The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 54

The struggle of a sensitive man to adjust to becoming party to child marriage, his thinking of the ethics and rights and wrongs of society, personal and public, is brought out so well. I see here a reflection of how Rabindranath Tagore himself struggled with a similar marriage.

Jenny, a very sweet update... Loved little Khushi, her innocence & childlike behavior was both endearing & sad at the same time... Loved to see Arnav feeling so protective about her & wanting to safeguard her childhood... Very, very sweet :)

awww!! I'm gonna grab Khushi and kiss her cheeks tightly! She's such a doll! :D I can't think how weird it must be for Arnab to think of a thirteen year old as his wife! I mean it was common in those days but still, our man thinks way ahead of his times! :D

Awsommmiiieee khushi is so cute...n arnab well hez complicatd...som1 said ryt da more ppl get da more complicatd dey r same goes 2 arnab...of course i m not saying hez in luv with hr how he b shez only 12 aftrall itz just hez always lost in his own thoughts he needs 2 b a lil more considrd jo i think aftr dis wud b...thami lykz khushi well itz common daadi-saas genrly lyk der pote ki bahu rathr den der own...n arnab's ma well shez behaving lyk typical saas how can she xpct a 13yr old 2 b intrstd in household stuffz hell i'm 19 n still run 4m kitchn lyk itz contaigous according 2 mum's words...gud arnab had atleast decided not 2 ignor khushi lyk he was doing...mwahz jenny di i luv dis story nxt chp sooon plz!!!

I've been waiting for an update for a while! I was super excited for this story

It scary how Khushi doesn't really know what's in store for her. Poor Arnab thinks he's like a pervert, his family seems pretty noisy so I know they are going to force Arnab to do something he doesn't want to do. I just want him and Khushi to get out of there

wow that was brilliant
so arnav doesnt see her as his wife yet
dont blame him,, she is still a child
and cant wait to see how this will end

Such a beautiful SS..loved it

Jenny, you cannot possibly bring such a wonderful story to us and drop the bomb about it being only 4-5 chapters! It should at least make it a 25 chapters FF. ;)