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lovely updates. Different concept
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NEXT PART

RAHUL SONY OR VIRMAN KI LOVESTORY{1991}

BOMBAY ganpati bappa ka puja.humlog tab ANDHERI me rahte thee.virat or mai hamesha rat bhar jag k ganpati darshan karte thee.usbar hamara board exam anewala thaa,,par ganpatibhi too saal me ekbar ate hai too usbar bhi hum ghumnese baz nahi ayee.pahla din too ghumne me chala gaya par dusra din hamara flat me function thaa.mai too volunteer tha ,,management me busy thaa.,bhir bohot thii,,,samhalna mushkil ho raha thaa par is bhir me ek ladki se fasa hamara virat.

excuseee meee,,,,kya up mere liye ek announcement karenge???

virat piche murk dekhta hai ek uski umarki hi ladki,,jo k bohot khubsurat thii,,,long skirt me thii or thori padeshan thii,,,,usse help mang rahi hai.

unknown girl{naam manvi hai ye badme pata chalta hai}>>>aap yahak volunteer hai??mai yaha ganpati dekhne ayithii,,or upk bekar sa management se mai apni sister or bhaiya se alag ho gayi,,wo mujhe nahi mile,,ek announcement karenge??

v>>>upka nam??

m>>>naam kya hoga???

v>>>to mai announce kya apne nam k liye karunga??ajeeb sense hai upka??

m>>>kya ??mera sense ajeeb hai??zada smart mat bano,,,ek too apna kaam up thik se karte ho nahi,,bahar jake dekho entrance or exit pe kya dhakka dhakki ho rahi hai,,usee jake thik karo or naito yaha baithe ho,,jab,,,

v>>>>ok ok aap plzzz kuch apne bareme bata dijiye jisse mai announce karu ,,koi apko ake yahase le jaye or mera jaan bach jaye,,

m>>>jaan bach jaye matlab ??mai koi terrorist hu kya???tum tum,,,,

v>>>tum tum ye naam hai kya??

m>>>nahi ye naam nahi hai ,,,tum bas bolo" kashmir se ayi hai ek ladki jo apne bhai ko dhund rahi hai,,wo yaha office mai wait kar rahi hai akee yaha mile"

v>>>ok as u wish

virat announce kar deta hai or kuch der mai ek or ladki or ek ladka akee use uhase leke jata hai,,wo jate jate virat ko ekbar ghurti hai par thanx boltehue chali jati hai.

virat usee jate dekhta rahta hai,,or uska nazar gate pe jata hai,,jaha use uska ek sundar sa kashmiri scalf milta hai,,,jispe m likha hota hai ,,wo utha leta hai or jaldi se usee dene piche jata hai par wo ladki bhir me se jaise uchalk ayithi pata nahi phir kaha bhir me hi mil jati hai.

sham ko flat me function thaa,,sara flat ka sabhi koi bada ya chota sabkoi programme kiatha,,jaha virat ne gana gayatha.uska gala suru sehi accha tha,,jiska awaz sayad kashmir tak pahach gaya.

"chera hai ya chand khila hai" bohot hi zada siddat se virat ne ye gana gaya jo hum sab k dil ko chu gaya par hum sab k sath sath usko bhi jo kuch der pahle bhir me kho gayi thii,,or jo dubara wapas ayi .

tab rat k dus baj rahe thee.community hall k bahar kisine virat se milneka paigam bheja.virat ,mai or sab dost hum log sab hall me thee,,virat ko pata nahi thaaa usee kon milne aya hai,,par jo ladka ye paigam laya wo thora kattha mark bola sayad koi bohot badi faaan hogi ,,,jo hamare virat se milna cha rahi hai wo bhi puree dil se hum se too usne asehi kahk bheji,,,

ye sunk hum sab dosto me too afratafri mach gaya ,,, ab wo umar hi asa thaa,,virat ko humne ja mere sher dekh kon ayiii haiii apni dil dene ya sab stupid sa bat bok cherne lage,,par wo kuch nahi bola or nikal gaya.or hum sab chori chori usk piche piche nikal liye.

v>>>aree tum ??? tum phir se kho gayi kya??

m>>>na hi ,, am extrmllly sorrry.mujhe nahi pata thaa k up volunteer nahi yahak performer hai,,,or apka gana mai suni,,bohot accha gate hai up or apka too yaha kafi rapo hai

v>>are nahi na,,asa kuch nahi ,,mai yaha rahta hu,,yaha hum sab ek F*Ly k tarah rahte hai,,isliye sab koi mere liye cheer kar raha thaa..

m>>> hmm ho sakta hai par bahar walo ko bhi apka gana pasand aya.

