Virika SS:Differences do not matter, or, do they?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys,

Today I am going to start a new SS.

I wanted to write this one as it can be different from every other stories as it is entirely supernatural.

Basically, I don't believe in ghosts or such spiritual powers, and thus I would like to tell you that this story is simply Fictional and should be read in that point of view.

Now here the story goes-

~PROLOGUE~

The man with the black-moustache pushed the sharp knife into my stomach and through the intestines making me feel the biggest pain I have ever went through.

When he pulled the knife out, I knew I was half-dead, slowly my hands started losing its strength, my eyes could hardly stay open, slowly I was falling into a sleep, a sleep from which I will never ever wake up.

I heard the man shouting, "Tie his hands and legs and leave him in the river, leaving no clues behind."

He killed me just because I did my job sincerely. Being a lawyer, I took the case against him. He threatened me to leave it. Not just once, but twice and even thrice, but I didn't care.

All because of it, I am losing my life, which I haven't even started living properly. Why God is doing this to me? Why?

I could feel my hands and legs being tied up. I was lifted by a group of goons. With all their power, they threw me, into the large river.

I went into the deeps and deeps of water and slowly my eyes closed !

I don't know how much time passed by, but I felt I was free, free of everything.

Just then I noticed that I was standing! STANDING ON AIR !

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That's all! I know that was short, but it's the prologue, I know you guys must be confused but everything will become clear soon.

I will continue only if I get a minimum of 6 comments. So please don't go without commenting and pressing the like button.

Love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really nice to hear
So continue soon n pm me
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This is so damn interesting.
Continue soon.
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omgg
interesting yaaar

is viren dead??? nooo
dont do this
i hope its just a dream please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting
plz continue soon n do pm me
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wow sounds absolutely brilliant cannot wait to start reading
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This sounds really interesting to me!!
Please continue soon 😊
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Hi guys!

Thanks to all those who commented!

Here the story goes-

Part 1:-

Realization of the UNBELIEVABLE FACTS !

Just the I noticed that I was standing! STANDING ON AIR !

I was confused! Have I got any supernatural powers after my sleep?

I felt as if I was alive, still alive !

All according to my knowledge, I am supposed to go to HEAVEN or HELL after my death but I am still on Earth.

I could see whole Chandigarh and I felt like I could fly without wings.

Slowly, slowly I landed in front of my huge house.

The atmosphere seemed to be changed.

The house was too crowded and the air was filled with vibrating sobs, weeps and cries.

I didn't understand anything. What happened to my house?

Step by step, I entered my home, no one seemed to notice me.

They were on their own world, praying deeply for someone !

Suddenly I noticed my maa aur badi maa, they were crying as well even more and more loudly than others did!

And Virat was standing there too, he was trying really hard to hold his tears and console them.

I looked everyone's expressions and took a fast look at the surroundings, and suddenly my eyes fell on something covered with white cloth lying there, probably a DEAD BODY !

But whose? I went onto take a much closer look and I was SHOCKED !

It was me, myself lying there lifeless means I AM DEAD !

No this cannot happen! I am here and I am alive, I consoled myself.

I wanted to shout, "Maa, Mein Zinda Hu or mein yahaan hu." but my sound didn't seem to come out or I felt like I don't have a sound.

I thought I will touch them and make them aware of my presence.

I went towards my ma and touched her, but I couldn't, I couldn't feel her presence nor she could feel mine.

I didn't know what to do ! How can I make them feel that I am here and I am not dead!

Leaving everyone behind, I headed towards my room to get some peace and think of some other way.

My heart cried, was I losing my dear ones? Why god? Why did you send me back here? Why?

When I reached my room's door, I didn't have to open it, I entered through it like air does.

What has happened to me?

I went and sat on my bed. Opposite of my bed was my room's mirror and I was shocked to realize that I couldn't see myself on the mirror meand I AM INVISIBLE.

Finally I had to agree with the fact, with the unbelievable fact that I am no more means I AM DEAD!

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Hope you all enjoyed the part.

If you liked it then please don't go without commenting!

Comments really mattes alot to me.

With love,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, Please please comment! :) Don't discourage me :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The concept is different from others
the update was nice
Looking forward to it

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