Swaron Os:- Blessed to have you last part pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing post the next part soon
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Amazng part...

luv the Sharon is so much concern abt swayam...

Waitng for nxt part plz update asap.. šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...very nicely written 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys... thanks a lot for the wonderful replies and likes.. i am overwhelmed... will do reply you individually but a very big thanks from my side...

Here is second part plz do read and let me know..


Part 2:-

She smiled at herself while thinking the day she realized he meant everything to her... no matter how much she denies... The day he came to know about her asthma and their official break-up. It was heart wrenching indeed. She felt as if she has lost everything out of her life. There is no more reason left in her life to live anymore. Coz he started to behave like a stranger to her...

Dyas passed.. she was missing dance and that could be seen in her eyes.. She wasn't only missing dance but was missing her lover boy too whom she could rely on anytime... but she was the reason for it.. he started behaving like a stranger to her.. the feeling pierced her and she badly wants to cry her heart out in his arms and she was dying to tell him how much she loves him.. but she couldn't gather the courage...

After so many break ups and patch ups and then break ups and that too all according to her mood and her point of view she was already guilty for doing that to him and now she cant just change the decision and get back to him that too because she wanted it... what about him??? Doesn't his point of view matters to her.. off course it does.. She wanted to talk to someone. She wanted to pour her heart out to someone. But whom??

Who would understand her??? But what was the second thought then?? Obviously it could be Rey only..

She picked up her car keys and went straight to rey's home...

Rey:- hey Shar.. all good??

Sharon:- i need to talk Rey...

Rey:- plz come na...

She sat on the swing on terrace and Rey brought coffee for both of them.. He saw her lost... long lost in her thoughts... he sat beside her and kept his arm across her shoulder and said

Rey:- whats bothering you princess??

Sharon:- Rey I love him...

Rey couldn't believe his ears and sat numb there..

Sharon looked at him and got irritated and shouted..

Sharon:- Rey are you even listening to me or you are still lost in your girl friend's thoughts..

Rey:- say it again na..

Sharon calmed a lil and said

Sharon:- Rey i love him..

Rey:- love who??

Sharon:- Reyyy... i love Swayam stupid...

Rey hugged her tight and said..

Rey:- i know..

Sharon looked at her amused and said..

Sharon:- you know???

Rey nodded and said

Rey:- its just that you realized it now... i knew it from start...

Sharon:- really???

Rey:- yeah Shar.. accha tell me .. does anybody has affected you to the extent he did... anybody can bring smile and tears both in your eyes when you are THE SHARON RAI PRAKASH who has damn i don't care attitude.. for any random person can you leave your ego of being a dazzler... No na.. i know you Sharon and i know he affects your heart coz he is inside it...

Sharon smiled through a blush and hugged him and said

Sharon :- thanks Rey but...

Rey: - now what "but" stupid rai prakash??

Sharon took a deep breath...

Sharon:- oh!!! But ye Mr restless singhania...

And told him her entire turmoil... Rey who was listening calmly till now got tears in his eyes of knowing the phase Sharon was facing and her asthma... She finished and he hugged him with tears flowing and said

Rey:- tumne bataya bhi nahi...

Sharon:- rey tumhaare paas fursat hi nahi thi... i was about to tell you but you were busy in your own life so i chucked it and moreover bas isiliye nahi bataya coz i don't want t get drown into the pool of tears of sympathy so stop crying...

Rey hugged her tighter and she remained there for sometime as if she was comforting him...

Sharon:- i cant spoil his life...

Rey :- oh Sharon you won't leave your ideologies right..

Sharon:- off course not..

Rey:- uske liye bhi nahi..

Listening to this she became mum and started blushing to which Rey cleared his throat and said

Rey:- stop behaving like a teenager in love for first time...

Sharon:- off course i am in love for first time...

Rey:- and what can you do about that...

Sharon :- anything... i would do anything..

Rey:- then do it..

Sharon:- what???

Rey:- admit it in front of him...

Sharon:- nooo Rey...

Rey:- why Sharon???

Sharon looked down and rey continued..

Rey:- we both know he loves you beyond any limit... are mere paas to raat ke teen teen baje message aate hain hi rey make sure she is okay... kal subah talk to her.. make her comfortable.. don't let her feel lonely... always try to make her smile... (self thought) I am sorry Swayam coz this was not to be told her but its for good... a larger good...

