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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear its very nice concept story is amazing i am eargly waiting for part 1 plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon part 1 asp plz if possible than plz update todayplz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
itzz awesome yaar
do continue soon
nd plzz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome starting ... update soon and pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wow yaar dis seems interesting...
plz update soon...
n plz plz pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome concept ... Can't wait for the buddies and RV likes Taani wow ... I would love to see Rey jealous ... Do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice. TBP & D3 ka merger. not bad. dekhte hai aage kya hoga.
plz pm me I want to read this one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1-

scene starts frm taani's room..
taani sitting on her bed...crying badly...😭😭
----flashback---
rey n taani in FE...
taani is really happy coz now she thinks evrything is back to normal..😊..tauji had left for london for his wrk n now rey dnt need to hide his identity n he can participate in NDC finals...but on the other hand rey is really frustrated wid this taani...
rey POV-how can taani forget abt ma feelings...she has bcm so selfish...vo bas apne baare mein soch rahi h ...wat abt me...i hav to do this .i hav to break up wid taani so tht ki vo apna future only humari shaadi mein na dekhe...she has to move in her life...i hav to do this n baad mein main sab thik kar doonga...abhi taani to realize karana jaroori h ki vo kitni galat h...😡

REY:taani listen to me carefully...i hav to tell u smething important...
(but taani is not paying attention...she is so happy...rey gets frustrated n shouts )
REY:taani...can u plz listen to me once...
TAANI: haan rey...boliye na aapko kya kehna h..
REY:taani i wanna say ...say (trying to find wrds)...taani its over...
TAANI:wat's over rey???😲
REY(angrily):its all over btw u n me...ur relationship is over...
(the wrld just stops for taani )😭😭
REY:taani i knw tht u luv me so much but now i dnt luv u coz the taani whom i luvd so much is now lost somewhere...u r not my taani.(taani is all shocked but tears r flowing through her eyes..😭...rey continues)...yes u dnt care for me anymore...u hav just become so selfish...u dnt care for ur brother ,ur frnds not evn for me...tumne mujhe dance se ,meri life se door rehne ko kaha...u knw ki dance mere liye kitna important h ...n mere frnds..tumhari vajah se maine unhe us tym chod diya jab unhe mere jaroorat thi...how could u do this taani??,,,...how could u?
( taani is numb...she could not find wrds...shes so shocked wid rey's behaviour)
REY:taani u knw wat u just hav one thing in ur mind...our marriage...but taani marriage is not evrything...we need to set our future...but u dnt hav any future plans...i never wanted this...n now i dnt think my future is wid u coz u r chnaged...u r changed a lot taani...

(n aftr saying this rey left FE...leaving a broken taani😭...)

---------------------------------flashback ends-----------------------

taani is still in shock n aftr remembering all these wrds of rey(its over taani ...its all over btw u n me...u hav bcm so selsish...u r changed taani )

taani(still crying):why rey...why u always misunderstands me...u said tht i m changed thn wat abt u...no no actually u r not chnaged at all...coz u were always like this...u always misunderstands me ..always...actually u never luvd me...for u ur first love is dance..then wat abt me rey...n bhai ..unhe to meri koi parvah hi nahi h...n my friends...actualy so called frnds..unhone to mujhe kabhi samjha hi nahi...par rey aap bhi...maine aapse ye kabhi expect nahi kiya tha...

(now washing her face in washroon )--taani:its high time taani...its high time...ab mujhe kisiko kuch proove karne ki jarrorat nahi h...hamesha maine apni life dusro ke liye jee h but not now...ab main apne liye kuch karrongi...aaj se main rey,bhai aur gang ke baare mein nahi sochungi...now i will live my life just for one person n thts me...i will live for myself...u want to break me na rey ...that aftr our break up i will cry for u n will show evryone that i m so weak...but no rey i m not only ur GF of bhai's sis ...i m TAANI...TAANI SHEKHAWAT...n now i'll make my identity...its my promise to myself tht now i'll not break...frm tomorrow i'll be a new taani...

