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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwwsome loved it just superb yaar thanx for pm n ha jaldi updated karna ha n pm bhi u r amazing writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome! RV,I seriously lv him 2 much in tis FF.stry is gng grt dr!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...! awesome 👏
continue soon n pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow !!

itz awesome blossom yaar !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both parts were superb...
finally get to see sm real tashan frm taani...
update soon n plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Both parts were awesome!
I'm so glad that Taani has such nice friends to support her. And I also love that she's taking a stand against the gang.
Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read the 3 parts, it's really interesting, I'm loving the confident taani n I'm loving her with her friends!!! Pls cont soon, n can u pls pm me when u continnue, don't want to miss a single update.

Ps, love the font of ur last update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update dear loved it very much😊
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chapter 4

buddies are setting musical instruments on stage ..
D3 gang confused...

all give their auditions n all were superb panchi have stage fright so she give audition along wid sid...nd now its taani's turn...shez nervous +afraid of rejection ...RV encourages her n she comes on stage ..

GUY 1-hey loser get off the stage...😡
girl 1-this stage is for winners not for losers...

guy2-no tricks gonna wrk in frnt of us so get down u looser.

all the time rey n swayam were just trying to cntrl their anger..
VICKY:humne to warn kiya tha guys but usse hi shauk h famous hone ka.😡😡😡

R.V comes on stage n takes the mic

R.V:stop it guys atleast let her sing...first listen her n then decide.😃
some girl-ya lets decide after her performance.

lights OFF ...spot light on taani...buddies standing at back wid musical instruments ...kiya n panchi as background singers..


taani starts --(WHO SAYS by selena gomez )

she starts

WOULDN'T WANNA BE ANYBODY ELSE...HEY (LUKING DOWN )

YOU MADE INSECURE,TOLD ME I WASN'T GUD ENOUGH (LUKING UP...PLAYING HER GUITAR )

BUT WHO R U TO JUDGE ,WHEN U'R A DIAMOND IN THE ROUGH (LUKING TOWARDS GANG )

I'M SURE U'VE GOT SOMETHINGS YOU'D LIKE TO CHANGE ABT UR SELF


BUT WHEN IT COMES TO ME...I WOULDN'T WANT TO BE ANYBODY ELSE (RAISING HER VOICE )

NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA X 2 (BY PANCHI N KIYA )

I'M NO BEAUTY QUEEN
I'M JUST BEAUTIFUL ME


NA NA NA NA NA NA NA X 2 (BY PANCHI N KIYA )


YOU'VE GOT EVERY RIGHT TO A BEAUTIFUL LFE ..C'MON

WHO SAYS,WHO SAYS U'RE NOT PERFECT ?

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT WORTH IT?

WHO SAYS U'RE THE ONLY ONE THAT'S HURTING ?

TRUST ME,THAT'S THE PRICE OF BEAUTY

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT PRETTY?

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT BEAUTIFUL,WHO SAYS??? (SINGING WID FULL CONFIDENCE ) (gang +all students shocked ...shareyam can see the pain in her eyes n can sense the pain in her voice )



IT'S SUCH A FUNNY THING ,HOW NOTHING'S FUNNY WHEN ITS YOU (LUKING AT D3 GIRLS )

YOU TELL'EM WHAT YOU MEAN,BUT THEY KEEP WHITING OUT THE TRUTH (LUKING AT D3 BOYS EXCEPT REY )

IT'S LIKE THE WORK OF ART ,THAT NEVER GETS TO SEE THE LIGHT
KEEP U BENEATH THE STARS WON'T LET U TOUCH THE SKY (NOW LUKING DIRECTLY IN REY'S EYES)


NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA X 2

I'M NO BEAUTY QUEEN,I'M JUST BEAUTIFUL ME

NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA X 2

you've got everyright to a beautiful life .c,mon

WHO SAYS ,WHO SAYS U'R NOT PERFECT? WHO SAYS U'R NOT WRTH IT ?

WHO SAYS U'RE THE ONLY ONE THAT'S HURTING ?

TRUST ME,THAT'S THE PRICE OF BEAUTY

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT PRETTY?

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT BEAUTIFUL,WHO SAYS???

WHO SAYS??????

