The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 16

Hey Jenny, loved the pic of the lady
So it's child marriage - oh the age diff is too much - I have already started liking this one
Waiting to know more -
Jenny, count me in for anything u write yaar
Iam so so in luv with ur writing
Bring it on dear

nice prologue!!! looking forward to this story!

bride with a doll?? looks like magic has begun already..

Whenever you start a story... My heart starts beating and I start dancing

oh my.
would be be there as in how he should be there. cant wait to find out.
would it amke me sad like mahraj n mohini? i dnt want to feel sad but damn u make us feel each and everything that u write.

13yrs age gap...😲 but i think that's what make it different... I really loved the prologue...

So Khushi's a child bride here.. her innocence and child like excitement to meet his husband took my heart...❤️ but i guess everything is not as good as it looks now..😕

I have not read something like this ever and i'm really curious to read the first part... It would be really exciting to read how they fall for each other..😊

Do update soon...😊😊

Originally posted by: rismita

Whenever you start a story... My heart starts beating and I start dancing

Love all ur stories specially ur style of writing am in love ❤️

am already started my dreaming session Arnav and Khushi love story ☺️

But di in diz chap I have few of suggestions

1) Arnav Basu Raizada doesn't suit infact Bengali people don't have a surname also like Raizada. I think Arnav Basu mullik will suit more.

2) Di bengali girls don't wear Mangal sutra. In fact they don't have any rituals with Mangalsutra also... Only things that matter to them are Sankha Pola and Sindur...

I will be happy if you incorporate this things di.

overall brilliant start 👏

A very different story.
I Like it and looking forward to it...
Awesome

Wow !! This is a unique concept !!

wow... very excited