{virat is bat se thora shock hota hai ye baharwalo kon hai ye soch k} actually hum sab koi matlab ek group se aye hai lokhandwala se ,,hum sabko gana pasand aya or mai too hu hi ek sangeetkar ki F*Ly se too ye bat too mai gurantee k sath bol sakti hu k up ekdin bohot bade singer banenge,,,or sayad tab apk agee piche itna bhir lag jaye k mujhe autograph leneka chance na mile too

v>>>autograph??? are mai koi star thori hu??

m>>>koi bat nahi ,,aj nahi too kal ban jayenge.. actually mai upko sirf sorry hi bolne ayi thii..or koi problem nahi hai too upp isme autograph de dijiye.

v>>> aap kya hamesha diary sath rakhti hai??

m>>>{haste hue kahti hai} nahi wo bombay pahlibar ayi hu...ab star ,,supar star ka sahar hai,,pata nahi koi bhir me idhar udhar se mere samne akee gir gaya matlab dikh gaya to

v>hmm intrstng

m>>>{kuch khojte huee}waise ek bat kahu,,wo office me jaha mai us time apse milithii,,kya mera koi scalf uha gir gayatha,,matlab kya up dekhethee??

v>>ha matlab nahi bilkulbhi nahi

m>>>its ok ,,pata nahi kaha gir gaya ,,,mera fev tha wo,,mai chalti hu

v>>>>autograph ???

m>>>are haa,, autograph,,,mai too bhul gayi thii

v>> hmm mai yad kara diya,,ab upka naam

m>>> naam ,,mera naam jane do nam me kya rakhha hai,,,par upka naam pata chal gaya ,,kafi fan following hai upka yaha

{{idhar hum log >>>are yr ye virat itna kya bat kar raha hai,,koi interview de raha hai kya??are sunne dena apna record bandh kar }

virat usee kuch likke deta hai,,jise park manvi khilkilati hai or hamara virat us hasi k gung ko too jaise kano me mishri ki tarah feel kar rahe thyee,, or uska chera ka x ray utar rahe thee.

virat usee likke dia thaa

to KASHMIR KI KALI FROM SHAHENSHA OF BOLLYWOOD

m>>>woww,, very smart,,, par sirf hight sehi shahensha hai ya unk jaisa dil bhi rakhte hai??matlab maine suna hai jab AMITABH BACCHAN hamare pahelgaon mai ayethee picture k liye tab unse wohaka admilog kafi impress hue thee.

v>>>unka too pata nahi ,,par hamara dil too sagar sebhi gehra hai,,har koi akhir me dub hi jata hai

m>>>accha ,,kabhi paharo se takraye ho kya??kabhi apna lehar pahar k taraf uchal k too dekhoo,,dubana too dur uska sikhar{top} tak bhi pahacna na mumkin hai.

v>>> wo too woqt batayga ..kon kaha pahachta hai

m>>> off bohot bat kar li mai... ab mai chali,,best of luck for ur upcmng life,,thanx for ur spl autograph ,,thanxx for everythinggg byyy

{ek scalf khojne k liye kitna bak dali mai...} barbarate huee manvi uhase nikal gayi par ,,virat ka lehar to uchalk wohi ruk gaya thaa.or phir sher fasa hamare jal mai,,sawal pe sawal..kitna chere hum usee,,

kya bat haii,, kashmir ki kaliii,,kaha gul khilaye gali gali...par hamare bat se virat chir nahi raha thaa,,balle balle hamara dost to sarma raha thaa,,uska gaal too tamatar jaisa hoke rakkha tha,,or phir jab bad mai mujhe pata chala k usk pas scalf sahi mai thaa,, to mai uska khub band bajaya.

mai {rahul}>>>kya bee scalf tere pas thaa ,,too usee dia kyu nahii??

v>>>bas asehi man nahi kia

r>>>accha man nahi kia..too man kya kiaa???

v>>>{apne hato me bandhte huee}yahi k ye mere pas aya or mai ise rakh lu

r>>>jyyyo.. mere sher,,or kya kia

v>>> rahul ,,mai kashmir jaunga

r>>> kyaaa??? sathiya gaya hai kya??? kashmir jayga usk liye??

v>>>>mera bat too sun ,,board k bad kahi na kahi too jana hi hai ,,mere bua too wohi hai,,to mai ghar me bat karunga or bua too abhi do din bad asehi arahi hai yaha mummy papa k anniversary mai ,,are apna ghar hai yr,,ab us kashmir ki kali ka pata too usk gali me jakehi milega..

virat ka intazaar akhir rang laya or kashmir se pahle wo kali phir se dikh gayi bhir me.

yu to do din virat ka kuch ksah accha nahi bita ,,man kahi ,,wo kahi,,pahla pyar u know,,wo bhi teen age ka ,,jaha khayali pulao asman chumta hai .do din bad virat ,mai or virat k papa station gaye usk bua ko lene ,,or phir se achanak dikh gayi wo jisse virat ka nind ura hua thaa.

idhar bua ka wait kar rahe thee humlog or udhar wo ladki apni F*Ly k sath wapas jane pahachithi station ,sabse chupte chupate virat ka ishara uss tak pahach hi gaya ,,umeed to nahi thii par uski choti si muskan virat k dil me too bijli giraya,,or wo hila rah gaya ,,or bcch me fasa mai ,,sabse chupte chupate virat apna ishara continu kar rahatha...par bua pahach chuki thi to saman utanneka silsila chalu hua jo kafi zada thii or uska faida uthatee hue virat dhire dhire saman nikal raha thaa,or mai bhi jisse humdono ko jhar bhi pari or jisse wo khilkhilane lagi.virat tab mujhe messanger banak ek chota sa letter likhk dia or mai fat se usk pas jake usk hath mai thamaya jab wo train me char rahi thii,mai too socha kahi mujhehi na par jaye ,,par dostik liye wo bhi,,par usne hamare taraf wo wapas fek di apne gharwalok ankho me dhoka deke.

