..But how can someone erase that?

Manvi hated the fact that she let him overpower her by giving him a chance n losing herself on him...letting him do whatever he wanted... But how could she? She was a control freak girl n no one dare to come close to her unless she gave permission or it was her wish... Then how dare he came closer? She didnt give him that permission or did she? Y did he do that?? What was his intention?

All those questions were haunting her .. Her hiccups were making her breathless... She kneeled down n clutched her knees hiding her face

Few minutes later
"manvi" she felt some one touched her shoulder.. She looked up and stood up instantly...

Started to take long breaths. She backed out saying "don't come near me"

V- manvi listen "I'm sorry... I shouldn't have done that but"

M- stop it... Leave ...just Go away... I don't wanna see your face...

V- manvi ek baar mere baat suno...

M- wanted to yell at himbut couldnt her voice wasn't coming out.. She stepped back and wobbled on the edge of that hill..

V- stop moving u will fall
M- was about to say get lost but "aaa"
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Ops she died the end :/ RIP Manvi
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V- "y don't u listen manvi ?" he said in a soft voice, holding her wrist stoping her from falling

M- leave me...
V- u sure u wanna die?
M- she looked down.. Freaked out she was way too high. If she falls no one will able to find her flesh. She gulped down n looked at him n answered "yes.. Its better to die than u save me". However,her eyes was saying "u freak head pull me up"

V- yes? OK..As u wish and He loosened his grip
M- aaa... She hold his hand tightly as she could ..

V- u said u don't wanna live then y r u holding my hand? I'm helping you to stick to ur wise decision.

M- f**k you..
v- wooo language, you really wanna die don't u..And he loosened his grip once again.. Making her bend down more n scaring her to the max.

M- viraaat...
V- yes baby..
M- looked at him with helpless glare.. She wanted to say "save me" but her ego didn't let her...so she gathered all the strength n tried to get up but slipped down more cuz the mud was sticky due to heavy rainfall

V- ego is ur pride isn't it? Instead of struggling u can just ask for help.
M- never, not even over my dead body.
V- dead body milegi tab na... Waise try karke dekh sakti ho.. And he gave a mischief smirk
M- I don't need your help! Leave my hand.
V- I didn't hold it, you r holding it
M- she looked at his hands n cursed her luck. Y god is being so merciless?
V-ok ok Miss ego i get it u won't ask for help. But if u want we can have a deal.
M- deal my foot
V- U ate extra chilies didnt u? Well I love girls who loveee chillies cuz they look hot.

M- "can I kill him now? Is it the right time to flirt?? Or say what the hell he loves??" she thought
V- so miss tikhi mirchi... My condition is after I save u, u have to listen to my POV of whatever happen in last hours. You can't run nor ignore me just listen to me first thn u may decide if I was wrong or do whatever u wanna do

M- hell shock! "This boy is actually crazy I'm dying here n he is forcing me to say YES to his conditions?"


By the time rain stopped n the sun shine n the rainbow made that environment look extra charming

V- I don't have whole day
so say it quick

M- "I will kill u... just let me come out of this situation" mumbled under her breath

V- o haaalooo come back to earth u may dream about me later. Jaldi bolo .. U r too heavy man.

M- u... Said in a angry tone
V- "I know I'm the best", he retort back

M- I don't give a crap to ur condition

V- ok then seee ya in heaven n he released his left hand n hold her with just right hand.
M- she clutched his wrist like a hawks do to their food.

V- wanna let that "E" go out of that ego? Cuz right now u are helpless babes! And I can't hold u back with just one hand.

M-looked at him with a deadly glare, still holding him tight... She gulped down her Ego n said in a low tone "Ok I will."

V- good girl, he pulled her up with all his strength. She was a fragile little creature so her weight wasn't that high enough n if he wanted he could have hold her like that for hours.

M- crashed her head on his chest. Holding his shirt tight, breathing heavily .. Her eyes was shut... She didn't care whom she was holding only thing she cared was that She is Safe!

V- hold her waist with one hand n caressed her back with the other hand. "calm down... You r alive"

M- she was lost in his embrace once again.. For 10 mins or so she didnt move but rested her head on his chest calming her heart.. Don't know why but she felt good staying like that.

V- I have to agree one thing that ur hug can break anyone's bones :p

M- she opened her eyes, thought for a second and then pushed him hard

V- wow.. What's wrong with you? Y showing mood swings? Pregnant ho? Yah phir female problem?

M- she turned around n started to walk. Ignoring him completely.