Sharon:- woh pehle ki baat thi... but ab he is behaving a stranger to me..

Rey:- that too because you want it this way... you don't want him to be the stress of your life... he want to be a comfort zone for you not a stress board.. aur rahi pehle ki baat ki baat.. to see..

He showed her his msg of few hours ago and it was..

"Rey yaar she was looking upset... something is bothering her i know.. but i am helpless..."

She smiled and said..

Sharon:- he still loves me..

Rey:- yes he does... and now go and tell him...

She got nervous and said

Sharon:- but Rey..

Rey:-tum aur tumhare infinite buts... no but now Sharon... just go...

Sharon smiled and started leaving when suddenly she came back running and hugged Rey and said

Sharon:- thank you for being my bestest friend ever Rey aur Swayam ke bhi...

Rey smiled and said

Rey:- chalo mai tumhe uske ghar drop kar deta hoon...

Rey dropped her in front of Swayam's home and wished her luck and left... She slowly started to walk to the door ... after ages she reached there and rang the bell.. kaka opened ..

Sharon smiled to him...

Kaka:- are Sharon baby aap???

She smiled to him and asked

Sharon:- kaka Swayam hain???

Kaka:- baba to saamne waale park me walk pe gayein hain... rukiye mai bula lata hoon..

Sharon:- nahi kaka... mai wahin chali jaati hoon... aap rukiye.. thank you...

Saying so she left to the park... it was dark and she couldn't find anybody walking in the park and she thought he might be somewhere else and was about to leave when she heard a song.. A song which was meant for them.. "Pehla nasha"...

She stepped into the direction of music and saw him... She smiled to see him sitting on the bench back facing her and she tip toed towards him to see what was he actually doing on his phone when she stood behind him she found him staring at her picture only... She was sooo touched.. once again... A lone tear escaped her eye and she adored her love.. she always get a tickle while calling him her love.. in her thoughts too...

She gathered the courage and went by his side and sat.. he looked at him and instead of being surprised he smiled ... She was shocked to see it and muttered "Unpredictible"

Swayam smiled and said

Swayam:- hmm predictable is so boring...

She was looking at him and she understood that he is thinking he is dreaming of her.. he was smiling quietly looking at her face and she burst into laughter when he heard her laughing he came back to reality and stood straight leaving his phone to touch the ground with force...

Swayam:- Shar... Shar...

Sharon still laughing:- Sharon you idiot...

Swayam :- tum sach me ho???

Sharon:- nahi you are hallucinating...

And again burst into laughter... Swayam first was embarrassed but then he looked at the beauty standing in front of him and adored her laughing figure..

While laughing she noticed his glare on her and started to blush a lil and turned around... Swayam came to his senses when he thought he broke his promise by glaring at her he said...

Swayam:- i am sorry Sharon... but you here?? This time?? Kucch kaam tha..

Sharon:- hmm tha kucch kaam par Swayam se.. tumse nahi..

Swayam:- matlab???

Sharon:- matlab ye mujhe us Swayam se kaam that jo apna real self kabhi nahi chhupata.. chaahe woh kisiko like kare ya dislike kare woh kisi ke liye fake emotions nahi dikhata...

Swayam:- but shar...

Cutting in middle

Sharon:- i am not done yet... Mai us Swayam se milne aayi who loves me openly not the one who loves me silently...

Swayam:- Sharon plz don't raise it again... it hurts...

Sharon:- it won't hurt you anymore Swayam.. i promise...

Swayam got tensed.. he thought another bad news from destiny was coming his way.. he couldn't stop tears from his eyes and they flowed..

Sharon who was continuously looking into those deep ocean of emotions saw tears coming out of them.. She quickly went ahead and wiped it..

Sharon:- no Swayam no.. i said na.. ab no more tears and no more sadness for you...

Swayam was quite as he wasn't aware what was about to come from her side. She was looking into his eyes and said

Sharon:- Swayam !!! i don't wanna talk about the past incidents that took place between us coz we both are aware of it. I wont talk about the uncertain future which would lead us don't know where.. but all i know is i know my present.. and at present i am here with you.. you know why?? Because this heart of mine starts living only when you are around. My eyes relax only when they see you in front of me. My breathes cool down only when they sense your presence around and my ears only feel the melody of your voice, My skin only sighs when it feels your touch.. Moreover i me and myself all these have totally surrendered themselves to you. You are no more a stranger to me.. you are no more a co-dancer to me. You are no more a classmate to me but you own me Swayam Shekhawat.. You own me.. in every sense , in every manner and this Sharon Rai Prakash belongs to you... "I Love You Swayam" .. i know i am a rich spoilt brat but you know me inside out.. although i wonder how but you do..I promise i would come out of my complications but i can't afford to stay away from you...