WHO SAYS U'R NOT STAR POTENTIAL?
WHO SAYS U'R NOT PRESEDENTIAL ?
WHO SAYS U CAN'T BE IN MOVIES? LISTEN TO ME ,LISTEN TO ME

WHO SAYS U DON'T PASS THE TEST? WHO SAYS U CANT BE THE BEST?

WHO SAID?WHO SAID? WOULD U TELL ME WHO SAID THAT,YEAH
WHO SAID??(RAISED HER VOICE ) (COMING FORWARD ON STAGE WID FULL CONFIDENCE ..LIKE A PROFESSIONAL SINGER)
(REY TOTALLY SHOCKED)



WHO SAYS ,WHO SAYS U'R NOT PERFECT? WHO SAYS U'R NOT WRTH IT ?

WHO SAYS U'RE THE ONLY ONE THAT'S HURTING ?

TRUST ME,THAT'S THE PRICE OF BEAUTY

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT PRETTY?

WHO SAYS U'RE NOT BEAUTIFUL,WHO SAYS???

WHO SAYS?????? ???????

-----------------------------------SONG ENDS--------------------------------

everyone in shock...n rey was the first one to clap for taani..😊...thn all followed him...suddenly atrium was full wid aplauses for taani...👏
she got standing ovation frm V.P as well as other judges...

R.V goes on stage n hugs taani tightly...(rey is now super duper angry.😡.but taani's innocent face is just doing wrk of water on his anger )😳
REY:love u my STAR .. 😳(ADORING HIS TAANI )
now they come down the stage...
everyone (except D3 gang ) came forward n praises taani n her voice...some apologises for their behaviour n while apologising they mension those NDC cmmnts wala topic (rey ke dimag ki bati jali...😆😆...)
V.P sir came forward n inform buddies tht they can make a singing group coz they all r awsm...👏
all r just happy n starts shouting ..

K.D: three cheers for buddies...
buddies:hip hip hurray ..hip hip hurray...hip hip hurray...

swayam was really vry guilty for his beahviou.he just left the atrium without utering a wrd..but he was happy for taani..

rey was finding wrds n just started walkinh while R.V came forward n get taani n his arms...😡
R.V: i m so happy tannu...finally evrything is back to normal...n now no one will abuse u ...
K.D (came forward ):ya ri8 rv n tannu u were awsm...
R.V:ya tannu ..u r my star (*)😆😆
(now rey is fuming wid anger...is bandar ki himmat kaise hui meri taani ko star bulane ki .shez just my star ...only mine ...rey was busy in his thoughts suddenly amar came n get him back to his senses thn he notice no one was there )😆
all went to their respective homes...

---------------------------------------------------chapter 4 ends--------------------------------------------------------------

precap: tanveer's talk (taani +ranveer )
broken rey
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chapter 5

buddies on the way to taani's place...kesiya n sanchi in their car n our tanveer in RV's jeep...taani was lost somewhere...she was lost in her own thoughts...RV tries to make her smile , she was just faking smile...her heart was still crying...somewhere on the way to taayam's home RV stopped the jeep n get out of it...he take taani's hand n take her to some place...(place where RK n konkana goes in wake up sid )...they sat there ...taani was still lost in her thoughts...thn RV take her hand n keeps his hand on hers n ask her whats the problem...taani could not resist anymore...she just broke into tears...RV could not believe that he is so helpless...he could not help his frnd, his life...


here at rey's place ...rey was so worried abt taani n wanted to heal all her pain...the pain he saw while she was singing...she was trying to show tht shes strong but he could see the storm behind tht fake smile...he was cursing himself,coz he knws he is reason of her pain her tears...

thn something strikes his mind n he gets up n take his laptop...he opened college site n sees how college students cmnted rubbish abt taani...he didnt take much tym to understand all the situation..how taani was alone facing all this...he could feel the pain frm which she passed...

REY(crying ):Oh my god taani..tumne ye sab akele kyu face kiya...kya tum mujhe itna bhi nahi samajhti taani,...ek baar to mujhe bol ke dekha hota...main sab theek kar deta...

rey's soul(arre vo baar baar appear hota h na...uska heart,jo bhi h vo ):accha kya theek kar deta??

