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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read it on fb
Its amazingg
Plz update soon
Nd plz pm me too
I dnt mind reading it again and again
As its amzing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept, i hope you continue soon!👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc concpt n lovd prt 1👏 lykin dis new taani n i cnt stnd d gang h8 thm😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update continue soon and pm me
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Outstandng yaar loved it pls pm me...n conti fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
please update soon and pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dr,D CS of TBP team is hell awesome(I 2 lv TBP).Thn d frst prt,Gosh! Rey ws so rude though it ws a fake break-up! Taani,I lv dis girl commiting herself to live fr d oly person herself & bng brave. Gang! Seriously after wtng d epis frm past weeks i thnk i can nvr like thm,ty r hell disgusting.Bt lvd d attitude wala Taani,grt gng.Hmmm! Royals entry in precap,gd.Wud lv to rd angry RV,it'l be amazing! Plz update sn dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TAAREY FF:new beginning wid friends
CHAPTER 2:

a black jeep(guys imagine suvreen guggal's char-yuvraj's jeep..i dnt knw its name ) n a white car comes n stops in frnt of the gate of st.louis ...the 3 hot dudes come out of the black jeepn 2 hot babes come out of the car...evryone's just staring thm...girls r drooling over 3 guys...specially RV n KD...n guys just staring kiya n panchi,...they r habitual to this so they ignored n moves in...

BUDDIES (except taani):tannu(taani)...here we come...
scene shifts rehersal hall...all just finishes their rehersals n decided to move in canteen...

here taani is just going towards canteen ...n buddies r already present there...waiting for her...

taani enters in canteen n sees buddies sitting in frnt of her...first she didn't believe her eyes but later she realized its true whn they take her name

buddies(all together) :TANNU...
here gang also enters n they just stares at buddies who r luking towards taani...
taani runs n give a tight hug to panchi n kiya...
here gang stares at swayam .expecting an answer..
SWAYAM:why r u guys staring at me..??
REY:ye dono kaun h??
SWAYAM:panchi n kiya...(all make questioning face )...taani's delhi frnds...

thn
sid n KD :tannu we r also here ...(making angry faces )
tanni rushes to thm n give both of them a tight wala hug ..

gang again looks at swayam ..
SWAYAM:ye h KD n sid...taani ke dalhi frnds...n KD taani ka best friend...
REY:what...y shes hugging him so tightly...
SWAYAM:shut up rey...vo kiya n panchi ke boy friends h n taani ke group members bhi...
ALL(except swayam ):group?

here someone comes frm behind n picks taani up through her waist n starts twirling her...taani:jemmie leave me ...get me down ...

here rey is really angry now...how someone can hold her taani like this...n all looks at swayam..
SWAYAM:thats ranveer...taani ka BBF
rey expecting more frm swayam ...REY: aur?
SWAYAM:aur kya??
rey:jemmie kaun h?
SWAYAM:arre taani isse jemmie bolti h.
rey(make stupid faces):iski GF?
SWAYAM:nahi h...
rey luks angrily at taani n RV.

here RV keeps taani down...taani turns n hugs him tightly.(rey is red now)...RV also hugs her...taani starts crying ...RV tries to see her face...but she didnt allow him n keeps hugging him...(angry n guilty rey )

RV:hey BBC ..kya hua...r u crying??...wat happened???

tanni:(leaves him n avoiding eye contact ):kuch nahi jemmie (here rey.. REY:JEMMIE?? BBD? WTH ) its just tht i missed u...
RV huggs her again (red fuming rey ...kiya n panchi :awww )

RV:i missed u too BBC...i missed u a lot...

thn all come forward n buddies (kiya,panchi,sid,KD,taani,RV) shared a group hug...

