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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Update is not ready. So I don't have any other choice.

u r so...

now i m just going to think about a next chapter whole day😔

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

Chapter 9 : RK I love you ❤️❤️

Did I say I love RK ?? 😳😳

No Seriously when he proposed to take Khushi with them, I had a huge smile on my face !!

This guy is really a Cupid ! 😳😳

He has planned everything !! A brainfull guy, who absolutely wants to achieve his mission !!

I loved the aprt in which he 'forced' Khushi to take the front seat in the car 😆😆

And Dadiji, patners in crime ?? 😎😎

Seriously what an awesome jodi : Dadi and RK !! 😳

In fact I think Dadiji may know much more things than we think she does !

OKay, Now Lets talk a bit of the main characters ! I should not forget them 😆😆

Gosh Khushi knows what un menage a trois ?? 😲😲

My reaction was similar to Anjali and Arnav 😆😆

This Khushi knows how surprise us ! And I'm sure she hides a lot of things which may leave us gob smacked 😆😆

"Yes, we did." All three responded simultaneously, but Khushi's eyes instantly focussed on Arnav. He had a small smile on his face and that sight somehow, made her feel happy.

😃😃

Khushi playing chess alone made feel really bad !! With each chapter you made us realize that being alone has lots of consequences on our daily routine ! 😕😕

I was never alone, so I find it difficult to understand Khushi !

I even used to play cars with my brother but never played alone 😕😕

I should thank you, because I become more mature reading this FF ! 😊😊

And Khushi playing alone to chess remind me a book I read a long time ago on a guy who had only a chess board to entertain himself : that guy became a mental playing alone !! Thank God our Khushi is sane !!

The last part was awesome !! I'm so proud of Arnav 😃😃

He finally realized how much Khushi missed him and how much he hurted her going to London !

A strange set of emotions were emerging within him, feelings he never knew existed within him.

Feelings he never knew that existed between the two of them.

😳😳

Wonderfully written 👏👏

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

Chapter 10 :

The first 10 lines were just amazing

Seriously I don't know how you do to write SO well !! I think I can't enough time that you're a gifted writer !! I really mean it 👏👏

This hug had something magical 😳😳

Arnav didn't know what was happening to him. It was like he was high on cocaine. Why did he feel euphoric with that one hug?

🤣🤣

That remind me two persons : a friend who said that Love is the more powerful drug 😆😆

and RK (from MB) who said Whisky is less risky than Ishq

🤣🤣

Arnav Dear, You're fallin in Love 😳😳😃

Oh I forgot to mention : I love Khushi and Dadi's bounding !!

Khushi is really a nice person, and Dadi well I just love her 😃😃

And yeah I said I love Mami, but I didn't like when she objected Arnav's proposition saying Khushi is a servant

I know she's right, but that was so rude !! 😡😡

Well at least she's not hypocrite.

I loved Arnav and Khushi's exchange !

Arnav inviting Khushi as a friend, Khushi declining !!

I thought Khushi was living in a dreamland, but with this chapter I've seen that she was in fact quite practical and down to earth !!

I like this Khushi 😉😉

Sometimes I like Arnav, sometimes he leaves me indifferent while Khushi gains my respect with each chapters 😃😃

No RK in this chapter, but I still love him 😳😳

He would be awesome in a black tuxedo with blue tie

A Chapter full of Arnav and Khushi 😉😉

obviously it was wonderful !!

PS : don't mind my mistakes 🤓🤓

I feel like my english is worse day by day

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

Chapter 11

I can't interpret it, but I feel like the fascination that Khushi has for King and Queen, may be important !! First you mentionned it in a FB, then with the chess part and again now !!

mmmh 🤔🤔

In fact it remind me a movie !! In which the heroine was always picturizing herself as a Queen (she also was an orphan brought by her Dadi) so maybe unconsciously wants also to become a Queen ?? 😲😲

The twist, mmh it may be a marriage or a job but personnaly I think it's marriage because 'they can wait' and a job doesn't wait ! 🥱

In fact I think it would be more interesting than a job offer !

A job offer Arnav would be happy because Khushi wouldn't be their servant, so their relationship would be less difficult, BUT a marriage proposal may bring more possessiveness and more intensity and a very frustrated Hero 😆😆😳

RK and Dadi ! They're officially my favourite characters of this FF !! 😃😃

Just like Khalid and Aman !! 😳😳

Why do I like him ?? Because they're funny !! Seriously what an amazing exchange !! 😆😆

I loved it !! And lieutenant General, even if he's dead I like him !! LOL

Seriously reading that chapter I thought Dadi may know much more than we thought !! But you denied it !!