V- hey you can't go like that

M- she didn't look back nor commented just kept on walking.

V- double crossed her n pinned her against a maple tree.

M- leave me u B*
V- before she could finish her word he came really close to her face...
M- she hold her breath.. He was 1 inch away from her lips. His nose was already touching hers.

V- seeing her struggling with breathing he stepped back n let her breathe..but kept his hands on the branch so she cant run away..
I told u b4 I won't let u go until I finish what I wanted to say.

M- took a long breath n said, "that's all you can do huh? over power me.. But I'm not your puppet u can't control me"

V- learn to listen Manvi. If u don't give a chance then how will you know if I was right or not?

M-right or wrong? Whatever u did was just disgusting and don't u dare take my name! My name sounds like a curse when it comes from ur mouth.

V- y don't you understand damn it.

M- "don't u get it? U disgust me. I feel like puking whenever u are near me. You are a play boy but I'm not the girl to play with.. Find someone else who can stoop down to ur level" saying that she banged his hands from the Maple tree n walked away but again he hold her wrist and brought her back to the same position

V- I'm not the person whom u are thinking. I just wanted to say sorry but you...Bam!
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She slapped him so hard that he got a small cut by his lips.

V- turned around and stared at her with a blank face

M- don't u dare to touch me again u filthy creature. Ur existence is a curse itself! Just tolerating u cuz u r my D... She stopped didn't continue..

V- his head was down.

M- why u are here? To say sorry, to regret ? Yah right! If u really wanted to regret then u shouldn't have forced me but wud have given me some time to settle down.. But ... Next time don't dare to cross my way or else it will be your last day.
She left him speechless n walked back to her room

Is he really that bad like Manvi said?
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She was by the parking lot when someone hold her waist from behind, covered her mouth and dragged her toward an empty garage..

M- was struggling to free herself but that person was stronger then her.
The garage was pitch dark inside, she got more scare and her eyes got wet.

That guy released her from his grip, dropping her on the floor. He turn on the switch n manvi was shock for a second but she should have expected that person...It was him... who else can stoop down to this level other then him??


It was Virat Singh Vadhera!

She got up n wiped off her tears. He Was staring at her without blinking. An unknown expression was flashing his face; she couldn't figure out if it was an angry boy look or an evil demon.

He started to move forward as she step back.. His eyes was burning like a Lava. Those blood shot glares were sending her a bad vibe to Her leading her to have goosebumps.

When they were almost near the back wall she tried to run away but virat blocked her placing both of his hands on the wall.

Each passing second manvi's heart raced faster then the previous one. She was sweating .. Her nerves got cold. Only sound which was echoing in that garage was her heart beats.
She wanted to say sometime but his glare was strong enough to make her shut

All of a sudden he came close... close
Enough to touch her lips.
By now her heart wasn't stuck in her body but it felt on the ground.She closed her eyes unable to Handle their approximate closeness.. Clutched her shorts n started to exhale shallow breaths. Gulping down Her fears..

For one min or so he didn't move but stayed there watching her go weak on each passing second.. Hearing her heart beats thumping abnormally.. feeling her shallow breaths on his lips. Watching her numb face go blue. Although she was not in her normal state but she looked more gorgeous then before...
Her hair was wet n her cloths were wet too... She had some sprinkle of water on her lips which made her look very delicious...

V- he removed his hand from the wall n hold her curves with affection..

If he doesn't move right now then she may pass out any moment.

V- he moved forward almost brushing her lips but then he slide down and move closer to her ears.

M- she was sweating from head to toe. Indeed this boy can make her Rest In Peace.

V- "you got me right. I'm the evil monster that no one wants to encounter and if I want to I can make your life a living hell. So don't try my patience " he said in a husky yet scary Voice.

M- she was numb for a time being but then suddenly her blood boiled n her inside tigress woke up.

"U b****** " she pushed him so hard that he got poked by a pointed iron rod on his back.

V- he hissed in pain but didn't let her see his expression. He stood up straight and walk toward her again sending her 440 bolts of electric shocks with his deadly eyes.

M- With no option left she started to throw things at him.. Making him stop his moves.

V-but he dodged them all..
" not so soon dear! I'm not finish with you." said with an evil smirk

M- she got goosebumps hearing him saying that. Is he really gonna make me live the horrible nightmare?