REY:haan sab theek kar deta...main sabko batata ki taani kitni innocent aur sweet h vo kabhi kisi ka bura nahi soch sakti n vo by default GS nahi bani h ..vo ye position deserve karti h...

RS:accha apne friends ko to samjha nahi paaya ...poore college ko kya samjhata>..

REY:wat do u mean??

RS:dude pehle apne friends ko to realise karata unki mistake...ki unhone kitna galat kiya h taani ke saath...n tu pehle khud to samajh leta.

REY:i knw ki maine taani ke saath rudely behave kiya...usse misunderstand kiya...par vo bhi to mujhe aakar bata sakti thi...ya sayad vo mujhe is layak hi nahi samajhti...us RV ke saath sab share kar sakti h thn y not me...

RS:accha to tu chahta h ki vo tere paas aati n tujhse help maangti...(rey confused )...par tu bhi to yahi chahta tha ki taani tujhpe dependent hona band kare...vo independent bane...par jab usne aisa kiya tab bhi tu usse hi blame kar raha h...nd usne RV ko ye sab bataya coz he understands her...vo uska frnd h...but tu sirf ek BF ke alawa kuch nahi ban paya n ab to vo bhi nahi h...

rey broke down in thousand pieces...he starts crying ...


scene shifts to tanveer --
RV(trying to make taani face him...but taani still hiding her face in his chest ...):tannu listen to me...wat happend tannu...rona band kar...kya hua h bata mujhe...
taani still crying face him...

TAANI:i lost him jemmie...

RV:tannu ,what r u saying...plz stp crying...i cant see u like this.

TAANI:jemmie i lost rey.

RV:but tannu wat happened...u wre happy today...than wat happened suddenly.

TAANI:u knw wat jemmie...i can never be happy without him...hez my life...hez the one for whom i breathe...god sent me down just for him...just to complete him...u knw i still remember his wrds whn he confessed his luv for me...jab unhone mujhse kaha tha ki taani main tumhare bina incomlete feel karta hu...but what now...ab unhe meri koi chinta nahi h...

RV:but tannu aisa hua kya tha tumhare beech...

TAANI(wiping her tears):i dnt knw jemmie...i dnt knw...its just that we dnt understand each other...evrything seems so perfect bt still something was missing btwn us...i dnt wat it was...i never wanted him to choose btwn me n his passion...but situations hi aisi thi ki unhe kisi ek ko choose karna pada but i was so happy ki unhone mujhe choose kiya...but may be vo apne issi decision ki vajah se aise behave kar rahe the...i dnt knw ki vo kya cheez missing thi jiski vajh se rey aur main ek saath nahi reh paaye...

RV:no taani plz dnt try...now get up...lets go...

TAANI:(wiping tears n taking a deep breath):yeah lets go jemmie its really late...bhai chinta kar rahe honge(then she realises what she said)..aajkal to bhai bhi mera wait nahi karte...mujhse bina mile hi so jaate h...(n becomes sad)..

RV:no babes,we r not going to ur home.

TAANI:what?? thn kaha ja rahe h.

RV:its a surprise dumbo,now get up.
(he made her stand n they both sit in his jeep n wents off)


REY"S place-

REY:to ab main kya karoon,(thn he looks tht his soul(RS) is disspeared now)

REY:ab mujhe hi apni taani ko vapas laane ke liye kuch karna hoga...maine hi hamesha usse galat samjha h...but ab nahi ...ab main apni taani ko vapis laakar rahoonga...taani i love u n now i knw ki is waqt pyar se jyada tumhe ek dost ki jaroorat h...haan DOSTI hi vo elemant h jo humare beech missing tha...main kabhi taani ka dost hi nahi ban paaya...n frndshp to love ka first step hota h n maine vhi step skip kar diya to rlation kaise suffessfull hota...but taani ab main tumhe samjhoonga ...as a BF,as a frnd n more as a human being...tumhare POV bhi samjhoonga...i love u taani n main tumhe loose karna afford nahi kar sakta.

episode 5 ends-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
precap: RV's surprise
RV angry on taani
guilty +sad syayam...taayam talk..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update...
I love new tani and her friends...
Update Soon!!!

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