idhar virat k papa hame bula rahe thee ,,par usne pao me moch ka bahana kia or thora or time ruta raha ,,or dhire se wo uthaya jo k ek matchbox me thaa. socho kya dimaz lagayi thii..wo ,,,virat ne fat se uthak uhase bhag aya or usk taraf dekhe ja raha thaa too bechara post se bhi takraya ,,or wo tab jis nazar se virat ko dekhi usme too mera hi balle balle ho gaya too virat ka too kya kahna.

pyar k liye too admi bohot kuch karta hai,,yaha too bas kashmir hi pahachna thaa,,wo kon sa bada bat thaa,,akhir bua kab kaam ati ,,virat ka bat sunnk ghar me bhi sab khush ,,ab une kya pata thaa banda kashmir ghumne nahi kashmir ki kali dhunde k liye betaab ho rahe hai!!

pahla pyar ka khat bhi badia thaa

v>>name and address plzz i need to talk with you plzzz tell me

m>>>why??? barat leke ani hay kya??

waise hum uha rahte hai jaha akashbni gunjti hai,, jaha sankar ji ka arti hoti hai,,,jaha upar se jheelo ka sundar sa sahar dikhta hai,,ab dhundte dhundte ajao ,,,naam hamara bhi kuch kam famous nahi hai ,,,hawa se bhi puchoge too pata chal jayga ...

ab bas intazaar tha too exam khatam hone ka par hum student acche thee parai k time me hum koi alag chis dimag me nahi laye or virat bhi apne ap ko samjhak rakhha tha k jo bhi hoga exam k bad kyuk usse bark kuch bhi nahiii

ek choti si mulakat hamare virat k dil me ek bada sa zakham deke dhala gaya ,,par wo pahla pahla pyar ka thaaa,,or wo pyar jo ek history bank rah gaya.

{monia' house}

m'father>>>doc bas asa hi kuch hua pandal me monia k sath or wobhi usk jagneme pahlibar ,,aj wo uss ladka ka naam li

d>>>hmm ye case ab agee to bar rahi hai or jisse ye samajh araha hai k ye jo bhi bol rahi hai ye iski subconcious mind me hai jo ab aste aste bahar arahi hai

m'f>>>par ab agee

d>> agee too jab ye nind se uthegi tabhi kuch ho payga ...par ha ye bat abhi usse zabardasti nahi puchni hai pahle usse bolne dena hoga agar wo kuch batana chahe too ,,or agar kuch bolti hai too sare incidents ko one by one sajak dekhna hoga ye kabki bat kar rahi hai uski koi adat agar ye rebirth hai too koi adat wo carry forward ki hai k nahi sabkuchh ,,,

ph cut hota hai ...

viraaat

is chik k sath monia nind se jagti hai,,or apne ap ko sabk bichh ghar mai pati hai.usk mathe me bohot dard thaa..uski ankho se ashu bah rahe thee jaise koi sadma mila ho,,,kuch bolna cha rahi hai par clear kisiko samajh nahi arahaha hai,,tab dadi pas ati hai wo dhire dhire apne dadi de rote hue bolti hai jo usk apne bareme thaa par wo aj ki date ki bat nahi thii wo bat kar rahi thii 1992 ki

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Posted: 12 years ago
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viraaat

is chik k sath monia nind se jagti hai,,or apne ap ko sabk bichh ghar mai pati hai.usk mathe me bohot dard thaa..uski ankho se ashu bah rahe thee jaise koi sadma mila ho,,,kuch bolna cha rahi hai par clear kisiko samajh nahi arahaha hai,,tab dadi pas ati hai wo dhire dhire apne dadi de rote hue bolti hai jo usk apne bareme thaa par wo aj ki date ki bat nahi thii wo bat kar rahi thii 1992 ki

sonia>>> monia tuu ghabra mat ,,dekh hum sab hai na,,tu relax ho ja,,,

monia ,,monia nahi mai ,,maitoo MANVI HU,,,,

MANVI CHOUDHRY

ghar me mazoot sab koi ek dusreko dekhne lagte hai hairani se ,,yahatak usk papa bhi.par monia ab rukti nahi or wo bolne lagti hai apne uss bitaya hua zindegi k har pal k bareme jo sayad aj sab kuch lagbhag yad arahi hai..

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mai manvi choudhury.papa ka naam avik choudhury,,or mummy ka naam janvi choudhury.mera date of birth 18 th april 1976.mera ghar kashmir.mera school D.A.V.SCHOOL.mera ghar ,,mai ,,mere friends,,hum sab bohot bohot mai sab kuch mai kya kya yad karu,,, mera ghar k pas garden,apple tree,,jaha hum kud kud k apple torte thee,,mera gana ,,,,jo kashmir me mujhe sab koi ek naam se jante thee,,mere dadaji ek bohot bade sangeetkar thee,,,

dc>>>beta ap zada padeshan mat ho or aste aste sab kuch ap bolo,,,jo apko yad arahi hai sab kuch

m>>>mera ghar too thahi jannat se zada sundar jaga mai ,,par usk nazar mai ,,mai usse bhi zada sundar thii,,virat ,,virat jise mai pyar karti thii or wo bhi mujhse par duniya mai kuch ase lg bhi hote hai jaha pyar ko nahi insaan ka cast dekhna zada zaroori hota hai ,, mai class 10 ka exam de chuki thii or anjaane mai koi usk pahle mere life mai achuka thaa,,jiska ahsas mjhe thora hua to thaa par wo sach mai hakeekat mai ekdin mere samne ayga ye na sochiti.

