Virika SS:Differences do not matter, or, do they? - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Amazing story!
It's so different n interesting!!
Update soon and plz me if u can!
Thanks! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys!

After a very long time, I am back with an update. Sorry for keeping you guys waited, but, I am really lazy to type. :P

Thanks to all those who commented.

Here the update goes.

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Part 3:-

The Revenge

~~~Viren~~~

I sat in the room not knowing what to do. Beautiful memories I had all through my life, from childhood to now, kept on replaying in my mind. Those memories stabbed my heart like sharp knives. Each time, I thought I was dead, I felt more and more hurt. It was simply unbearable for me.

Time went on. Still I sat there, my emotions changed, from tension to sadness and from sadness to rage. Rage on that person, who killed me without any mercy. The anger suddenly turned into thought of revenge.

Yes, revenge. That's the best solution. I will take revenge on him. Making him realize the same pain I went through. I will kill him inch by inch, making him apologize for all the crimes he have committed.

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~~~Jeevika~~~

I cried for seconds, minutes and for hours, and finally slept. During the sleep, I kept on dreaming about my dad, how much I trusted on him and how abruptly he broke my trust. From beautiful memories, the dreams suddenly changed into horrifying scenes. My dad killing innocent men, taking a knife and stabbing someone…

"NOOO..", I woke up with a jerk. No, it's not possible, no, it's not possible, I kept assuring myself even though I know my dad is a criminal. It was really unbearable for me.

For minutes, I sat there, uncountable tears escaped my eyes. Suddenly I felt strong, strong enough to accept that my dad is not a good man and he is a criminal.

Anger for him built in me. I just wanted to express it, but, how?

"How? How?", I asked myself. Finally I came to an answer, revenge!

Yes, I will take revenge on him. I will make him pay back for all that he have done to people. No matter he is my dad! He will feel guilty for everything. I sat there when confidence built in me like fire.

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Both of them had the same determination to take revenge on the same man. Without knowing each other, they made their minds prepared for the battle between justice and crime. Mission starts!!

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I know this update is really short. But as you guys know, I write chapter by chapter. As the name says, I wanted it to be about revenge and I have clearly expressed the theme. So the chapter ends here.

I hope you all enjoyed reading these.

I expect a better response this time, please guys, comment and hit the like button. It really means a lot to me.

Thank You!

Linaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Why no one is commenting?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awesome update!
Loving the story!
Continue soon and with a longer one this time šŸ˜‰
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Nice one!
Its a really nice concept!
Update soon n pm me too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Diffrent concept but like it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Just read all thchapters
And have to say
It is brilliant
Do update soon and pm me please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Just read all the chapters, amazing concept you have going on, gets interesting with each update, can't wait for the next update, please do update soon :)) and please do pm me :))
Edited by Kryanian08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Reserved
Unreserved

The update was lovely

It was fabulous

Love how both want to take revenge on Jeevika's dad

Can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for commenting guys! Hugs!!!!šŸ¤—Love you all! ā¤ļø

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