The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
She is coming to him as he is only one in her life now. And within him seem to be the first stirrings of a response to the nationalist movement (that is if I am not reading too much into it). Waiting to see how you take this forward.
Edited by citi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
13 yrs old Khushi and 25 yrs old Arnav...

Interesting...

please continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
stalking u waiting for another masterpiece and prologue is so interesting waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d prologue...13 yr difference between arshi but unique concept pre independence nd child marriage.cant wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
the descriptions were amazing as usual...the power of your words is such that they help form vivid images in my mind the moment I read them... it's uncanny how I always end up feeling that i am watching a movie! arnav's sense of guilt and khushi's hunger, loneliness and desperation just leap out of the page... hope arnav went into this marriage with his eyes open and will accept khushi when she meets him... hope khushi's belief that she has arnavji is borne out! child marriage was an unwelcome truth of life then!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...twelve year old and married...what a concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh I love this period... This period with child marriage freedom movement.. Was so romantic.. Have u seen the sachin movie Balika vadhu... Found it so cute..


Please put the period of 1920 in your story.. I was myself thinking about such a story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Child marriage??? Omg !! Never before i read this story line...
So she is going to her husband... Hhmmm...
Cant wait for more!!
Continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing prolouge jenny...luv da title..

so it based on child marriage..intresting..diff concept..sumthing new 2 read..so khusi

going to her sasural..to her arnavji..

cnt wait to read chap1..update soon dear:)
Edited by arshi_sush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh the prologue is up - I didn't know - my God Iam super excited for it - lemme read the prologue
Thx jenny

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