The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 58

Absolutely awesome update...👏 I thought that it was a TS but I'm glad that it's a SS now...😃

This is simply wonderful. It's a treat to read about this innocent Khushi who already things of Arnav as a family. I'm absolutely against child marriage and I don't know if it's possible to fall in love with a child in that way but I hope he takes care of her. All those feelings can wait for now.

Absolutely loved it...❤️

Update soon..😊

Beautiful update, you have portrait khushi perfectly

no words jenny. you are an amazing no superb writer.. they way you describe every character and their turmoil is just perfect
very beautifully written
khushi is so innocent and Thami is so nice.. glad she is with khushi.. love the way how she consoled khushi
arnav is sweet but confused angry with the tradition of child marriage where a child innocence is snatched away
awesome update
continue soon

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child marriage
superb concept dear
arnav thinking he was a part of it and khushi have to learn everything fat and many responsibilities on her tiny shoulders
beautiful update
very well written
update next one soon

Jenny I loved the way you have described Arnab's feelings…lovely description of the cruel child marriage in the early age….it is so shameful that girls are married at the age when they should be in the school or playing with other friends…but the underage marriages are finally breaking… hope Khushi's childhood will not go waste and they will not force her to grow up soon…

What is thami???? I think dadi if I am correct…please let us know….as she and Arnab are the only hope for Khushi.

And what to say about Khushi she is such a sweet heart….just learning to grow….very wonderfully written…it is her time to play with the doll and run around…but she is forced to learn cooking and sewing….and she can't even complaint…when she was talking to Aranb about her doll it really bring tears in my eyes…bless her….hope Arnab will understand and will do something about her.

Loved the update….an awesome update…Hats off to you Jenny..👏

woww this is so beautiful update... khushi is so innocent kid but has so many responsibility as wife and DIL...poor girl...

That was very sweet part... Arnav and khushi coming on talking term... Well i don't wan't arnav feel brotherly for her...lol..