yaha tak bolte hue monia firse rone lagti hai ,,dadi jo usko bachpan se is taraka hal ko apne diary me likhti dekhiti aj usse hakeekat mai uska samna karte dekh thori padeshan ho gayi par apna monia ko sine me lagaior usko samjhayi k jo wo aj bol rahi hai wo abhi ka bat nahi wo uska bita hua kal hai jo wo piche chork ayi hai ,,is zindegi se uska koi nata nahi.

doctor monia ka har bat ko kafi seriously sun rahe thee,,or encourage kar rahe thee takee wo apna man k sab bat bol paye.

m>>>nahii mujhe kuch samajh nahi arahi hai ,,mujhe bas pata hai mujhe alag kar dia usse ,,dhoka se ,,nafrat haii,,,, nafrat hai mujhe sabse ,,par hua kya ha???? hua kya mar gayi na mai mar gayi na ..maine virat ko too kuch hone nahi diaa na.. mar gayi mai mai...mar gayi

sonia>>> monia ,,yahi too hum samjhana chahtethee,k tu jo bhi bol rahi hai wo aj ki bat nahi hai,,monia teri rebirth hui hai doc uup plzz

dc>>>ha,, monia ye sab aj ki bat nahi hai,,par abhi agar sab koi up log chale jaye too accha hoga mujhe abhi monia se akele mai bat karna hai sirf ek ya do jan rah sakte hai.

sab koi bahar chal jate hai dadi or sonia ko chork

s>>> monia ,,ye virat kon hai tujhe yad hai???

m>>> ha usee kaise bhulungi?? wo bombay se ayatha ,,,meri frnd ka bhai tha.mujhe jana hai uha usk paas plzzz usee mujhe batana hai apne bareme

dc>>>beta upp itna zada exited mat hoo.humko apke bat pe yakeen hai or hum apke madat zaroor karenge par usk pahle humko apke bareme sab kuch janna bhi to parega khas kark wo samay k bareme jo samay apko us zindegi se ye zindegi di ,,kya hua ,,kaise hua ,,kuch khas ghatna jo apko aj itna zada takleef de raha hai wo sab kuch .

manvi ,,mai manvi apne dunya mai jine wali,, khushiya failanewali,,umar ki us parao me pahacne ja rahi thii jab ye dunya me sabkuch bohot khubsurat lagta ho,,mai khush thii apne F*Ly k sath ,,mummy,,papa ,,dada ,,dadi,,meri frnds,,sab k sath ,,par ye life kitna bhi busy kyu na ho sayad sabk zindegi me pyar dil pe dastak dekehi jati hai,,jaisa mere sath hua.pyar dabe pao mere zindegi me aya ,, mere pao tale zameen nikalti gayi or mai dubti rahi usk pyar me,,ek choti si mulakat badi kahani bank rah gayi...ek ladka mere umar ka mere zindegi me aya or hum pyar ka anjaam kya hoga ye to na soch paye ,,bas mohabbat karte chale gaye.

dr ap bura na mane ek bat kahu ,,sayad mai har bat apko na bata paun kyuk

dr>>>ha ha mai samajh raha hu par tum jise bol pao usse apna bat plzzz share karo kyuk tumare liye bolna zaroori hai

m>>> dr, mai sonia se batana chahti hu,,

dr>>jaisa tume accha lage ,,

dr sonia ko ankho se hints dete hai k uskohi ab monia ka sab bat dhyan se sunna hai ,,zada kuch sawal jawab na karte huee kyuk abhi jab usse sab yad aya hai too bohot carefully handle karna hoga,,zada mental pressure dena sahi nahi hoga.

{rahul sony wid virman love story }

sabar ka fal meetha hota hai ye mante huee virat apna man ko mana raha thaa or akhir me wo din aya jab hum finally kashmir pahach gaye hamare mummyo k sath hamare papa kam me atak gayethee,to bas hum char jan gaye kashmir.srinagar se kashmir jate jate virat ka hrt beat itna zada tez hote ja raha thaa,k mujhe laga usko heart attack na ajaye.thanda me pasina ,,mummy kuch khane ko bol rahi hai too banda ko bhukhi nahi lag raha hai,,aunty padeshan thii par mujhe pata thaa is bechani ka raaz kya hai!!har turning pe wo pahar me chalti ladkiwo ko ase dekh raha tha jaise wo intazaar kar rahi ho hath me mala leke ,,jhelum nadi k pas car ruka too ussebhi ase dekh raha thaa jaise laga abhi usme se tairte hue niklegi!!

mai usee bola yr pahar ,, nadi ,,jharna sab dekh liaa ab is debdaru peer pe bhi nazar mar le kahi bandariya nikli too ,,kya pata peer mehi mil jaye too,,bechara udas ho raha thaa,too mujhe daya agaya uspe,,jabk hum tab kashmir pahache bhi nahi thee too ye hal thaa,par bua k ghar pahach gaye or jis kali ko har gali mera dost dhund raha thaa wo just pichware mil jaygi ye to hamare soch se milooo dur thii.

bua ki beti thii SNEHA jise humne virat k bareme sara bat bataya ,,virat khudhi bataya..kyuk usee hath karna zaroori tha,,hum woha naye jo thee.sneha rahti thii hostel mai par exam k bad wo bhi ghar ayihui thii,,par wo saitan hum logoko ye tab nahi batayi k wo manvi ki best frnd me se hai.