She controlled her thoughts b4 it bounce off n reach to an unwanted conclusion. With fortitude she spoke, "look I have no time for u neither I wish to hear any word from you so plz back off" she tried to cool down the situation! ( clever move don't make some one angry when they are already angry)

V- well well well.. U need to calm ur temper down cuz if I show mine I don't think u can handle it.

M- what the F do u think of your self huh? U think u can do anything u want? All those bull shit u did back in the forest was just for the sake.. Ur real motive was this na take advantage of me? Let me tell you one thing. u dare to touch me I will kick your ass.

V- he chuckled at her reaction.
You really don't have any brain. God forgot to fit the device in ur head but don't worry I will enlighten you.

M- go to hell. She walk toward the shutter n tried to open it but he came from behind n closed it with his foot.
His intensions doesn't seem right isn't it? :p

V- y so hurry baby ? u r not running in a marathon.

M- u.. She saw a a iron rod beside her n hit him with all her strength
But poor her it didn't even touch him, before it hit his head he got hold of it. And he threw it away. That made her more nervous n she tripped on the floor.
She found a broken bottle beer bottle so she got up n said "you come near me it will be ur last day so let me go"
V- but he was unstoppable he didn't care what she was carrying .. He got hold of that bottle in the process he cut his hand .. He threw it away n once again he hold her hands crossing them against her back!

M- u monster leave me... Urghhh... She stomped on his foot.

V- u bitch. he drag her near the wall n pinned her holding her tight.

M- leave me... Aaah

V- you really don't like to listen in good manner rite? if thats the way you will listen then here it is.

M- she was struggling but his grip was harsh.. His grip left some finger marks on her hand n his blood marks too.

M- leave me... You are hurting me.

V- he came near her ear n whispered "you have no clue what I can do to you now, so if u wanna show ur face to the world don't utter a word"

M- his words were piercing her heart.

V- "it doesn't take long to do a sin but it takes ages to do good deeds n stay pure...SO choice is yours ..ur action will reflect my reaction so u decide whether u want to bare the deadly torture or live peacefully"

M- she knew what he meant so she didn't move or rebel for her freedom.

V- he let her free..
I didn't wanted to do all this but u left me with no choice.

What the hell do you think of yourself huh? Think twice b4 pointing fingers at me. And what did u say "Im a play boy n my presence wanna make u puke.. I disgust u"

Sure I'm one n I won't mind taking the credit but Wat r u then? U r not an angel either ... Oh yaYou were so pure that ur eyes didn't blink once while u were checking me out. Right? I get it I was wrong to come close to u BUT u didn't stop me either. Do You know why? Cuz u were enjoying it and wanted that to continue.

And as far as guilty an regret concerned yes I did feel guilty for my action ...for touching, and that's y came running to check if u were ok or not. But hey it was my fault! I shouldn't have come n make u understand that whatever happen it wasn't intentional but it just happen cuz the consequences were awkward.

M- she wanted to say something but he came closer n she shut her mouth.

V- looking straight to her eyes he spoke, "I had a reason to Touch u.. U were biting me like a vampire when I said stop u didn't so I had to do something ... And for not letting u go.. Hmph u r the one who hold my towel I didn't force you. And as a matter of fact if ur phone wouldn't have ranged u wasn't gonna stop me rite?"

M- lowered herglares.

V- Hold on why even I'm explaining to u? U r an Egoistic self centered brainless women will never understand me..

He walked away...

M- stood there numb dissolving his facts. Tried to say something but
He returned back.

V- I was wrong to regret for my action and If I really wanna regret something I wanna REGRET this...

He hold her hands and pulled her closer .. crushed his lips on hers. She struggled for air and tried to break apart but he was a wild one n a strong one 2. It was a forceful kiss but after a while he cooled down n kissed her softly... Manvi also stop fighting with him n just went with a flow..
He cupped her faced with affection which melted her heart n she let him to taste each part of her mouth.. Both were in different world.. Their encounters were surely creating a sensational feature...
Both of them got wild n kissed each other passionately like a honeymoon couple :p
She hold his shoulder n he hold her waist.

O hello u Besharam girls come back to earth now! Too much cosy scenes u getting >.< but don't worry I'm too good to give u more :p
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But then something happen ... virat pushed her with a jerk and just walked away...

M-she was completely shock. Did she just made the mistake again??? She let him come close to her again!! N this time she wanted too... But the outcome wasn't good.. N Wat did he do? Left her alone...
she kneeled down and her buckets of tears started to flow.. Some part of her heart was broken. She didn't wanted this but y did it feel good?? Y every time she can't control herself from falling for his charm???
How come the person she hates the most is making her weak everytime??? Y does his touch affect her so much that she forget what she is up to n go with his flow ??? Y ???
She had no answers to all this except flowing her tears n flooding the floor!


