The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 86

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnab's frustration at not being able to be a part of the revolution in the fullest sense and the added truth that a lot of who he was so far was because of all that he despised. The wealth, the name, the prestige of the Mallick name that came from the very establishment that he was trying to fight against!

They often say that a woman is always another woman's worst enemy - probably true!

In a provincial, native female cunning, Aparna may have tried to consummate Arnab & Khushi's marriage not because she feels its time but because she feels the best way to hold on to a man is through the sexual viles and allure of a woman. Instead she ended up triggering what looks like is going to become a habit.

Or perhaps, reflective of those times, Aparna doesnt really see any harm in Arnab frequently those places much like her husband did. A "shauk" of the rich and famous!

But Khushi is not Aparna and now that she has decided that she needs to become a woman, I'd like to se how Arnab handles her.

But my heart cries for her loss of innocence, and, Arnab, despite having sworn to protect her innocence has been instrumental in starting the dismantling of the same.. heartbreaking...


Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a beautiful story...loved it read all of it in one go...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat an heart wrenchin story ...il hav to sit wid tissues ..depicted dat era quite well ..where man were d dominants ...marry young brides..go to prostitues ..it hurts wen u only read it or here it..but wat must dose innocent souls must hav suffered ..beyond r imagination ...
amazin update n noe i wont say it again n again u already know it u just write emotional stuff too welll u masters in dat genre i guess .
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love dis part...
truly amazing written...post soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous...all the emotions in one update..👏


the last sentence was soo shoking for me...anger blinds intelligence...and he is followiing

a wrong way to vent out his frustration..😡..what is the diff between his father and him

now...i just pray he returns back home remembering his wife's face...

loved the green mango incidence.👍🏼...children are so innocent...

poor khushi..😭.what else can i say...😭.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutley brilliant update..your story has captured the essence of the particular time period..👏.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant chapter
Loved it
I love the comradrie between khushi and pranab
Khushi is trying to be a wife to her husband but arnav just sees her as a child but lil by lil he is getting attracted towards her
Khushi just wants to be with her husband to keep him happy
Is arnav going to regret this visit? ????????
Please update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a fabulous update... Jenny...

i dont think Arnav gonna do that... before he will regret of his deed he will be back...

waiting for the next chapter... Eagerly...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Khushi and Pranb's friendship is too cute. Trying to get green mangoes scene made me laugh. She is too innocent. Arnab is really frustrated. Oh, my heart broke after reading where his buggy is going... Even if he returns without going to the prostitute… I hope he does not vent out his frustration on Khushi by making love to her. She is too young to understand this. Hope he waits…. Do continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
today only i read dis story and again u made me mad on ur story...watever story u write im jst addicted to it and waiting for the nxt updates restlessly...dis s a sooperrr story...i love it very much...great writing jenny...keep going...waiting for nxt update...

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