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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Once again an amazing chapter...👏
You left me spellbound with your writing.. It was P.E.R.F.E.C.T for me..

Every single bit of this update inculcated emotions in me..

The kids enthusiasm on receiving gifts from arnav was infectious, his story telling infused them with joy...😊 I could imagine everything as if it was happening in front of me...

Sometimes i was emotional, sometimes i couldn't stop my laughter and some things were just beautiful...

when Arnav was sitting behind her, when he liked the chocolate on her finger, when he ruffled her hairs was just Picture Perfect...👍🏼

But i really wonder who was that unhappy person.. His father or his mother?? 😕

Fabulous update... and i really really really LOVED it...❤️❤️

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update...😊😊

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

I always forget that I should keep a tissue in my hand when I read your updates! 😳

Loved the reactions of all of them when they went to the orphanage. And the big question of 'brother' and 'sister'. A bit hilarious, but in the end, holding my breath too for the answer!!!

Was it the nani who was looking from the corner of the house?

Yep, you are right! Not everyone who laughs is happy!!!

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#643

What a beautiful story you've been weaving..it took me a couple of days to catchup, but finally here.

I love the endearing innocence of their relationship, and its gradual progression to the mature, unexplored territory now.

The setting sounds fabulous.

To read about arnav's childhood and to see him as such a loving man..is a first. I am sure there is still the angry young man, the cynically rich tycoon somewhere.

I love the societal issues you tackle through your story, interesting. Also issues like abandoning friends, moving on, growing up..all those things so well captured.

Ranvijay and Arnav's dadi have to be my favouritest characters. So much to them, than meets the eyes!

The path is surely not going to be filled with cherry blossoms, if the pair of eyes watching them was any indication.

Really looking forward to where you take this...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Done reading ur d new chp nw waiting for sunday thanku for mntning it .. Its feels so relaxed of d day mntn for d ff update ..

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Sweet update jz lik d chocolate
Jz gng to grab a molten choc yummm

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

great update. Amusing that Arnav was horrified that Khushi might have sisterly feelings for him😊

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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Nice update.

So arnav's mother seen him.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Lovely Update!❤️

Arnav brought gifts,candies,also gave his books to those kids..So thoughtful of him to narrate the stories.Subconsciously he is doing it for making right what went wrong in past.He is doing it for Khushi,but also aware of his own happiness when he small smiles lit up on those kids face.Truly heartwarming piece to read.<3

I loved how he brought chocolate for Khushi ,of her favourite.
The 'you think of me as brother?' and 'you think of me as sister?'...was so 😆 reflecting their feelings...but hardly they thought about it ,just sighing in relief at 'NO'.Arnav's nervousness to know Khushi ans was so palpable.

aah!My fav part in the update,Khushi sitting on a step,and Arnav a step above ,spreading his legs side so Khushi trapped betn. Them ☺️licking away the chocolateits so lovely to visualise them like this.

Unhappy eyes?hmm,Arnavs mum may be..😳

Loved the update :D