V- opened the garage n got out... on the way he banged the shutter which made manvi shiver.


He walk straight to the bar!

Meantime someone was sneaking in the garage area.

Unknown person: Virat Vadhera... You so gonna regret this.
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Can u guess what will happen next?
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NYFA Bar.

One more please.. He slammed the vodka glass on the counter n told the bartender for another shot.

Viraat... Kya karaha hai??? Itna Kyu pee raha haii??? Tu thik toh hai na??

V- hmmm I'm alright..just having fun raj! Join me...
Raj- virat he placed his hand on his shoulder n took it off instantly...

Arre tujhe toh bukhaar hai??? N y u r wet??? Wat happen yaar???

V- I'm just fine!


TO BE CONTINUED!

I'm too sleepy will finish it tomorrow till thn enjoy ^___^
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Continuing from above...

V- hmmm I'm alright..just having fun raj! Join me...
Raj- virat he placed his hand on his shoulder n took it off instantly...

Arre tujhe toh bukhaar hai??? N y u r wet??? Wat happen yaar???

V- I'm just fine!

Raj- virat let's go.. He hold his wrist.. WTH how did u get injure??? Hua kya hai??? R u ok????
N it's bleeding tooo.. Viraaat..

V- hmmm.. Flashback of him kissing her was hovering his head... Wherever he looked he only saw her tears.. Her angry face.. Helpless feature...
He stomped the glass which almost cracked but didn't break...
"give me more" he shouted at the bartender.

Bartender was serving it but he snatched the bottle from him n started to gulp it down...

Raj- viraaat... Kya karaha hai chor isse... Itna Kyu pee raha hai...
He tried to snatch the bottle but he finished half of it..

God.. This is crazy.. What to do...
Ha.. Only he can control him.. He dialed a number n called someone..


Meantime that unknown guy entered the garage n shut it down :p


Bar

Raj- ha plz usse baat karo..
Virat... Talk..
V- I don't wanna talk..
Raj- virat viren bhai hai...
V- he looked at him with a deadly glare but the alcohol was making him weak.. So he grabbed a glass of water n splashed on his face..

Raj- virat baat kar..
V- nehi karnA.. Bol de Mai nehi hu...
Raj- ok. He press the Speaker button.

Viren (Vv) virat pick up the phone. Now!

V- virat is no more... I don't know virat...

Vv- raj can u please place the phone on the counter n give us some moment please..

Raj- yah sure... He kept the phone in front of his eyes n left .. Rushing to the clinic for First Aid.

Vv- Virat I don't know what happen but just wanna say don't let consequences to harm your self esteem. If u did something wrong then apologize. Leave it move on n wait for that time to come when everything will be fixed. Don't just harm yourself just cuz you can't handle the situation.

V- he picked up the phone.. "Bhai" He said in a baby tone

Vv- who hurt you virat?

V- I hate her bhai... More thn that I hate myself... Y did I do that bhai??? Y can't I control my anger???

Vv- "I hate her??" ab yeh ladki ka kya chakkar hai?? Virat tu kya Bol rahai hai saf saf bata...

V- he was feeling dizzy.. Was blinking constantly trying to stay away.,, bhai vo...


"MR. VIRAT SINGH VADHERA

You are under arrest" some one said from behind.

He turn around and cut the call.

Viren- hello virat...cut dia?
He dialed the number once again!
Bit no one picked it up


Virat stood up from the chair..

Officer... What are you talking about?

Here raj came running holding the first aid box.

Police? He walk forward and saw the officer was making him wear the handcuffs.


Raj- officer what's going on??? Y u r taking him??

Virat- wasn't in his senses. So he didn't say anything.

Officer- he has been charged for Molesting Miss Manvi Chaudhary!

Raj- whattt???
Even their surrounding also blurred out "what"
However only couple of people were there cuz of the rain.

Raj- what u talking about??? Where is the Arrest warrant?

Office- we don't arrest anyone without that. So here It is...
N you drunk aid lets go.. Party in jail. Saying that he drag him..


On the way virat stopped n told Raj "bhai should not know this" n thn the officer took him out... He walked thru the NYFA ground where everyone was out. Each of them was shock to core. I mean the boy who never had a criminal record like drunk driving or even a speed limit charge has been handcuffed n being taken by police.

BREAKING NEWS!