But we should note that Ranvijay went to Dadi to talk about that and not to any other elder !! Ranvijay isn't stupid, so ... Dadi and RK rock !! 😎😎

Arnav and Khushi part was awesome !!

I so wanted to be with them and eat Chole Bature and Chicken tikka 😆😆

First I didn't like when Arnav proposed to go somewhere else, but then I realized that he wanted to invite her 😉😉

That part so cute and so light !!

Finally the hug didn't bring too much damages 😃😃

And their friendship is still alive 😃😃

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

Chapter 12

Btw another question about Dadi 😉

Does she talk in English or Hindi with Arnav ?? She's Britain and Arnav lives there, so it may be more logic if they speak in English, right ??

I guess Khushi understands English as she watches movies with Dadi 😃😃

"I'm sure she is good." Arnav replied, flashing his lopsided smirk at his Dadi.

Reading that I went to gutter land ☺️🤣

Don't ask me why 😆😆

OKay, Now another question 😆😆

Now Dadi has guessed that Arnav and Khushi are more than friends, but did she realise that before or after her conversation with Ranvijay ???

Anyway, I liked the way Arnav sat on the floor, so Khushi could sit on the bed 😳😳

Finally he does care for Khushi (yeah I had some doubts at the beginning 😕😕)

And how both of them forget Dadi's presence !!

Then back to gutter land 😆😆

I know I'm too naughty 😆😆

Arnav falling asleep on Khushi 😳😳😃 so cute !!

And Dadi and Khushi's bonding is really good !!

I think Khushi lied when she said she didn't have any friend : she did have Dadi 😉😉

It was cold. Why was it cold?

And he was wet. Why was he wet?

Nothing made sense.

He was sleeping beside the warm fireplace, a cosy blanket enveloping him. So why did he feel cold and wet?

And then he heard voices. Two female voices to be precise.

"You're evil'" And something, something. He couldn't hear it clearly.

"It's three hours, Khushi'" he heard another voice. Why was he hearing voices? Where was he?

And he felt wet again. His face was wet, he realised. Was it raining?

"Arnav!" he heard the older voice and slowly opened his drowsy eyes to find hazel ones smiling above him.

"Hi!" he replied dreamily, smiling at her and suddenly felt cold, freezing water being sprayed all over his face.

Taliyaa 👏👏

Why ?? That was wonderfully written !!

Exactly the feeling we have when we're sleeping and hear people around us speaking !!

You're such a realistic writer !! You're sure you don't want to publish any of your work ?? 😡😡

@ RED 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣

Dadi is really Evil 🤣🤣🤣

and I like evil people 😈😈

The rest of the chapter was just perfect, I just ate each and every word !!

Arnav and Khushi are made for each other !! Arnav is starting to understand Khushi and he can't bear seeing her suffering !!

Thank you ; Sorry are words that we use daily, but here I felt like those words have taken Arnav and Khushi's relationship to another level !! I know it seems silly, but that's what I really felt 😆😆

In fact after this chapter, I can't understand why this girl and boy haven't realize that it's no more friendship, but something more !! 😆😆

I truelly enjoyed reading this one !!

All will feel relieved after reading this one 😉😉

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

Chapter 13

I think you have understood I don't really like Arnav 😆😆

But in this chapter, I felt that I'm like Arnav !!

And when I say I become more mature reading this FF, I really mean it !!

Reading this chapter you made me realize that we don't realize how much we're lucky to have what we have !! Some people lives with nothing !!

Those kids have no parents, no money, and they're handicapped, despite all that they live happily with what they have !! While others ... I feel that next to them I'm a spoil brat

And Khushi 👏👏

Seriously this girl is amazing, and well she's an example to follow !!

She gives everything she has to others !! She was already like that when she was young, she used to share everything with Arnav !! She doesn't only give her money, but also time and love !

Few people are like her, but those people make the world look more beautiful !! 😃😃

Those kids back there had no one. And he had everything in his life but had never really appreciated its importance until he saw someone else being deprived of the very thing he had taken for granted in his life.

80% are like Arnav

less than 5% are like Khushi !

Naina and Annyav I mean Arnav part was so cute !!

