The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

adorable n cute update

thanks for the pm

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Beautiful story ! It was proceesing very clearly and nicely ! Very realistic ! Loving it

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Beautiful jen.
Loved Arnav's monologue about khushi his wife.
Loved thami and khushi bonding, her childlike chatter and thami trying to make her comfortable beautiful.
she is too young for her wifey responsibility and Arnav knows it hope even his mother understand and be little nice to khushi.
Loved it jen felt like time travel will wait for next thanks.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Superb !!! arnav wants to save khushi's childhood from himself.. khushi is so sweet.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Paridhi

@kparidhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

i simply loved the last line of the update...so much said in so few words

thanks for the pm

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

I loved this story..child marriage is a curse..but the most unfortunate thing is it is still taking place in some parts of India as well as west bengal..
i loved the last sentence..

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Loving this story Jenny. As always u pen down every emotion so beautifully. Waiting to read the next chapter eagerly. Thanks for the pm dear.

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Awesome update as usual jenny...the way u explained child khushi's excitement abt her arnabji,her hurt when she thought he didn't like her,arnab's turmoil abt his wife and the prevailing customs...everything was so beautiful...

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

excellent piece of work dear. the way you have potrait the character of 25 yearold arnav and thirteen year old khushi is superb..please continue soon...