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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
I love this track, its nice that Taani finally has some friends!! 😃

Btws whats BBC mean?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Chapter 4 and 5 are very nice...
I so hope ki vo d3 mein aisa kuch dikhaye...
but no they will show tani crying for rey... :(
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
superb updates... 👏
pm me when u update next part n thmx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!amaging update and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates
loved all the chapters
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Mind blowing update... I love all the chapters. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys thnks a lot ...i m so happy aap sabko meri stry pasand aayi...n ya u just dnt wry abt RV n panchi's relation coz 2-3 chapters ke baad main unki bonding n their friendship add karne wali hu...n as for JEMMIE n BBC...uski stry n full form bhi aapko pata chal jayegi...i hav some others plans wid it...so till thn hav patience n wait for my nxt chapter...n ya keep cmnting ur views n dnt frgt to hit tht like button...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TAAREY FF:NEW BEGINNING WITH FRIENDS
chapter 6

RV stops his jeep n blindforded her...

TAANI:jemmie wat r u doing??mujhe kuch dikh nahi raha h...kaha le ja raha h mujhe

RV:cliff se dhakka dene...teri bak bak sunke pak gaya hu ab.

TAANI(makes faces ):accha to chal beta ab bhoot banke tera jeena haraam karoongi...

RV makes her sit on jeeps front n asked her not to utter a wrd or move..
she agrees thn he went away n aftr sometime he asked her to open her eyes...she slowly removes cloth frm her eyes n aftr seeing sight in frnt of her a sweet smile appears on her face...

TAANI:rv thank u so much..tujhe kaise pata ki abhi mujhe iski jaroorat thi.

RV :i knw u BBC...jab bhi tu sad hoti h na to only choclate ice cream hi tera mood thik kar sakti h aur...

TAANi: aur kya?

RV:aur rone ke baad jab tujhe bhook lagti h n tab tu horibble lagti h...(he laughs n runs)

Taani runs behind him n thn she also starts laughing n eating her ice cream...thn again tears strts flowing through her eyes..rv sees this n says

RV:tannu tu phir strt ho gayi.

TAANI:ye khshi ke aasu hai...kitne time baad itna hassi hu aaj.

thn RV drags her to jeep n ask her to sit inside..
thn suddenly a stupid idea strikes in taani's mind n she asks RV.

TAANI:jemmie do u care for me?

RV:ye kaisa ques h...ofcourse yes.

TAANI:to meri ek baat manega.?

RV:haan bol na.

TAANI:jemmie plz aaj apni laila ko mujhe drive karne de (LAILA:rv's jeep...he loves his jeep n never allow anyone to drive it)

RV:no ways tannu...tu pagal ho gayi h.

TAANI:plz plz plz (n makes a sweet puppy face ).yaar dekh na kitna tym ho gaya h mujhe drive kiye huye...bahut mann kar raha h aaj.

RV: vahi to taani ,kitna tym ho gaya h drive kiye hue...kahi accident ho gaya to.

TAANI:(fake anger ) haan tu to marne se darta h na..thik h tu mat chal mere saath ...agar accident hua to main mar jaungi...tujhe kya padi h meri.

now RV is really angry wid her...he holds her shoulders tightly..luking into her eys ...

RV:tannu kabhi aisa mat kehna...main tere bina nahi reh sakta...aur tere liye to main kisi ki jaan le bhi askta hu n apni jaan de bhi sakta hu...

(taani is really scared now frm his frnds behaviour...first tym taani saw the pain in his eyes...the pain of losing her...but before she could understand anything rv cames to his senses n moves back ,leaving her shoulders)

TAANI: jemmie i was just joking...(but he was still angry wid her )accha baba sry na.(holding her ears)..sry sry sry (making cute faces)

RV(could not resist more n smiles luking his friends antics):accha thik h par aage se aisa nahi bolegi...

TAANI:haan thik h to main chalau na laila ko...

RV : mana karoonga to manegi kya.

TAANI:nahi.

(RV gives her the keys ,drop her at taayam's place n leaves for his house)

taani enters her house ,still confused by RV's behaviour...here swayam was waiting for her...taani was a lil shocked +happy whn she saw tht swayam is still waiting for her...swayam came forward n shouts on taani...it was expected for taani but this tym it was nt his anger,it was his concern n worry for his baby sis..

SWAYAM:kaha thi taani tum...tym dekha h...phone kaha h tumhara...phone kyu nahi pick kiya.

(thn taani takes her phone out frm her bag n sees swayam's 20 missed calls...she smiles luking at her phone)

SWAYAM:taani tum muskura rahi ho...main yaha pareshaan hu aur tum...koi chinta hai ki nahi tumhe meri.

TAANI:bhai pehle ander to aane do ,phir sab batati hu.

(swayam moves aside frm the door n thn taani enters ,swayam came rushing n hug taani tightly...taani was first shocked thn she also hugs him)

SWAYAM:i m sry taani,i m sry for evrythiing...i knw there must be some problem thats y u wre behaving like this...i dnt knw wat it was but the only thing i knw is tht ki main tumhe hurt nahi dekh sakta...taani u r my life...it was all my fault...i failed taani...i failed as a brother...

TAANI(she also started crying):nahi bhai...aisa mat bolo...bhai aap mujhe itna pyaar karte ho to mujhe kyu nahi samajh paaye...kyu aapne ek baar bhi aakar mujhse baat nahi ki...agar maine galti ki thi to mujhe daatte...par aapne to mujhse baat karna hi chod diya,...

SWAYAM:nahi taani aisa (she cuts him inbetween )..

TAANI:bhai main to vahi kar rahi thi jo aapne kaha tha...(swayam confused )..jab main GS bani thi to aapne hi to kaha tha ki as a GS kabhi kabhi mujhe aise decisions lene honge jo aapki ideologies ke against honge...mujhe aapke ya kisi aur ke baare mein nahi bas college ke betterment ke liye decisions lene honge...maine bhi to vahi kiya na bhai...par aap mujhe kabhi samajh hi nahi paaye.(she runs to her room crying)...

now swayam is all broken ...taani's wrds r echoing in his mind...AAP MUJHE KABHI SAMAJH HI NAHI PAYE...)

SWAYAM:i knw taani sab meri galti h...main tumhe nahi samajh paaya taani...i m sry taani...i m really sry...suddenly his phone beeps n he got a message frm REY

REY"S mesage:meet me now at my place...its urgent.

swayam gets up...takes his bicycle n went to rey's place...there sharon n other gang members r also present...swayam asks evryone wats the matter...but no one hav idea y rey called thm here...

scene shifts-
RV sitting in his room...many pictures,letters,gifts around him...he was crying badly...he takes one pic n started crying...

--------chapter 6-------------------

precap; broken RV
gang realisation
NDC postpond
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Omg!!! Is RV in love with Taani
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
I love Taarey, par the Tannu & Jemmie scenes are super cute too!😕

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