Maybe hearing Khushi saying Annyav brought Annyav back 😉😉

Random maybe, but a rocking Chapter

PS : And this one question was asked by someone who is kind of frustrated with Arnav in my story. Is Arnav self centred? Why does he think only about his guilt, himself and not what Khushi actually wants?

Am I that person ?? 😆😆

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1037

Chapter 14

Kuku and Annyav are the best characters of this FF 😃😃

Seriously I just enjoy reading FBs !! In fact whenever I spot italics my face lights up !!

Because reading FB I feel so relieved !! I just forget everything while reading FBs !! 😃😃

I loved the way Arnav looked for Kuku I mean Khushi 😃😃

I'm sure he doesn't know his own timetable, but he does know Khushi's 😆😆

The kitten part was cute 😳😳

But tell me why, all people are playing Cupids 😆😆

I had some general knowledge problem her Because I didn't have any idea who was Basanti, Veeru and Gabbar, I just understand that Khushi's logic is unique 😆😆

But in this part I really felt that Khushi and Arnav became Kuku and Annyav 😃😃

Arnav openly teasing Khushi !! 😆😆

Nothing is impossible 👍🏼👍🏼

"When you reach the moon, you realise that no one is around you and all your loved ones are left behind in the earth." Khushi replied, a strange pathos dwelling in her voice. "The moon looks beautiful just from the earth, reflecting the light of the sun. But it's barren deserted land there, darkness surrounding it with no life."

👏👏👏

You left me speachless !

Our aim, goal look beautiful from where we're, but when we lose our close ones in order to reach it, we realize that close ones are more important than any goal !!

RANVIJAY 😆😆😆

Did I say I love him ?? 😳😳

I didn't expect him to shower Arnav and Khushi with petals 🤣🤣

"Yeah, bite him Gabbar. Tear the leather of his shoes." Arnav wanted to say it out aloud, annoyed with his brother-in-law for ruining their moment, but he silently glared at the man towering them.

🤣🤣🤣

And please Molten don't describe RK, because I just blush 😳😳

That guy is amazing 😃😃

I would have never thought that Khushi would ever feel confortable after what happened that Arnav's outburst night !! But He did make her feel confortable 😳😳

And Arnav feeling jealous 😆😆

I just Love RK and Dadiji ! BAS nothing to add !!

I want more Dadi and RK !!

Oh I have an idea ! RK leave Anjali and marry Dadi 😳😳

OK I'm crazy 🤪🤪 And I know it 😆😆

Entertainment entertainment and .. entertainment !!

So obviously an entertaining chapter

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1038

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Chapter 15

Arnav rocks !!

Wait what have I said ?? 🤪🤪

Seriously Arnav stole this chapter !!

He just left me speachless !!

I don't really have anything to Add !!

I just love the way Arnav corrected than he and Khushi can't be Hansel and Gretel 😆😆😳

And then of course THE question

"Have you ever considered me as your brother?"

I would have given thousand euros to see Arnav's face at that point 🤣🤣

I'm sure he never feared an answer so much 😆😆

I loved the way you write down his emotions, and fears 😆😆

But I don't know why that made me laugh 😆😆

And Khushi sighed as well when Arnav told he never considered her as his sister 😆😆

Now I'm confused 😕😕😕

They realized they're in love ??? Gosh this was so subtle and my little brain didn't get it 😆😆

BTW has Arnav forgotten he has a girl friend ??

I hate when Arnav plays with two girls feelings

The rest of the chapter was just like eating a chocolate bar 😳😳

Obviously I went on gutter land !! Naughty me 😳😳 !!

But once again you wroe it extremely well !!

It's so smooth and it's not an artificial romance, it's just seem so natural ! 😃😃😃

Arnav is changing, and that for Khushi !!

Until now we witnessed Khushi who lived for Arnav now we're going to meet an Arnav who's going to live for Khushi !! 😃😃

BUT However, his excitement missed out a pair of unhappy eyes lingering at one corner of the house, finally catching up with what was happening to their 'Chotey'.

I didn't guessed it was Maami 😕😕

I thought it was his Arnav's Dad !!

But I'm happy it's Maami 😉😉

Chapter 16 on the next thread, because I'm very weak in Maths and didn't res for chap 16

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1039

Absolutely loved the teaser

and the double meaning/symbolicness behind it

can't wait for it

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1040

A kiss so early in this story..!! Well I have never thought that you will bring this so early as they have lots of catching up to do.. Not that I mind 😉