TANNI:leave me guys...i cant breathe...
buddies:oh sry sry n moves backward...all goes n sits on a table...

here d3 gang also enters n sits on a table near buddies table...
all girls were just drooling over RV n KD...
simmi:hey that guy (luking at RV)...he's so HOTTT
SWAYAM: oh ya thats RV...
SIMMI: ya RV ri8...
AASHI:ya hez really hot n smart...
NEHA:neha thinking same aashi...
VICKY:wat hot guys???thik thak h bus...
NIL:ya dude okay h bus...but that girl...kiya ri8...shez really hot..
amar:haan aul vo panchi is so cute...
RINNI:wat cute...??
REY(frustrated):stop it guys...let me concentrate (hez trying to listen their talks )
GANG:wat??concentrate on wat??
REY:woh ...woh..food pe guys i m really hungry...
gang:yeah...we r also hungry...(rey sighs a relief )

buddies table
TANNI:i m so happy guys...u all r here...its so long to meet u..
ALL:we r also happy tannu to see u...
TAANI:but guys tum yaha kar kya rahe ho...
RV:baihe h tere saath ...(taani glares him )...okay...actually ab hum tere saath yahi padhenge...
taani:WHAT??? (n stands up frm chair...evryone +d3 gang stares at her...rv drags her down n make her sit )
RV: haan tannu ab hum yahi padhenge tere saath...
kiya:ya tannu now we all r together again...
(taani is really happy now ...they all shared a group hug )
here rey is just trying to focus on buddies...

d3 table
GANG:c'mon guys lets eat smething...
(rey,nil,vicky wents to food counter to get food )

buddies table
KD:yaar guys bhook lagi h chalo na kuch khate h..
all:yeah
(KD,sid n RV goes to food counter to get food )

at counter ..
REY n gang places their order n waiting for food

buddies came n places their order...
sid: excuse me...6 veg sandwiches
KD:n 6 cold coffees plz...
RV:no...make that 5...n 1 ice tea plz...
KD:oh ya tannu ke liye ...(rey glares at thm ...n thinks :is monkey...hmmm...ya RV...isko to taani ki choice ke baare mein bhi pata h )

counter boy hands over the order to bth groups ...n thn THAP...rey n RV collides...

all rushes there (buddies +gang )
TAANI:hey RV u r okay na...oh freak tere to saare clothes kharab ho gaye...
SHARON:rey u r okay na...oh ur clothes...(rey thinks ;taani ko mujhse jyada is bandar ki chinta h )
both gets up and glares at each other...

RV:BBC i m f9...u ckck ur boyfriend (stressing on wrd )...is he okay or not...(rey luks at him surprisingly )
TAANI:jemmie lets go frm here ...u go n change i'll show u the boys locker room...
(rey luks helplessly at taani )
buddies leave n gang also leaves...
RV got change his dress n now they all(buddies) r sitting outside on their jeap n car(in frnt of college...its quite dark now...)
KD: hey tannu tujhe kya ho gaya tha canteen mein...
KIYA: ya ri8...hez ur BF na fir tu usse ignore kyu kar rahi thi...
RV: ya n tu usse dekhke sad kyu ho gayi thi...is evrything okay wid u guys...
PANCHI:let her speak guys...
TAANI:thanks birdy...
(taani first stays quies n thn tells thm evrything...frm tht website cmmnts to their break up)
RV(angrily):how could he??...he stands up n starts moving towards college to hit rey n ask him how could he hurt his taani ...taani stops him ..
TAANI: no jemmie...plz dnt...he dnt deserves this...plz guys u all calm down...i dnt wanna create any issue...its his wish...
KD:but how could he hurt such a nice girl.
PANCHI: ya ...n tumne usse bataya kyu nahi...cmmnts wali baat.
RV:kya isse hi sab batana jaroori h...uske paas brain nahi h jo khud soch sake..
SID: yeah...n hamesha taani hi kyu usse samajhne ki kosish kare...cant he understand her POV.
kiya:ya tannu...tune kuch galat nahi kiya...usse tujhe misunderstand nahi karna chaihiye tha,,,
TAANHI: nahi guys ..kahi na kahi galti hum dono ki h...but main to ye sab sirf humare liye kar rahi thi...but rey ke liye unka passion n friends mujhse jyada imp h...(RV get her into a hug n starts crying)
TAANI:guys promise me ki tum is matter mein gang se kuch nahi kahoge...i dnt want to create any issue of this...n now i m happy tht i m not alone ..u guys r wid me...
RV:yeah taani...lets forget this...he dnt deserves u...
KD:ri8 RV...n vaise bhi now we all r together na to hum kuch bhi face kar lenge...
KIYA:ya KD u r ri8...n they bth shares a LLHH
TAANI(teasingly):hmmm KD u r alawys ri8...haina kiya..
they bth comes to their senses n starts luking here n there...
SID:c'mon guys ab ye rona dhona band...lets do something ...
TAANI:like what?
all:singing...
all laughs n RV got out some musical instruments frm his jeap n hands one giutar to taani n keep one wid him...
(they all starts singing HAI JUNOON SONG frm NEW YORK)
taani also sings really well n she is the main lead in this sng (i knw guys main voice boy ki hai na but suppose karlo na ki girl ki voice h ...i m a maths student so i can suppose anything ...hehehe...u also try )