Raj stood there numb unable to dissolve the reality. Virat was a good flirt a bad boy but he never break a rule ok being late doesn't count as rule but HE IS FROM A LAWYER FAMILY!!! This is messed up! N now he can't even tell Viren. N if he do what will they do??? N where is this manvi???? n molest her? What???

Everyone started to gossip
N in no time the whole academy got to know about this matter.

Raj followed the police car .. They were inside the police station.

Virat was unconscious by then. Some Officers helped him n got him change... He was wearing those criminal cloths like the movie in Don 2/ SRK one the orange one ^__^

Raj- his heart sank seeing him in that attire..

NOTE: in reality it doesn't work this way USA police don't let the criminals wear jail cloths until they had the trial or being consider as CRIMINAL by the judge.
But this is my story so I will change all the rules. However they made him wear that cuz his cloths were wet, he was injured n Jail is not a mall they don't have alternative cloths :)


Raj- I want to apply for bail sir can u help me with good advocate

Officer- he smirked! Well sorry my boy it's already is 5 o clock.. meeting time is over so does te court is closed...so hard luck! You gotta wait till tomorrow morning .. Oh wait tomorrow is SUNDAY!!! Court will be closed too.. Your friend has bad luck! There is nothing I can do.

Raj- face palm. OMG... What to do now??? Virat will be in jail for more then a day?? What??


Sir is there any way I can help him??? Please help me out he is innocent.

Officer- one n only way. Tell the victim to take her complain back .. Then he will be released. But I don't think that will happen soon cuz SHE IS THE VICTIM! And ur friend will rot in jail. He deserves it so u may leave now.

Raj- waned to punch him sooo bad but he was helpless. Now he gotta find manvi... So he rush to NyFa


4 hours later..

Unknown person:
Hey buddy.. What's going on ways the catch? Y people r doing OMG!

Random boy- oh u don't know virat has been charged for molesting the new chick!

Unknown person- who?
Random boy- that London girl, Manvi.

UNknown person- oh.. Hmmm well everyone gets paid back for their deed.

Random boy- huh Wat?
Up- nothing.. Well I'm tired.. U know had SOO MUCH FUN last couple of hours..

Random boy- yah?? Wow what's that scar in ur neck?

UP- he hid with his collar and said "nothing I had a wild cat so she scratch me:p"

RB- u won't change na..
UP- never... Anyways.. See ya.. I'm tired need a drink.



It has been 6 hours or so but Raj couldn't find Manvi... Where is she?
Here he can't tell viren cux it's already late n what will they do from India? They can't come rite now...
But he didn't lose hope, he searched for her till the dawn.


On the other hand, that breaking news shaked the whole reputation for NYFA! Princy came back n printed Virat Singh Vadhera's Termination later! He has been suspended... Don't think he will ever get a chance to work in a film industry cuz no school will take him.

The night shift.. He was knocked out the whole night.

It was 5:30s Am when he opened his eyes.

V- aah my head. He sat down n looked close...

He saw a man in uniform was coming toward him. He open the cellar n got inside.
The moment that officer enter, he stood up still realizing the fact where he stand.. He was in a small room where no windows but a small ventilation.. It wasn't an apartment room or hospital IT WAS DAMN CELL! He was in jail!!!!!
Hold on!!! No that's not right.. He is in jail... No no no... It can't be he looked at his cloths n his Heart skipped a beat. REALITY CHECK! Y the hell am I in jail?? No clue.
Before he cud think anything that officer speak up in a sweet voice.

Officer- hello big guy. I'm Inspector Lisa and I'm in charge of this jail.
Here have breakfast u seem hungry... Have food u need energy cux u got a longgg way to go. She passed a small smile n left him alone wondering.


V- what the hell is going on?? What happen yesterday?? He tried hard but couldn't recall. Thn his eyes glanced at the tray ..
There was a bowl of oat meal, a glass of milk, and a bowl of fruit loops along with water n Lemonade.

Lemonade? I assume criminals don't get special treatment. Than what's that lemonade role in that?

Ahem clears throat. U saw the E pic na in the banner? That's LISA!


Hawww kaminiii... I know u r giving me galiyas.. Thinking I will do a love triangle?

Oye u over thinkers cut it out! 1980s ki movie hai kya ? LOVE TRIANGLe Psh so old fashion.
Triangle toh tab hoga jab Virman ke love story hogi! Remember VIRAT don't believe in love? HOWEVER, Lisa will play an important role! But u don't have to worry about that NOW.

