Swaron Os:- Blessed to have you last part pg6

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kshitija

@--Kshitz--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Saky the whole os was awww...
And the end was cheery on the cake...swayam the perfect guys for Sharon n rey her best frnd...the whole gang trying to cheer up Sharon was so sweet...sing dancing njoyin...
Such a cute ending...
I love the whole os a lottt...
Aur lika kar saky u write magically expressing every emotion i could feel the whole situation in front of me...
Just loved it...!!!!!
- Urs kshiti

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

It took 45 mins for me to read all 3 parts of ur os... Right now d time is 2.35 n only n only for u sakshi am awake till now reading all d parts of ur os n now commenting on it... Me being awake till so late n reading it i must say it was all so so so worth it 😊
Loved loved loved ur os 😊 😊
Firstly wanna do dis 👏
Great work done babe u rocked it with dis os.. Dis is d 1st os of ur.s which am reading i din have any idea ki u write so well 😊 it is so so perfect so beautifully penned am in love with it totally..

Starting with part 1:
I loved how sharon realised her feelings it was very beautifully done.. Reyam convo about d cycle too Gud d whole gang convo at swayam.s place Wen all r shouting awesome n d way sharon scolded him lovely her concern i could feel it 👏

Comin to part 2:
According to me dis was d most touching part of ur os i was crying reading d sharey convo loved der bond it purely defines best friendship 😊
Den d highlight of dis part was THE CONFESSION it was epic loved d way u thought of it n penned it down brilliantly written 👏 n i was so so happy seeing ke dey confessed... Loved dis part a lot it was amazingly beautiful 😊 😊

Finally part 3:
1st mention i love dat song a lot chak de specially dose lines sach hai yeh baas ek baar milti hai zindagi.. Apt song for d situation.. D idea of how to convince sharon was beautiful 👏
D return of majnu very nice... Loved how d whole gang wanted her to dance n be happy 😊
It was a perfect ending...

All in all a very beautiful simple sweet os which touched my heart 😳
Dil khush ho gaya after reading whole os 😊
Oh gosh its 3 o clock i think i must stop my bak bak here..
U have sent me to swaron land at dis time ab toh pata nahi neend aayegi bhi ya nahi baas swaron hee swaron dikh rahe hai 😃 😃
Finally dis is for u.. 🤗 🤗 🤗
Pls do write more u write brilliantly n beautifully i would really love to read more of ur works.. Tune neend uda di meri 😆

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

cute os 😛
the gang was so sweet,just like in D3
Rey and Swayam are the best guys to have in anyone's life.
the beach pertion was so well described i could visualize them.
well done

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

lovely sakshi...i'm sorry to see it ending

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

It was superb OS
great work👏
I luv the song CHAK DE CHAK DE CHAK DE CHAKDE SAARE GHUM properly suited the situation🤗
It was awesome u r a rockstar ⭐️
keep writing 😆