they sing really well n crowd of many guys n girls ghathers ...some starts making videos n whn they finish they get a huge applaud frm crowd...they all smiles n sits in the jeap n car n went away to their respective homes )

NOTE :guys i knw taarey ke ff mein taarey hi gayab h but only for 3-4 chapters ...coz main bhi unhe door nahi rakh sakti...but now i m focussing on taani's friendship wid buddies...coz its the main thing i m missing in d3 original track...so guys dnt hate me for this...

preacp:swayam avoiding taani
video aired
angry rey
old taani back...
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chapter 3

buddies drop taani home n left for their place (actually RV n KIYA hav their bunglow in mumbai n panchi is living wid thm ...n KD n sid r living at some other place at rented house )

taani is really happy now...she enters smiling n opens d door n went to her room...she got chnaged n comes out to hav dinner wid her bro but kaka tell her tht swayam already had dinner n went to sleep...first taani gets sad but later she realised her promise to herself n ate food n went to sleep ..after so many days she slept peacefully n smiling...remembering her awesome day wid her frnds (hey guys dnt get angry but in few chapters i m gonna focus on tanni n her friends coz this is the main thing i m missing in original track of D3)


next day -morning
taani woke up smiling n she did her morning prayer n thnked krishna ji for sending her friends back to her...then she went for bath n get ready...here she get a call frm RV..(name flashing jemmie )

TAANI:haan bol kya hua??
RV:o hllo miss angry girl...aisa kyu sound kar rahi h...na hllo na hie ...
TAANI:oh sry ...hllo ji..gud mrng...kuch kaam tha kya??
RV:kyu tujhe gud mrng wish karne ke liye call nahi kar sakta kya?
TAANI: arre nahi vo actually ab to aadat ho gayi h aise rehne ki ..so expect nahi kiya tha...
RV:oh water wrks ab phir rona mat strt kar dena..n ab aadat badal le beta coz ab main hoon na tujhe khush karne ke liye (there panchi n kiya are also wid RV n they shouts ) aur hum bhi hain...
taani smiles on this n thanks them
RV:oh bas BBC .mumbai walo ne bade maners sikha diye...frnds to thank u bolegi...chal ab tayaar hoja ..hum aa rahe h tujhe lene.
TAANI:arre nahi jemmie main khud aa jaungi.tu kyu(he cuts her in between )
RV:oh bas tannu devi ab pravachan band kar aur jaldi tayyar hoja.
TAANI:thik h tum aa jao ..main taayar hu.
RV:okay .we r on the way..chal bye see u thn.

taani comes aut of the room n sees swayam already had left...she gets sad for a moment thn doorbell rings ...she runs n opens the door...RV,taani,kiya n panchi together reaches college n there sid n KD also reaches there...they get out of car. kesiya(KD -KIYA) n sanchi(sid -panchi) shared a LLHH .taani n RV fakely coughed n bring thm back to real wrld...they all smiles n moves in college .

a peon came n tell thm tht vp called the new students (buddies) n GS ..
they went to VP'S cabin
TAANI:may we come in sir.?
V.P:yes yes come in.
TAANI: sir u called us.
V.p: oh gr8 u guys together.i m happy taani u r helping new students.
TAANI:sir,they r my old school friends.
V.P:oh that's gr8 .so u guys i heard tht u all r really vry talented.so i want no complains against u n i hope u r done wid all d formalities of admission...so ur classes r gonna strt frm today.n u hav to choose an extra field like dancing,painting,drama,sports,singing,etc. so i want ur names till evening in which field u r intrested.
ALL:okay sir.we'll inform u till evening.
panchi:oh god guys maine to socha hi nahi is baare mein.
kiya:ya bebes me too.
K.D:dnt wry we'll find a way.
TAANI:yeah .but lets move to class.(their subjects r same)