manvi ne apna koi bhi bat sneha ko nahi batayi thii isliye sneha ko pata nahi thaa,,use jo bhi pata chala sab virat se par wo humlog ko surprise dene k liye chup rahi.sham ko ek party mai jana hai bolk bua ,uncle ,sneha hum logoko bhi jane boli ,,par hamari dono mummy nahi gayi lekin hame jana para.

humdono bhir me akele thee kisiko jante jo nahi thee,bua ,uncle sab se bat karne mai busy ho gaye or sneha bhi bhag gayi.koi ek buzurz insaan hamare pas akee hamare bareme puchne lage ,,bada ajeeb laga ,jaise bin bulaye khane aye ho,,par bua akee humlogoko pahchaan karwayi ,,or sath mai virat ka gane ka bhi jamk tarif ki ,,jisse virat fas gaya ,,or buzurz k agee mazboor ho gaya gana sunane k liye.virat thora uneasy feel karte huee akhir ga hi dia ,,jisse uha baithe ,,khare har insaan se kafi tarif mila par wo koi spl thi jo uska gana sunk bhagi ayi or sunti rahi or phir..

sony>>> or phir

rahul>>> or phir hua do pyar karnewalo ka milan ,,,,

wo manvi ka birthday party thaa,,wo buzurz insaan usk dadaji thee jo nami sangeetkar thee,,or in sab k bareme jine pata thaaa wo sneha thi,or mauka dekhk bina notice k magician k tarah manvi ko virat k samne lake rakh di or virat k hath se ice cream chuta ,,or mu khula rah gaya.

dono kuch der tak too ek dusreko bas dekhte rahe ,,or humdonoko tension hone laga koi ana jaye ..

too mai or sneha rakhwali k liye dono se hatk dekhne lage koi araha hai k nahi .

v>>> tum ,,tum yaha??

m>>> ha mai yaha ,, mere ghar me ho ,,or mujhse puch rahe hoo?? ane se pahle pata nahi thaa kaha araheho??

v>>> nahi kisine apna naam hawa se puchne bolithii,, yaha ka hawa mujhe naam to nahi bataya par bina puche sahi jaga me lake rakh dia ,,kafi traind hawa hai,,tumara

m>>>or naito kya ,,ihaka patta bhi nahi hilta mere isharo k bina ,,waise yaha kaise ana hua??

v>>> ab sidha barat leke thori ana thaa ekbaar tooo dekhna zaroori tha na

m>>> oho to up shadi karne ja rahe hai ,,ye bal bibah ka achanak kya sujhi??

v>>>ab kya kare jo pasand agayi wo too arbo mai ek hai,, ase kaise chor deta kahi dusra hawa use urak le gaya too??

itneme kisika aneka awaz aya or mai virat ko or sneha manvi ko tank dusre taraf le aya.

par virat se too jaise raha nahi ja raha thaa.wo mujhe pakark zor se hugg kia par maine usee apne dil pe control rakhne kaha ,,akhir naya sahar ,, naya log ,,unnis bis kuch bhi hua too humhi faste.

virat k liye to sneha tab bhagwan saman thii,,sneha jab jab manvi se khirki se jhank bat karti dusre taraf se virat usee tab tab dekhta ,,or akhir me us khirki se bhi nazar sneha ko chor virat pe parne laga.lights on lights off ase dono me ishara chalneka silsila suru hua ,,mujhe laga ab lights hi cut ho jayga.

wo ek bar light jalaye to yebhi ek bar wo do bar jalaye too ye bhi do baar ,,phir silsila lights ko chor din me milne ka hua.

virat ne letter bheja sneha k hath or dono pahli bar mile sankaracharya temple .

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wow,,,, kitna pyara story hai bas ek chotisi mulakat se yaha tak bat bar gaya thaaa??

monia>>>sirf 16 yrs k thee.pyar jo sirf filmo me dekhithi,,,waisa sab kuch mere sath hote ja raha tha.apne apko tab koi picture ki heroine se kam nahi samajh rahi thii mai.or na usee mere zidegiki ki hero samajhnese mera man inkaar kar pa raha tha.hamara us ganpati puja me milna,,uska usha mere sahar me ana,,sab kuch mujhe itna exited kar raha thaa k pucho mat.

kuch do char din tak too sirf khirki se tak jhank chal raha thaa.yu too mai kuch ghar mai karti nahi thii par khirki gandha hua hai bolk mai hath mai dusting ka kapra leke khari rahti thii kyu k ustime ghar mai bahar se colour ho raha tha.or mai ekbar virat kahi dikh jaye ye sochk jhank rahi thii tab achanak sneha k papa se mera face to face ho gaya ,,or mai ghabrake unk mu pe khirki bandh kar di.or thori der bad jab phir se check karne k liye khirki kholi dekhi wo badmash mujhe aunty k khirki se dekh raha hai or mujhe dekhtwhi apna camera se mera pic lene lag gaya.mai ekdam se sarma gayi,,or zor se khirki bandh kar di par sayad ghar ka mera dil ka khirki too pahlehi khul chuka thaa,,jo mai bandh nahi ki thii or wo chupkese dabe pao akee mere dil mai bas gaya .

usdin kareeb sham k char baje sneha k hath usne mere naam ka letter bheja jo mujhe chupkese sneha de gayi,,jisme wo mujhe milnek liye kaha thaa,,mai too park bohot ghabra gayi,,sarma bhi rahi thii kyuk wo first time thaa,,tension too itna thaa k mere se usdin kuch khaya nahi gaya.dar lag raha thaa,,mummy se kya bolungi?kya bahana karungi ,,kyuk siwae sneha or runjhun k ghar chor k akele too mai kahi nahi jati thii.too sneha ne bahana kark matlab mandir ka bahana kark mujhe ghar se nikali.ghari ka kanta ek ek second sham k taraf ishara karte ja raha thaa,,or mera hath paoo,,or jaise baraf ki tarah pigalte ja rahatha,,,sayad pyar ki yahi symptoms hoti hai ,,hai na??

