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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for ur update.i m stalking for 2 days.i just luv it & don't want to miss it .
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww loved it dear...
khushi is now a new chapter for arnav...
she can only giv happiness to every one...
hop she wil get the all hapiness...
best part of the story is wen the child offering fud to arnav...
so arnav shows glimpses of annyav..
really a warm update...
thanx a ton for writing so beautifully...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Your story is so beautiful and touching, I can't even describe it with words. I had tears in my eyes while reading about the kids and orphanage. I could never have guessed that Khushi goes through the trouble of carrying those heavy bags almost every day so she can bring a smile too their faces although she herself is not privileged. That whole part was poignant as well as heartwarming.

Arnav unknowingly made her happy in their childhood by simply being her friend. But the unfortunate part is he was so consumed by his guilt for fifteen years that he failed to realize he meant the world to her and in the process he also distanced himself from his loved ones, who longed for his presence in their lives.

But he is making amends, and although he can't go back and change the last fifteen years, he'll do his best to make up for it. 😊

I loved the mother-son bit. Naina has also noticed the positive change in her son and she wants to know who brought this change. How will she react when she finds out who the person is? That will be interesting to find out.

Dadi is such a fascinating character. I feel she reduced Khushi's loneliness in Arnav's absence, even it was a little bit in those fifteen years by being a friend and Khushi did the same for dadi.

A beautiful update. 👏👏👏

PS: She said Annyav...aww. 😳

I am perfectly fine with these random chapters, if they are at all random.😳 Every chapter is worth reading more than once and you're one of the few writers who inspire me to think about every dialogue, every character and I end up typing such long comments.

Don't worry about the frequency of updates. You're doing a wonderful job and on top of that giving us 2-3 updates per week. You're literally spoiling us😆...not that I mind.😉😳

Edited by incandescent - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was just beautiful, in fact ALL your updates are beautiful!

what I like about your stories are, all your characters do have flaws yet we can't help but feel they are perfect! the way you build up the character on every new chapter! I'm at awe! giving us tiny tiny snippets of their emotional state!

we get to see a new side of their character with every new chapter you write!

I remember reading the last chapter or epilogue of Mirage n discovering another new side to that Arnav!

I hope you know JUST how BRILLIANT you are at what you do!!

P.S. before reading every new chapter I HAVE to look at the banner for about 10mins! 😆 I LOVE that banner!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
i know many readers hav more articulate n somber words than me to appreciate u,, i m just a chit of a girl,,, may b i cant do justice to acknowledge ur talent,, but hav just one thing to say,, the way u tell ur stories clearly reflects tht u r a beautiful soul,,, God bless u,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. It's so heart warming to know that khushi is feeding these kids from her own money and goes through all the trouble to help them. And the reminder of her saying that hunchback is better than going hungry made me are khushi is a whole different light.

Thank u for the wonderful update and getting the leads to spend more time with each other. M

I love these kinds of chapters. Lighthearted yet very meaningful to their relationship
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Posted: 12 years ago
In ol d updates today update was d bestest ... I love dis update of todays one .. And yes u were ryt we ol were excepting a update frm d last two days finally u gve it .. Thannkkkuu so much for the lovely update ... 😊 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bt u didnt mntnd for u d next update ...??? 😔 Plzzz mntn it .. 😉 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!just an amazing update. though, this update was kind of random, it did give us an insight of what khushi is and how much of an effect arnav has on khushi. khushi is just too sweet.. the way arnav behaved with his mother after meeting the kids reminded me of how arnav reacted when he came to know khushi was an orphan before they became best friends. khushi is bringing the old arnav back slowly..please update the next chap soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update dear...👏 sometimes we really don't bother about the things and person we have in life... and we realize their value when they are not with us...

I wish i could see such selfless person in real... Loved to see Arnav changing a bit...❤️❤️

It was really awesome..👏

Do update soon...😊😊
Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago

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