(taani just went to her room ...opens her cuboard ...picks reys pictures...n packs it in a box along wid all the gifts given by rey n goes n sleeps on her bed just remembering rey's wrds n tears starts flowing though her eyes...n she sleep's cring)

next day --morning
taani is sleeping peacefully on her bed n sun rays strts falling on her face...she opens her eyes n gets up...get ready for college...wering a beautiful pink top wid black jeans n stands in frnt of mirror n suddnly she remembers how rey enters her room throught window n a smile appears on her rosy lips but suddenly her smile vanishes n tears strts flowing through eyes as she remembers rey's yesterday wrds

TAANI (wiping her tears )-no taani ...not again ...now u'll never cry for thm ...they dnt wrth it...rey dnt deserves u not evn ur tears ...now its a new morning wid new hopes n u hav to stand for urself...

(thn she moves out to prepare breakfast n she sees swayam is not in house ...so she left for college as she thought he might left for rehrsals )

here at rey's place sharon n swayam r sitting along wid rey...rey is really sad ...his sadness is visible on his face...n swayam was too angry wid rey tht why he broke up wid taani ...thn rey tells evryhthing to swayam n sharon..tht he did thid for her benefit n later he'll fix evrything...n he asks for their help ..first swayam denied but later sharon conveinced him n he also knws tht rey loves taani so he agreed for his frnds n sister's sake...they all together left for college ...they wre trying to act normal...but they were confused how they'll face taani...the broken taani,...they expected tht taani will not come to college as she might be crying or dsnt wanted to face rey aftr yesterday's incident n reys burst out on her )

they all reached college n went to rehersal hall n gang was present there...they all were chit chatting ...then shareyam enters )

VICKY:hey guys ...wat's up?
NIL: ye dude ..kaha the tum teeno...we were waiting for u.
SWAYAM:kahi nahi yaar bas aise hi...
aashi:kya hua swayam aap itna low types kyu sound kar rahe ho...(sharon glares at aashi)
SWAYAM :kuch nahi aashi...i m perfectly fine,,..thnks for ur concern...
REY:(lil loudly):i broke up wid her...
all:what?
REY: ya guys i broke up wid taani ... (shareyam expected some ques frm gang but gang just smiles(except aashi...she was shocked ) )

vicky:thank god tujhe akal to aayi...
NIL: ya dude...thank god u realised tht she dnt deserves u..
SIMMI:ya dude...she is super weird...i m glad u broke up
(shareyam shocked )
NEHA: neha happy is...
(here taani is shanding outside the rehersal hall ...n tears strts flowinf her eyes ..she was shocked n hurt aftr gang's rxn ...but she wipes her tears n moves in )

TAANI:gud mrng guys (all shocked n their smile vanishes...shareyam shocked aftr seeing taani in college)
i just came to inform u guys tht u hav selected for NDC finals ...(evryone happy except rey n swayam ..sharon sees this n signal thm to smile ...so tht taani could not see their sad faces thn taani continues ,.)...as u all knw tht it will be really tough to face the opposite team (imagine those projector room team)..so u hav to wrk hard n practice more

VICKY:we knw tht...how many times u r gonna tell us the same thing..(evyone laughts except shareyam)

TAANI: till u get it(wid attitude)😆😆...so wat r u waiting for ...strt rehersing...n she left...
(all shocked +happy coz they selected for finals...all together PARTYYY )

---------------------chapter 1 ends----------
precap:buddies entry
angry RV😡


NOTE:guys ..personally i dnt hate gang...but aftr seeing their behaviour towards taani...i cant write gud abt them ...n whenever i'll write GANG plz exclude shareyam frm thm...)

hey guys plz cmmnt ur views...it will encourage me...n forgive me for my mistakes...n ya nxt mein pakka buddies ki entry hogi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice start...
lovd d way its writtn...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Nice...Update soon! And pm me! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
hey dear loved the concept n update 1..but it was vvv small..pls update soon n make it lng..p.s love taani s new attitude!😃

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