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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

I love this story and love this Arnav more than any other.

He's started to open up a bit.

He's a recluse during the day but talks to her at night.

Love how Poor Khushi drinks thzt bitter coffee just to sit with him.

Garima is such a sweetheart for having dpent her life looking after Khushi nd Payzl who are not even related to her. Thankfully, people like her do exist in this world.

Arnav is a good human bring, he is caring but shies away from people.

Hope you will tell us the reaon for that oon.

Love the banner.

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

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I love the Arnav's in your story but also love your Khushis, how they both strong and independent.

It was a great chapter with them feeling quite a pull towards each other. Loved how she asked Arnav to look over her contract and his surprise that she is an artist. Can't wait to see when he actually sees one of her paintings.

Still curious about Arnav's past! Garima is such a selfless person to take the girls in despite no relation.

The kiss on the knuckle made me smile! Can't wait for next chapter!

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

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i like Khushi a lot! she's recognised dat Arnav makes her feel diffrnt and rather good! and she accepts this fact..! she wanna help him!

she waits for him at night.., makes coffee for him and loves to see him smile..!

Arnav is as open as he is mysterious..! he lauhs yet at times ignores.. he's rude yet soo caring!

he's hurt yet so helpful..! wanna know more of him..!

and i like these night chit chats! just awesme..!:)😊

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Unres

An awesome update...loved it...finally Arnav is having a little bit of communication with buaji and khushi...this update was beautifully written...can't wait to read more!!! :)

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

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Nidhi this Arnav might just give a good fight to 'foster' in winning over my love...BAS.

If this is the way i feel for him by Chap 4 then i would be a goner as the story progresses further along...

I was smiling like a idiot when he said ' You can ask, just don't expect a response' I loved that dialogue...

Wow Buaji is super awesome here...such a loving lady to take in 2 little girls and call them her own...

No amazing visuals here SLB but can i tell you that i could see everything being played out in front of my eyes...like a telecast.

Arnav laughing, their entire interaction in the kitchen 'one night', arnav kissing khushi fingers, arnav applying burn jel, their interaction in the kitchen 'another night', arnav going through khushi contract, everything every single thing...

Just goes to show what a good job you are doing of penning this story down..

In fact this chapter could easily have been called - 'It all started One Night'

And also this so different from FL...thats the best part. Again pointing out towards your multi talent...

It will be fun to read how this arnav finally falls in love with Khushi.

And i trust you completely to give me a awesome story which will leave me wanting for more...

And can i congratulate Anupama on putting together such an awesome Banner..

Simply the best...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

I actually should not be reserving as I don't know when I will comment...but what the hell ...and now that Liza has reserved...the coast is clear!

Nidhi...

I love your Arnav,...I want him! Even more than Charu...I assure you!

I loved this update...

I loved their growing relationship ...I love and can picture her looking for opportunities to get a chance to find him a alone and just be with him...I loved the way she watches him from far...just that is enough for her for now...she does not want her presence to disturb him...as she knows if does...I love how she enjoys hearing him talk about something personal for a change...I love the emotions his laughter evokes in her...she is thrilled to see him happy, free of his past and pain...even if it is temporary...I loved how she observes how he drinks his coffee...I loved how he could sense her and she notices him looking for her and not wanting to break his flow of conversation where he is finally letting go...she runs away...

I loved how lost in his thoughts she is that she doesn't notice the tea only to be reprimanded by him for her carelessness ...I loved the way he feels just looking at her...something about her that makes him feel the way he does...it was so pure and beautiful...words were not needed...the silence between them spoke volumes ...his tum theek ho...gave me shivers so could visualise what it did for her...I loved how he observes her and is mesmerised by her...

He has managed to make those words sound like a caress...this Arnav really has something so special about him...you write him so brilliantly...I will never fire of him...or telling you so...!

I loved how she in fear of him leaving the kitchen is trying to strike up a conversation in order to prolong his time with her and asks him if he wants some pie ...her blabbering away...showing.her anxiety at his presence ...I love how he blurts out about his diabetes and then apologises for her bluntness and then the kiss...on the knuckles but it was so sensuous...along with her I felt warm and fuzzy too...causing her heart beats to accelerate confirming that there was definitely more between them than meets the eye!

I love how he volunteers and dresses her wound...loved how she thanks him for today and the beach ...and love how his reactions to her results in a smile on her face...

I loved Khushi s sense of gratitude towards buaji...she does not want to be the cause of any grief to her ...even unknowingly...especially knowing the truth about buajis large heart and the effort, pain and sacrifices she makes to adopt her and Payal and provide them with love, security and family...

Love how she takes the opportunity to ask Arnav for advice...seeing him or rather hearing him around ...knowing fully well that the water in his room had been refilled...loved how his presence makes her heart flutter...Nidhi you have written them so naturally ...love how she greedy for his time...finds reasons to prolong his presence...loved how he is aware that it is her who makes his coffee every morning...there is something so significant and special in that action...I absolutely adored him saying "You can ask, just don't expect a response"!

He is I guess still trying to come to terms with his feelings...the ones she evokes in him...the feeling of comfort and more that looking at her and being with her bring...so,he feels during the day if he avoids her they will not feel so real...it's almost he is struggling to keep himself aloof and is not succeeding ...

I loved the last paragraph...loved how she waits for him every night...finding reasons to linger on with the hope that she gets to meet him...and how when he does not she is disappointed at her expectations from him...for herself ...and when finally he does come to her ...then does that restlessness she has been feeling by his absence get cured...and how just to sit and be with him ...she drinks that bitter coffee...

Your words just flew so beautifully...the visuals and emotions you created...magical!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Now this is what I call an amazing, mindblowing chapter. It was brilliantly written and I could visualize each and every scene that was being played out.

First of all, I must declare that I am officially in love with this Arnav...Here is a guy who has had a bad past filled with possibly painful memories, yet he is dealing with it in such a mature way. Apart from nis quite understandable need for space and solitude, he is never rude or obnoxious to people around him. There is such an alluring aura of wisdom and maturity surrounding him intertwined with intriguing melancholy. He has never made people around him suffer because of his ongoing emotional turbulence. Like an ocean, even though the depths hold dangerous currents nad turbulence, the surface for most part remains calm and serene...

Did you mention how old Arnav was?

Coming to the chapter, I loved the kitchen scene and their budding awareness of each other. I feel scared for Khushi. I really don't want her to get hurt. And the part where Khushi sees him laugh for the first time, I could literally visalize BS's face.

Loved how AR helped her with reviewing her contract...and felt impressed with Khushi too.

Looking forward to the next update...😊

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Aasmaali

@Aasmaali

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

I'm so sorry, i forgor that i reserved it so i commented on page 76.
Sorry again... So dumb of me...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

waiting but now the wait has ended 😃

you have a very light touch with this story. i think that is what i am enjoying most of all. it is the little things that ultimately matter. recognising footsteps, taking care of a little burn, simple stuff like that is the building block of life.

garima's character is awesome. but this was ultimately an arnav-khushi update

Edited by segad - 12 years ago

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

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I just loved all those coffee makings and kitchen scenes...

As soon as i read the first kitchen scene about Arnav's lips on Khushi's hands it just sent shudders down my spine!!!!!😳

It is like literally i am waiting for Arnav to come down,... The update was so very realistic that i was just reading and reading and finally it came to an end!!!😭

I just cannot tell you how much i am in love with Arnav in THT and My Foster in ALS!!!!! They are just fab!!!!👏👏

Waiting for more in healing touch!!! Hope they get united asap as i am not able to wait!!!!😳😆

Edited by barauni - 12 years ago