The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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sreemeera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Beautiful !!!!

Please don't stop this with 4-5 chapters. But extent in to a long FF with 20 -30 chapters.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

How r u feeling now Jenny
I am in a short trip to india and hence couldn't come online yesterday and today
Sorry for the delay in reading
Iam on phone and will comment in detail in reaching home - pls bear with me
Lovely update Hun
Loving this innocent childish khushi

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

I loved the second chapter, Jenny. I'm glad Arnav is being kind to her, she needs to be loved at this time, when she's so young and has just recently lost all of her family. Training her to be an ideal bahu can wait for a few years, preferably 5-6. But obviously, things were so very different back then. And his grandmother is so lovely.

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tracy1191

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

wow.. beautiful concept.. love the way relationships are forming...
waiting 4 more😊😊

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

This story is so different and so amazing
I feel so overwhelmed after reading the ch
U write beautifully dear
Continue soon
waiting.. ...

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

I read that you were unwell. Hope you are doing well now.

The update was awesome. Even though the child marriage topic is quite disturbing.

I guess like thami it brings obedience. But it suppress the lively personality. I'm glad that nobody oppose her childish manners. Even though Arnav consider it cringe worthy. And his mom is forcing household chores upon her.

I noticed that Arnav has yet to experience the world of khushi. Like he said, he is surrounded by serious people. I'm sure her company is going to change him.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

arnav after seeing khushi, now all ready to fight for her to save her childhood frm being crushed under the responsibilities of marriage...

loved the little khushi...who got upset to see arnab's no response on her presence...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

part 2
awesome...
so sweet...
poor Khushi...
shes cute...
cont soon dear...

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nhrb

@nhrb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

beautifully written. i loved this little khushi .plz don't end it in 3/4 chapters.

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Shobhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Absolutely amazing update Jenny !

The way you've bought the subject of child marriage over here is amazing.. Yes its a cruelity to be married when you;re just a kid, and barely able to make a decision being bound into a relation which will change your life, is really harsh..

But Im glad, Khushi got married here, atleast she has people who care for her.. Even if Arnav has been distant, he does care for her, and this proved absolutely true towards the end, when he agrees to get her doll back !

Lovely one Jen !

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