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i just love it love it love it...❤️...i ws really chocked n ws also crying while reading this...😭..it ws wonderfull the way u hv written ...n im very new to this world..of forums...n this is my first comment ever on any1 work......😛
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Plzz update!!! 😊
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pls update ...waiting for it...😊 ...
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Originally posted by: laveniya_sweet

i just love it love it love it...❤️...i ws really chocked n ws also crying while reading this...😭..it ws wonderfull the way u hv written ...n im very new to this world..of forums...n this is my first comment ever on any1 work......😛

thank uuu dear ..😊 and am postng next part so enjoyyy.
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NEXT PART

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SANKARACHARYA TEMPLE,,,,jahase hamara kashmir jannat se bhi zada haseen lagta thaa,,niche apne dhun me chalti rang birangi shikara dul lake ki sina chirti hui agee barti thii,,usdin wo sabkuch mere liye or spl sa lag raha tha,,mai ek ek siri charte ja rahithi,,chattan ,,pahari rasta ,,ubar khabar patthar koi bhi chis jaise mujhe dikhai nahi de raha thaa,,bas jaise kuch mujhe upar k taraf khichta ja raha tha,,mai ekdam upar pahachi,,pahar se thori upar ek lamba siri se chark sankarji k mandir gayi ,,matha teki ,,mangi too usdin bohot kuch thii...wo bhagwan mere nahi thee ,,par mai har samay unk pas jatithii,,har exam k time ,,,or wo too mere pyar ka pahla surwad thaa,,too mai apne bhagwan k sath une bhi apna pyar ka sakshi manli.

hum or sneha dono mandir sa niche utre,,mujhe apna sandal apne jaga nahi thori dur me dikhai di ,,mai agee badi,,phir or kuch kadam agee ekdam pahar k kinare meri or ek sandal dikhai di,,mai kuch samjhi nahi ,,barbarate huee agee gayi or jaise wo pahanli koi mujhe mere hath pakar k zor se apne taraf khicha ,,ekdam pahar se lagk,,mera nazar niche gaya mai too dar sehi ankh bandh kar li or tab mehsus hua ek hatta khatta hard body k ghere mai mai hun,,mai dhire se apna ankh kholi,,,ha wo mere life ka shahensha hi thaa.mai usse apne apko churai,,wo mujhe bas ghurte ja raha thaa,,mai stupid ki tarah apne ankhe jhukake bas apna hath malti rahi ,,galase too jaise awaz hi nahi nikal raha thaa.kya karti wo tha hi itna handsome k mera too dil baitha ja raha tha.akhir mai bohot himmatwali bante huee.

m>>>mujhe yaha tum kyu bulaye??

v>>>ab itna dur ayahi hu too jannat dekhne too kaise na bulata??

m>>>jannat dekhna tha tumko too guide kyu nahi liye,,mai kya tume guide nazar ati hu??

v>>>too mai konsa volenteer tha??par tumara kam kiya tha na,,,too ab tum mere kam nahi aogi??

m>>>bas yahi kam tha kya ?? isliye itna unchaa pahar pe bulaye the mujhe??

v>>>actually maine suna thaa har khubsurat chees yahase or zada khubsurat dikhta hai,,isliye tume bulaya thaa..

ye bat se too mai apna hal kya batau ,,kasam se pet me titli chipkali chuha sab kudne laga,,,

m>>>tume jo dekhna hai wo tum dekho ,,par mai ja rahi hu,,

v>>>are abhi too ayi ho ,,do mnt nahi ruk sakti??ghar jake kam karna hai kya??

m>>hww mai koi kamwam nahi karti,,,mere ghar me servant hai kam karne k liye

v>>>hmm,,tab kya karti ho khirki me,,,mai socha safai wafai karti ho

m>>>ji nahi ,,safai kare meri jutti,,mai too tume tume,,,

v>>>>hmm kya kya kya?? mujhe ,,tum mujhe dekhti ho??

m>>>ha dekhti hu,,,,kyuk maine tume dekhatha mujhe ghurte huee,,or mujhe ye janna tha k tum mujhe kyu dekhte ho???

wo mujhe pahar me lage relling se pith lagak khara karwaya or khud mere pas se thora dur jake khara hua...

v>>>hmm ab thik lag raha hai,,light sahi jagame gir raha hai

mai samajh gayi ,,,mai usee andhere me thik se dikhai nahi de rahi thii par utna time nahi thaa hath me ,,,ghar jo jana thaa,,man bhalehi na kare,,sneha ne awaz lagai,,"sara bat ajhi karni hai k ghar bhi jana hai" mai dar se bhagi,,girte parte,,sandal bhi thik se pao me gaya nahi thaa,,or wo badmash mujhe dekh ke hasta raha ,,or uska wo killer smile mujhe aj tak sayad isliye wohi pe atka ke rakhha..pata hai sonia ,,aj itna saalo bad maine nind mehi par uska chera saaaf dekh payi.

