The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg such a beautiful update.

Do continue soon plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
its very nice...

loved it...

though myself is adherent opposer of child marriage...but loved the naughtiness of the character of khushi...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Though child marriage is not something we want but this story is absolutely beautiful! Transition of a child into a woman and Arnav's changing feeling! So well written !
Too good, jenny
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Continue soon
Thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
m totally against child marriage... n i loved this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly, taking the concept of child-marriage and churning out something so beautiful, so profound is commendable. You, truly are a wonderful author Jenny.

Secondly, its marvelous what a single inanimate object, in this case, Roopa/ the doll, can do. Its a symbol of a childhood lost, and now I think, a love/a notion of respect gained by Arnav in Khushi's eyes. I'm waiting for this story to unfold, I have a feeling you'll be doing wonders with this one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnks for the PM dear...

already liked and commented...

u r the superb writer...the track is just wonderful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thami i really cant say what i feel about her
she loves khushi and her childlike antics
but then she is screwd old woman
she also went through the marriage on tender age of 13 so she doesnt feel bad about it
but then she is also the only one who think her son (arnav's father ) is not good
and she love arnav
and she loves in some weired way khushi to if u can compare with arnav's mom
who is kind of bitch to khushi
and arnav when is told as he is brothely concern about khushi
i loved it bcz if he would have some husbands feeling i would put him in pedofile (she is 13) but now i am not afraid of arnavs feeling
he will protect little khushi from world his familie and most important from himself
jenny i also gave a comment in late spring about to bring arshi from late spring to introduce arshi from impermeable heart
maybe you can write a little os to bring all the three arshis (late spring , impermeable heart and this story togeathe)
what think
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Being a bong myself. Heard a lot of child marriage stories of my own family.
My mum's aunt got married at the age 4 to a man of 34 and become widowed when she was 13 yrs old.
Child Marriage has destroyed life of lots and lots of young girls and boys and surprisingly part is after so much different laws coming up. Child marriage is still continuing and specially in Rajasthan.

(As she sobbed miserably, wiping her tears on the edge of her pallu, Arnab felt the stirring of platonic, almost big-brotherly protectiveness in his heart for her.)

Arnab is different here and hardly people used to think this way. I loved his feeling for Khushi as a brother because it has to be. How can an educated person like Arnav think such a small Khushi as his wife. For him it's totally unacceptable.


(Arnav chuckled looking at her retreating back. A sudden thought came to him, causing a reflective expression to gradually appear on his countenance.

In returning her doll back to her, he will be taking up the responsibility of keeping her childhood safe...


"From himself".)

I just fell in love with this part when Arnav said he need to save Khushi's childhood from him. I wish all the husband's of that time has thought something like this but they never as much as I know and they used to jump as wild animal on that lil kids of 12, 13, 14 and 15.

I am loving this story a lot. Jenny Please don't end it within 3-4 chaps just make it 6-7. I know writers have always their limitations. So I will never say like dumb to continue on an on just increase few chaps more. Please

Nice story. Keep with the good work👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for d pm.

Beautifully written.

This is very different story infact feels like u r readin a novel.
The language the writing style n the settin in early 20's based on child marriage.

Loved arnav's character progressive n fightin for a cause.
Khushi's barely 13 n her reaction after meetin arnav for d 1st time ws so childlike.

Also when she goes to meet him for getting her doll n her blowin her nose n arnav's reaction reminded of this scene on d show.
Arnav thought at end ws abt saving her childhood frm him well seems like arnav sw a woman in her when she hugged him n talked abt being a good wife.

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