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Posted: 12 years ago
It makes my day when you update! ahh they have a huge chemistry and I wonder who saw them together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav bought gifts for dem...😊 Awww how much khushi havr changed arnav... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!!!
d update ws simply amazingg :D
Arnav givin a surprise to d n reading out a story ws really sweet!
m glad they dont think of each other as brother and sister!!
d chocolate part ws really nice :)
i guess his mom has cum to knw!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
iss attraction ko kya naam doon

bless arnav

I think its anji who caught them
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update.
again & again thank u for ur frequent update.
u cant imagine how happy i am
love this
btw i think arnav's mother witnessed it :(
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Posted: 12 years ago

This couple bring out the best in each other and that is the most beautiful part of this story for me. While Khushi thinks Arnav inspired her to help those children, Khushi has inturn helped Arnav understand that helping the community goes beyond writing a cheque. In deed it goes beyond money ... to the love and happiness that you spread through contribution of your personal time. This was an emotional moment for me too Rach😭. It wasn't just Khushi whose eyes were glistening ... mine were too and this is happening at regular intervals while reading your updates. Thank you for giving these meaningful events of life 👏


I like the way you cover every angle in your story. Yes, sometimes when you grow up together, one or two of those friends could become as close as siblings and I liked the way you addressed it and the relief they both feel is awwweeesssooommme 😆


Just last week I was telling my husband how s@%y the cadburys silk chocolate ad was and now you give us the scene albeit with Khushi eating eating a warmed up chocolate. I loved the way Arnav sits behind Khushi and she is trapped between his legs ... it not only enhances the sensuality but also shows the long term closeness one feels to the other person. That was one helluva dhak dhak scene 😳. So the romance is blooming full time.


I don't remember Naina calling Arnav 'Chotey'. Need to go back and check on that. So, the unhappy eyes could be Manorama mami's... my prediction 😉


Super one ... enjoyed it... read it thrice already 🤪



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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I am speechless like always.
I was smiling as well as crying all the time while reading.

Some time they were happy tears and some time they were sad tears.
Loving each moment of their new relationship growing by the time.
Deep inside both know that they are attracted to each other but holding for one or the other way.

Are those eyes seeing arnav and Khushi are of arnav's mother?
I think so she is going to appose their relation.

I might not say every time but you rocked every time I read the update.
And in todas also you were fantastic.

Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another mind blowing update.
Just gotten into reading the last few chapters and I must say that you are doing a great job with this story.

Now Arnav is caring towards the orphans, that is petty wonderful
And I know that one day Khushi will bring us a whole new Arnav.

Will be waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav gve al his books to dem .. Woowww i m loving reading dem
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dear.. 👏


arnav narrating the story to the kids..he realised the happines that coming from those simple gestures like his best friend and when he says"i think the person who brought the happiness in those orphan's lives deserve some love from me" i am like



me too was holding my breath while waiting for kushis answer even though i know tht a sister-brother relationship is not exist in btwn them..
and the chocolate eating moment..i can visualise them sitting in the steps wit kushi trapped in btwn arnav's legs..and yeah time stood still when he licked the chocolate off her fingers...

and who is that unhappy witnes..anjali?or arnav's ma or pa??

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