sonia,,plzzz mujhe mere virat k pas le chalegi???bol na sonia leke chalegi mujhe??

sonia>>>>>>are meri kashmir ki kali tujhe tera virat us janam me nahi mila par is janam me pakka milega agar wo abtak kunwara hai to!! sorrry tu plzz bol na agee kya hua,,,,,doc bolehai na tujhe sab bat batana hai ?hai na ,,to bol.

monia>>>mai uhase ghar gayi sneha k sath,,sab koi mujhe ghur nahi raha thaa,,par mujhe lag raha tha k sab koi mujhe alag nazar se cdekh raha hai,,man mai chor jo thaa,,wo bhi utna handsome chor.

maine sneha ko khub jhara ,,tera bhai ullu hai ,,gadha hai,,bas kahli dur se ghurna ata hai,,mujhe apna guide banana chata hai,,or itneme virat ne phir se lights on off karne laga ,,mai gussa se apna lighthi off kar di,sneha hask uhase nikal gayi or mujhe boli ""sun mera bhai koi asa waisa nahi hai samjhii,,,jab jo karna hoga wo thik karega "

wednesday thaa wo ,,mai apne room me chitrahar dekh rahi thii,,achanak lights sach mai chali gayi matlab bed lamp ka too mai cut ki thi pat lights hi chali gayi ,,,or bahar se kuch khatar patar azaw ane laga ,,mai torch leke balcony mai gayi ,,mujhe laga mere relling mai koi hai ,,raat ko kaam to hota nahi thaa matlab rang wang ka ttoo mai ghabrake light feki usne jhatse apna chera dhak lia ,,udhar mere ghar ka security halla karne laga ,,meri mummy agayi,,or in sab kkuch sec pahle jab mai balcony mai gayi thi koi mere pao k pas kuch fekatha.

sonia>>>aaannn sach mai chor wor aya tha kya??

monia>>hmm chor to tha par mere dil ka,,maine uska chera dekh liya tha jab mai torch light marithi,,par haalla ,,sor me wo bechara uhase bhag gaya,,wo bhi dum dabake ,,girte parte,,

mummy kuch notice kare usk pahle mai wo packet apne pao k niche chupa li..mummy uhase gayi ,,line bhi agaya tab tak or mai jaldi se packet uthake washroom me.

sonia>>>>wow kya tha usme??

monia>>>form fill up karne diyatha wo gadha

exam too khatam thaa,,par parai ka bhut nahi utratha.

mujhe bas yes /no ans karni thii.

mere ankho me bas tumhi ho kya tumare ankho me bhi sirf mai hi hu y/n

mai tumare liye sab kuch bhul sakta hu,,kya tum mere liye sab kuch bhul sakti ho y/n

mai tumse bohot bohot pyar karta hu ,kya tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho y/n

usrat dinner bhi mere pet tak nahi pahacha ,,mai sirf mummy k dat se dudh pike so gayi,,rat bhar wo letter mere pillow k niche tha,,bas bar bar dekh rahi thii,,or udhar ekjan mahan gayak gana ga rahe thee mere liye

"nile nile ambar par ,,chand jab aye,, pyar barsaye,,humko tarsaye,,asa koi sathi ho,,asa koi premi ho,, pyas dil ki bujha jaye,,unchhi unchhi prbat jab chumta hai ambar ko,,,pyasa pyasa sagar jab chumta hai manzar ko,,,,,,pyar me nahane ko ...dil mera tarsaye ,,,pas mere ajaye,,,

ye gana mere liye thaa,,par uska wordng mujhe mere dil ko jaise ghayal karta ja raha tha,,,mai apna pillow pakar k bas karbat pe karbat leti ja rahi thii,,or pata nahi nind kab ayi par subha tab hui jab mummy ne uthayi mai ghabrake uthk pahle pillow pe char baithi.offf par bach gayi mummy jaldi me thii or mai bhi wo letter apne book k andar jaldi se dal di.

mummy papa dadaji usdin kahi bahar ja rahe thee subha hi, maine une bykarne bahar gayi tab dadaji watchman k sath ratwala chor k bareme bat kar rahe thee,,,jisme watchman apna sabashi nikalwa raha tha,,k usk hote huee kuch nahi chori ho sakta hai,,par kise kya pata thaa,,k ye chor thora hatk tha,,wo kuch churane nahi kuch dene aya tha,,ye bat or tha k mujhe wo chor ko mera chitchor bananeme time nahi laga.

almost sayad gyara baj raha thaa,,or udhar khirki se mujhe tab tak koi jhank nahi raha thaa,,jo mujhe accha bhi nahi lag raha thaa,,ab thora adat jo lag gaya thaa,,samay barta raha or bechani bhi,,phir har mank mai hi sneka k ghar chali gayi par sirf pao se dil too mujhe pahlesehi chork uha chala gayatha,,mai andar gayi ,,mujhe kitchen me virat ki mummy kam karte nazar ayii or sath mai unme mujhe apna future bhi ,,stupid khyayal phir se shittt,,,mai bhagi upar sidha sneha k room me.idhar mai padeshan or wo ghora ,,gadha ,,bechk so rahi thii,,mujhe itna jalan hua,,mai na idhar dekhi na udhar sidha usk pas jake usee pakar k usk pith me apna kil thapaar marti gayi ,,par tabhi mujhe ouchhh aaai ye sab sunai dia ,,par koi ladki ka nahi koi ladka ka or mai tarakk se khari ho gayi or blanket hata too woo sneha nahi ,,virat thaa,,mai too gayi ,,tab kamse,,,

tabhi sneha or rahul dono room me akee mujhe chirane laga.

