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Posted: 12 years ago
no worries...get well soon dear... 😃
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Wishing you a speedy recovery, Jenny. Do take care of youself!
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UNENDING LOVE..


A series of tales, old and new about Arnav and Khushi, the eternal lovers...who take birth in numberless forms and at numberless times...

Age after age and life after life...

Series of historical SS and OS on Arnav and Khushi...




Here is the poem by R. N. Tagore, that inspired this concept..

"Unending Love

I seem to have loved you in numberless forms, numberless times...
In life after life, in age after age, forever.
My spellbound heart has made and remade the necklace of songs,
That you take as a gift, wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age, forever.

Whenever I hear old chronicles of love, it's age old pain,
It's ancient tale of being apart or together.
As I stare on and on into the past, in the end you emerge,
Clad in the light of a pole-star, piercing the darkness of time.
You become an image of what is remembered forever.

You and I have floated here on the stream that brings from the fount.
At the heart of time, love of one for another.
We have played along side millions of lovers,
Shared in the same shy sweetness of meeting,
the distressful tears of farewell,
Old love but in shapes that renew and renew forever.

Today it is heaped at your feet, it has found its end in you
The love of all man's days both past and forever:
Universal joy, universal sorrow, universal life.
The memories of all loves merging with this one love of ours -
And the songs of every poet past and forever.




INDEX..


THE BRIDE WITH A DOLL (SS)



Chapter 2. Scroll down...


Edited by IPK007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Child marriage leading to the moulding of a child into an early adult beautifully written.

Nice.
Edited by akaps - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*edited*

Apologies for the delay!

And now to the update! Wonderful Jen! Seriously! You have taken something up that a few would even consider doing! Many might think its a sensitive topic but the essence is really the major dosage!!
I love the fact I'm a part of this wonderful story!!!!

And my gawd thami changed all of a sudden! I thought she was sweet and not the usual mil! But turns out true colors fade away!

And when I read that brotherly concern I was like oh gawd please no this is wrong but in reality actually its nice! I mean okay I sound weird but since Arnav is the only forward thinking guy in the era I kinda understand!

And the last parah was the best!

Cheers
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update! I am loving this story.
Edited by mem1 - 12 years ago
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Did you know that the child marraige restraint act was passed in 1929 in India but the bill that bans child marraiges was passed only on December 15 2006.

Despite the illegality, it happens so often in India that the numbers are schoking, apparently Rajastan being the epi centre of it.

I like Arnav and I like the way he thinks...he is a patriot and he is the oly protector that Khushi will have in her dire situation. So for that reason, I'm very happy for Khushi. Because he'll wait for her to grow up.

I have no doubt he will fall in love with her because Khushi has a brilliant personality. She is smart (staying quiet to impress in-laws😆), intelligent (going to Arnav with her doll problem knowing he is the man) and compassionate and no doubt will be a sensuous beauty when the time comes...

Can't wait ...

What touched me in this update was Arnav's promise to protect Khushi from himself ...that was simply beautiful.


Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jenny... Darling you are no doubt a brilliant writer !

Even though your writing a historical love story you make it so appealing and believable...
I just loved the way you have portrayed Arnab's character in this part.
And Khushi the innocent yet smart teenager...
I loved this part.

And why is this gonna be just 4-5 chapters? Can you turn this one into an FF as well?
I would love to read a period love story with our very own Arshi
😳
Edited by Arshi1985 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😉

unres 😃

to put it simply i donot know what to write about this arshi ... they r both in the brink of adulthood...arnab babu though with strongviews in still unsettled while she is still a choti entering her teens...
but a darling couple...

will wait for further updates... pls continue soon 😃
Edited by amus5 - 12 years ago
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She is so naive.
What else can be expected from a child.

She's adjusting so well, like a child.
Happy on the little bit of happiness she is getting.

Arnab...not easy for him.
He understands the complications.

This was a beautiful chapter.
Made me sad.

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