the buddies r moving towards class but they noticed everyone's staring them...
during class everyone's just talking abt them.
after class-
guy1-hey is this our GS in this video.
guy2-ya.n she is superb.
guy1-god knows its real or fake.
(buddies r confused afetr hearing their convo)

girl1-i dnt think its real.
girl2-but some students r saying they watched this live.
girl 3-may these other guys r real but our g.s she must be faking.
girl1-ya shez so dumb.
girl3-ya firstly she created tht dance video n now this one.
girl2-ya taani can cross all her limits.
girl3-ya usne rey ko bhi fame n money ke liye hi phasaya hoga.but now rey got to knw abt her intensions n broke up wid her.

(its the limit.RV can't listen even a single wrd he starts moving towards those bimbos but taani stopped him n she moves to thm n asked abt the video)
after seeing video taani just get shocked.all buddies were also worried aftr reading those cmmnts over taani on tht video.
K.D n R.V are really angry .they all went to canteen )


scene shifts to rehersal hall-
nil came running towards reharsal hall
VICKY:kya hua nil ,tu itna bhaag kyu raha h.
SIMMI:ya dude r u alri8.?
NIL:guys watch this.
they all watched the video n rey started moving towards canteen ,eneryone follows him.

in canteen
sid:they r so stupid.how could they even think tht way.
R.V:its limit now.we hav to prove them tht taani is not so easy to deal wid.

rey comes fuming in anger n held taani by her arm .his grip is really tight n was hurting taani.R.V came forward n hold rey's hand n asked him to leave taani.

REY:its none of ur bussiness.so stay away .
R.V:it is my bussiness dude to protect my frnd frm ur kind of psycho.
REY:i m talking to my girlfriend.
taani: wat? r u serious.how could u rey.just leave me.i m not ur girlfriend .
rey's grip losens n R.V throughs his hand away frm taani.

REY:taani u r so stupid.dnt u think that all will come to knw the truth then wat will happen.
K.D:wat r u talking abt man?
SWAYAM:taani tum dobara same galti kaise kar sakti ho..
VICKY:definately ye dikhane ke liye tht she too hav talent.
SIMMI:oh plz taani.everyone knows ur truth.so plz stop making these stupid moves.
SHARON:taani we r just saying this for ur benefit.now everyone's just making fun of u.so y did u faked tht video.
taani is just blank .shes not responding to anyone

R.V:if u dnt knw the truth thn stay away okay.
K.D:how dare u talk to our friend like this .
panchi n kiya stands beside taani n pampering her.
PANCHI:plz taanu dnt start crying.they all dnt deserve this.
TAANI:no babes,i m not gona cry.
(all shocked except buddies...they knw their old tannu is back now)
TAANI:actually last 2 years mein itna roi hu na ki ab lagta h mera water tank khatam ho gaya h so ab nahi rone wali.
buddies smile over her frnds calm behaviour
TAANI:hey i got an idea.(turns to gang) thnks guys thank u so much.
(all confused) hey hum sab sub soch rahe the na ki kya field choose kare...so c'mon lets go to v.o sir .

all still confused but R.V got it what's cooking in his frnd's mind.

r.v:gr8 idea BBC.its the best option.
panchi:what's the idea tannu.humein bhi to batao.
TAANI:chal birdy raaste mein batati hu.

buddies went to v.p's office leaving confused ,shocked n angry gang behind.


V.P:ohk thats gr8 .
TAANI:yes ,sir.
V.P:so get ready for ur auditions in frnt of college.their rxn will decide whether its a gud idea or not.
buddies:we r ready sir.
V.P:okay .so being a G.S taani u arrange all things till evening.
TAANI: okay sir .


they all went out ...taani messaged evryone to gather in atrium at 6 .for some imp announcement n audition.
all confused but at 6 all gathers in atrium along wid D3 gang.
taani n group arranging some things on stage .
V.P enters n sits along wid other teachers for judging the buddies.
D3 gang is still confused.

------------------------chapter 3 ends----------------------------------------------

precap
shocked gang
taani's talent revealed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear what an awesome fantastic update its fabulous outstanding plz do update soon precap is just amazing

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