v>>>> kya yr bhalai ka too zamana nahi hai,,kisik liye itna karo or usee uska kadar hi nahi,,,

s>>> sach mai koi kadar nahi kaha zakham pe malham lagana chaiye ulta or zakhammm hai hai

r>>> tu too gaya kismat se virat ,,, kaha kali dhundne aya thaa,,ye too terrorist nikal gayi achanak hamlaaa

mai ullu ki tarah baithe sab kuch hazam nahi kar pa rahi thii par usko kaha chot laga ye jane bina raha bhi nahi ja raha thaa,,so bardast kar rahi thii

m>>> sneha mujhe jaha tak pata hai ye tera room hai ab mujhe kta pata k yaha koi tera room chin liya hai

s>> hmm ab kya karta bechara ,,, mere room sehi sab nazara accha jo dikhta hai isliye mai beghar hui kal raat se

mujhe samajh aya k is room se mera room zada accha se dikhai deti hai isliye usne room exchange kia hai

sneha mujhe kuch khane ko puchi or maine apple k liye bol di ,,use pasanad nahi thaa too wo mana kiya par mai bhi boli apple sehad k liye accha hota hai ,,to wo pata hai kya bola ?usne sneha ko ishara kia agar mai katk usee dungi to wo khayga ,,man man sochi himmat too dekho ladkaka,,

s>>>are ye nawabzadi ko too ek glass pani leke pineki adat nahi hai,,ye apple kaha se kategi??v>>>are ye itni nazook kalihai ek apple tak katna nahi ata hai???

pahli bar itna gussa laga k kya batau..mai bhi bol di kyu nahi kat paungi ,,kar lungi ,,sneha apple lakeee di,,mai apple ko dekhi phir knife ko,,apple ko knife me rakhhu ya knife ko apple me samajh nahi ara ha thaa,,or merepe sab has raha thaa,,rahul or sneha too hasi dabk bhag gaye or mujhe gussa or char gaya ,,mai bhi uthk jane lagi k usne mera hath pakark bed me baitha dia or mera hath pakrake apple katwaya ,,mai too baithe bathe jaise lut ti ja rahi thii ,,or phir apne khaya or mere mu me bbhi bhar dia,,mai khasti rahi ,,hichki ane lagi wo mera matha me pith me marta raha or usime puchte jaraha tha "mera ans kaha hai"maera mu too bhara hua thaa,mai bas ungli se dikhai k wo mere firun k pocket mai hai,,wo hath dalk nikal liya ,,or washroom me chala gaya ,,mai bahar jane lagi par gate pe usk dono pahredar rahul or sneha mujhe rok liya or sneha mujhe naughty look deke hasne lagi ,,tab nichese virat ki mummy ne lunch k liye awaz de rahi thii too sneha boli thori der mai sab arahe hai..or tab tak phir usne mujhe andar room me khich liya.

wo tab mera ans par chuka tha,or mujhe andar khichk dekhte ja raha thaa.."mujhe andar kyu le ayee?? tumari mummy bula rahi hai na??"

tume thanxx bolna tha..mai puchi kisliye?

wo bola tumari ha k liye jisk liye mai itna dur aya usk liye,,,mai sarmak bas rah gayi

achanak wo pata hai kya bola manvi tume khana wana bhi nahi banana ata hai na??mai boli kyu?? pyar karne k liye khana banana ana zaroori hota hai kya??

wo bola kahi agar kabhi pyar k liye ghar chork bhagna wagna pare tabb ..matlab "humne ghar chora hai ,,rasmo ko tora haii ""asa type,,mai boli khana wana bananeka naubat nahi ayga ,,agar bhagna pare too dher sara glucon d ka pckt rakh lungi bag me ...kyu papa ka admi too hamara picha nahi chorenge,,,too mai tume glucon d pani me milake pilati rahungi ,,or humko tab bhagneme energy milegi,,khub hasee hum us bat pe ,,actually kuch sujh nahi raha thaa k bat hum kya kare ,,ab tak ishara hi se kam chal raha thaa,,par tab hum pahlibar pyarkarnewalo ki tarah bat karna suru kiee

v>>>manvi ,,sneha boli k wo dusri pahari me kahi local mela laga hai,,too aj sham ko chalogi???

m>>baap re ,,pagal ho kya?? mera ghar ka sara security mere piche par jayga,,

v>>>kya tum ,,abhi abhi itna pyari pyari bat ki or ab ,,plzzz manage karo na,,plzzz mere liye,,mai itna dur aya or tum ek pahar nahi lang paogi???humkadam banneka wada ki or apna kadam mere sath nahi badaogi,,,

ab ye bat too mere shan k khilaf thaa,mai usk room se nikal gayii wo mujhe dekh raha thaa or mera jaba janna cha raha thaa,,mai niche gayi or sneha ko par usko sunak bol di ,,jab nikalna hoga wo mujhe khirki se bulale ,,hum pahar mai rahnewale hai ,,pahar langna humko bhi ati hai,,yakeen nahi karegi jo ladka ab tak darad se baitha thaa ,,aste aste chal raha thaa,, mera bat sunk bhangra karne laga,,mai too marhi gayii ,,,

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