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U gotta be kidding me...!!!...You've started a whole new FF..!!! feeling sooo happy...I loved ur previous FF: Mirage...Thanks for writing another one. though I can't comment regularly. sorry for that. I've found abt this FF from here...

"I was just doing what you did for me."

that summed up the whole chapter for me. honestly, that one dialogue held the essence of the entire chapter. She's still so smitten, she's obliged, she's connected, she's so closely knit to all his memories, all that he did for her. She has still held on to the little things. Brings tears to my eyes. its so beautiful.

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sonia

Being self-centred isn't bad, is it? 😉

Absolutely wonderful chapter ... I really love the fact that your characters have layers...it will be fantastic to see how arnav slowly falls in love with khushi 😳...Yes I am sure that it will be Arnav who will fall in love first...thanks for giving us such wonderful story 🤗

I am not sure where I fit in with your reader description, this story does not have the usual bells and whistles of a normal love story, you did warn us in the beginning, it is not the bells and whistles which make a love story always, sometimes we forget why we love them, in your words I can see the why factor, one by one, this chapter your showed why she thinks so highly go m, like when he became her friend even though she was an orphan and then her only best friend, and she returns the same to the orphan kids. This warmed my heart. Arnav reacted the same way he did when he was a kid when he got to know what an orphan was, it's like the lost kid was finding his way back and let go of the guilt, and everyone is seeing the Arnav they lost one by one...

Oh I think for me is when he let her give him massages that was for,me wheb hw fall in love.

So overwhelmed that Arnav could think beyond his comfort level when he saw the kids.

But am still concerned that although Arnav is being shown to be less aloof, what will happen when he does realise that he loves Khushi? And even if that love will be accepted by the rest of the family?

it was nice n emotional update how poor kids treated by society

Wonderful! I hope Arnav's mother doesn't rebuff Khushi, see as she was the one who brought about the good change in Arnav!

I was so waiting 4 d update :) it had been 2 days nd just now saw u updated :D
i loved d update...the most loved parts were 1) wen khushi brought dem food nd the happiness that was glowing on the children's faces
2) wen arnav hugged his mother frm behind..dat was an aww part...
Thanks 4 the update..loved it..plz update soon