Virika SS:Differences do not matter, or, do they? - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
story is really going fab
loved it
superb
poor viren died 😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Hello everyone!

I am back with another update. Thanks to all those who commented, your comments really mean a lot to me and that really appreciates me to update soon.

Before going to the update, I want to say, my other story "Virman SS: Unrealized LOVE" is currently on a hold, I will update it as soon as this story nears its end(very soon).

Here is the update! ENJOY!

Part 4

Mission starts!

~~~Viren~~~

The urge in me to take revenge kept on increasing. I never knew from where to start, but the determination and confidence in me made me feel strong and I felt I will do it, how difficult it might be.

The silence was suddenly rent by someone at the door. It was Virat. He entered; he was gazing all around the room. I could see pain in his eyes getting transformed into tears.

I stared deeply on him when he moved towards the photo hanged onto the wall where me and Virat were standing and hugging each other. It was making me remember those happy times when we shared everything with each other; we were not just brothers, but best friends too. I knew he was thinking of the same.

Finally I saw him crying his heart out, the tears he were trying to hold on were finally flowing down uncontrollably. I wanted to go beside him and wipe them off and tell him that, "Your Bhai will always be there for you."

But I couldn't, all I could do was to sit there looking at Virat crying. It's true that I cannot console them, but I could definitely save many lives that might fall into the same situation like me. I could stop that person from expressing his non-humanity and cruelty on someone else.

Yes, that's the only thing I could do, but I am going to do it for justice, justice I couldn't prove when I was alive, the justice I am going to prove when I am dead.

I stood up, closed my fists tight and went out taking a last look at Virat who was still looking at the photo but not crying, maybe, because the tears must have dried out.

At the living room, there weren't much people, many must have left. I knew the funeral must have been over and my body have been burnt.

I stepped out of my home, rose up onto air; I still didn't know where I was going or where I must go. I kept on moving forward, thinking really hard, what I could do and what was the best thing to do right now for the mission to be accomplished.

Yes, the court must be the best option. They will definitely have the details about that man, who killed me. I flew fast to the court office.

When I entered into it, invisibly, I saw many lawyers working on their cases, many having interviews to the victims, some sitting leisurely and some searching for files. Searching the file about him, yes, that's the thing I must do. At least, I could find his address. But I hardly knew which file to search in, I stood there looking at the surrounding, wishing I had a voice to go and ask the person about him.

Suddenly as if God sent, a girl came up and asked sternly, "Can I have the details of crimes committed by Mr. Sandeep Malhotra?"

Yes, that's the same person who killed me, wondering what she has got to do with it, I went nearer. While one peon handed her the file, I peeked above her shoulder to have a look. The photo was the same. Many of the cases were unsolved in which he was a suspect.

Now only I noticed the girl, she was looking exactly like an angel. I could see tear stains on her cheeks and pain in her eyes. I wondered, who she was, but I instantly had a liking towards her. She looked beautiful in every aspect; in fact, I found her voice extremely sweet!

She continued reading the file, at some points, I could see pain in her eyes, sometimes surprise and sometimes anger. After reading, I saw her noting something in her notepad. Before she returned the file, I had a quick read of his address and memorized it.

Thanking the peon, she went out, I followed, her beauty attracted me, finally I made myself realize that I am just a soul, I didn't even have a body with me and I am not supposed to foeget about my mission. When she disappeared into the streets, I stood there staring at her.

Suddenly, I heard someone muttering, "Kill my daughter too."

When I turned back to see who it was, I was astonished to see the same person who killed me. Wondering what he was up to, I stood there watching his evil smirk.

~~~~~

I hope the chapter wasn't confusing, if it was, then you will have to read it again. If you are still confused, then everything will be cleared out in future updates.

Plus I was planning to write a new FF, on sisterly bond of two twin sisters, should I? Do tell me!

Please comment and hit the like tab, expecting a nice response.

Till next time,

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
wow first one to comment
party time
oh no his name is such a bas****
he want to kill his daughter also
hope viren saves jeevika
dis was an fab update
loved it
specially d way viren said about jeevika
great work
continue soon
Edited by surbhi1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Amazing
Yr an awesome writer
I am loving this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Fab update...
Poor viren can't do anything for his family :'(
that girl might be jeevika??...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Reserved
Unreserved

Loved the update

It was amazing

Aww Viren can't do anything to stop his family from having pain

Love Viren's reaction when he saw Jeevika

Hope Jeevika brings helps Viren

Hoping that Viren can save Jeevika from her evil father

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon

Can't wait for the next update
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
superb cannot wait to read more and your new story idea sound awesome please write it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Amazing
Viren is falling for Jeevika while he is dead already loved it
Jeevika is in danger hope Viren save her
It was well written babe
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
osm...
fab...
vry senty...
jeevs dad is vry cruel...
wanna read more...
updaet asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
superb update!
Loved it.

continue soon and thanks for the PM

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