Saying so she fell on to him hugging him tight... He was frozen .. like he doesn't know how to react.. his love was crying in his arms and he was not in the state to comfort her. He was lost in the thought and she was crying continuously. Her continuous cries made her asthma overpower her and her coughing brought him back out of trance. He looked at her and got tensed .. She was coughing and he panicked .. She wasn't leaving him and was there in that position only.. Swayam somehow managed to take out inhaler from his pocket and gave it to her.. she looked at his eyes full of concern and took inhaler .. few minutes later she was feeling better but was hurt coz after whatever she said there was no reply from his side..

Sharon:- (self thought) now i understood how he had felt the number of times i dint acknowledged his love.. i deserve this...

She was sitting there on the bench and Swayam was looking at her if she is fine or not.

She looked at him and tears started to come all over again.. was it a rejection?? Did she really deserve it??

Seeing her crying again Swayam got the hint and he sat beside her and held her by her shoulders..

Sharon:- Swayam.....

Swayam kept his finger on her lips and said

Swayam:- no more words required Sharon... I love you too and will always do... Abhi just calm down..

Sharon felt the world returning to her.. She hid herself in his chest and he kissed her head. They sat there for no matter how long...

Next day was full of happiness for both of them... Swayam had returned to his full majnu mood and Sharon was loving it.. The whole gang was there in the RH when Sharon went to Swayam in front of everyone and said...

Sharon:- Guys !!! i want all you to meet the most important person in my life... The one who have possession of Sharon rai prakash .. one who means the world to me...

All were looking at her when she suddenly sat on her knees facing Swayam and said...

Sharon :- so Mr Shekhawat..Everybody knows the hottest the most charming and the most intelligent diva in the entire college but you are the one who knows the real Sharon.. the real me... so would you like to give this Sharon a chance to spend the remaining part of our lives together...

Swayam wasn't expecting this but for Sharon the promise is promise and she said when she'll get committed she would tell their friends but like this was so unexpected.. Swayam held her by her shoulders and hugged her and all the gang hooted after they came out of their shock...

Swayam:- plz dont change ur personality for me.. these all things doesnt needed.. coz i am the lover boy and these all things is my responsibility.. so plz be like that...

They smiled at each other...


Girls went to Sharon and boys went to Swayam... they hugged them and Rey sighed as they were official now..

Bharat:- dekh maine Sharon ki photo kheenchi.. jab woh ghutno pe baithi thi..

Swayam:- Sharon ki photo kheenchi ??? phone de...

Bharat:- q be???

Swayam:- Bharat Sharon ki photo tere cell me kya karegi... phone de...

Bharat:- nahi dunga...

Swayam:- bharat ... de abhi..

He ran behind him to give him the phone and Sharon was smiling and adoring the back full possessive majnu... a aa correction "Her majnu"..

Rinni:- ab to Sharon ek dance saath me ho jaaye qki jab bhi tum khush hoti ho to dance karti ho aur humne kaafi time se tumhare sath dance nahi kiya...

Sharon's smiled vanished.. She turned around and said..

Sharon:- i am sorry guys but mai kabhi dance nahi karungi.. kabhi nahi..

Saying so she left the RH leaving everyone shocked behind and Swayam ran after her.




Precap:-

last part... gang and swayam rey made her happy...Dance return..


plz plz do read it and reply ... waiting for your responses...
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing dear...really luved the way u narrated whole confession...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great Update ..the whole confession and swaron's reactions were nice written. but what i loved more was the way sharon proposed infront of everyone .. waiting for the next update ..

Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read both the parts and just loved them <3 U write so beautifully. Swaron are way to cute. Lov ed the way she expressed her love and then her gesture was so cute. Finally Lover boy is back <3
Update soon and thanks for the pm.
Love Fatima<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update sakshi...atlast swaron confession in a very beautiful way and they are even official...sharey convoy was so sweet...and the return of majnu...now waiting for Sharon's return to dance...
Awesome plz update soon
Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb
love sheray partšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it
So nicely u wrote abt d swaron confession
Plz update soon

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