Ps: I'm requesting u DO NOT bash Elena or else I will make ur lemon juice n gulp it down! U don't know me I'm so good but when I'm a bitch I will kick ur ass! And yes I just needed a pic of another girl other thn manvi so she was the last option therefore please don't comment on personal stuff!
Thank u.. Ok sorry for all the sarcasm now read ahead.

Ok where was I? Oh ya in jail..

Virat gulped down the lemonade n sat down thinking .. Trying to recall what exactly happened last night...

He recalled what happen inside the garage n clutched his fist. Then he was drinking... Thn talked to bhai? And the police came... Urghhh...


Police came then what??? His visions were blurry.. Think virat think... "He has been changed for molesting Manvi Chaudhary"
He stood up .. Ruffled his hair.. Being charge for molesting manvi??
What no.. Think again virat... But again n aginnn " molesting manvi" echoed his brain...

He banged his hand on the wall n his wound again started to bleed. Ps they did the first aid when he was sleeping,

Y manvi y??? I didn't do anything... God...

In FREAKEN 2 days his life turned upside down...

First, his vacation got ruined! 4 years of waiting to see his family got extended... He become a good boy for his trainer (good thing), he break thru girls hostel in the middle of the night... Kissed a girl... Got slap from her :O said sorry tooo (rare case) n thn ends up being in JAIL for no damn reason???? N now he is terminated from his school too (he don't know yet)
all cuz of that ONE girl, MANVI CHAUDHARY... That gives him all the right to hate her to the max.

"I'm finished... I'm just finished... " he could sense the consequence of this event...which is he might get suspended

"you are a curse in my life Manvi... I will never forgive u" saying that he kicked the table n all the food shattered in the ground... He sat down holding his head... He didn't wanted to cry but his eyes were red n teary. He forecast the future..

Receiving his termination letter... Pain in his families eyes.. Pride of Vadhera family shattering into billion pieces and his gloomy depressing future.


Phewww! Ok I saw everyone was CONFUSED by the teaser.. Well u suppose to be confused cuz I gave u something out of blue.. So holding ears for that ... But clearing the confusion :)

A heart will be a heart although it's broken!

Somewhere in NYFA a heart was broken n u very well know whose heart was it.

When someone crushes your dream it crushes your hope too! Leads you to suffer for life!

A misunderstanding can destroy everything. Men's say when a female enters ur life it force you to be in love .. And that same women has the power to destroy u! I don't have to mention who's life got screwed.


People say nothing is impossible in this world but making that impossible task trun into a possible thing is not easy! You may cure any disease by proper medication but can you repair a wounded soul? is there any medicine to repair a broken heart n a wounded soul?

Can raj fix the damage? Is it possible to fix the things that happen? And where is Manvi? Anybody saw her??
Is she in the Garage wounded, torn apart, a dead life? Maybe ... Maybe not... OR she committed suicide? Just to live a peaceful after life?? N who was that bloody "UNKNOWN Person"? What's up with him n virat panga??


Too many question a lot to answer. Today my brain is working in high speed getting all the ideas. N mind saying Write more!! But psh I don't repeat my mistakes twice! Hell u r not getting 15 pages update ever again! That's utterly crazy! What am I a machine? Yah that's what I thought.


PROMO: coming soon!

Ok drama khatam nautanki chalu...😉


When I started this part I had no idea what to write in fact I didn't know how to continue.. But last night n today morning my tube light finally lit up lol so if u didn't like tooo bad not my fault... Waise bhi thora lame tha I agree.. :/ sorry🤢🤢

Aiyooo sundariii hit like n comment na daaa... Muaaah seee yaaa soon!

Oh YESSS I see bunch of SILENT READERs! Hi lost ghosts... R u being kushal Tandon? Please don't.. If u can manage to read it thn surely can manage to write too! I mean come on I HATE WRITING if I can give u BIG BIG updates than Y can't u write??
Rest of u give ur honest feedback! It doesn't matter good or bad just give keeps me satisfied :)


Do I have to say don't steal my work? Nah u r smart enough for not doing it.. N if u DO Incase thn I'll pat my back cuz that means I'm awesomeee *eeh too much self praising ? Dishkaooo*😆


U greedy honeybees I know u gonna say UPDATE SOON! Tch tch oh hallo abhi toh kiya na in fact I finished the part just now! Toh have mercy on this poor little soul :)😛

I talk rubbish don't I? Ok now finger on my Lips goood byeee

Gonna read so many FFs now yay me.
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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