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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
amna please jaldi se continue karo na... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
hey amna nice part... 👏 intersting too.... 😉
plz do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
amna dear please continue soon..me seriously can't wait long for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
part: 4

sujal come out of bath room ...and digs in to wardrobe ....bring out his black guuci's suiting ....!
kashish: are u going some where ....
sujal: not me .....we are going ...
kashish: but where
sujal: in mr.johnson's party ....as if u forget ..
kashish: oh yeah sujal i need to talk to you
sujal: what now ..
kashish: i am sorry sujal about what i said ..
sujal look at her ..and smile and press his lipsm on her forehead ...
sujal: its ok ..well hurry up and dont dare to say this again ..
kashish: ok baba
sujal: wear some thing good .
kashish: i always wear some thng differnt from others sujal come one ....
sujal: ok baba ..but wear black ...beacuase u r my date today ..
kashish: date ..are u nuts i m ur wife ..
sujal: arey sneha will be with mr .lockandwala ....u know how ....
kashish: i know here how cheap ..she is ....
sujal: kashish ...
kashish: remeber she was ex of angad before he got married to kripa ...he told me ..
sujal: u and ur lovely brother ....keep ...hating poor sneha ...
kahsish: poor my left foot ..any ways who is especial guest ....
sujal: well ...there are few ..
kashish: names please
sujal: karunya ..u know runner up in indian idol this year (i love his voice 👏 ) he is especial guest .....besides him ...rex rooprekha and qazi they all especially come here in ottawa(canada) for this night ..
kashish: ahaan ..means ottawa will rocks .... tonight ...

kashish ..wears black sari designed by monish malhotra.....with diamond set gifted by sujal on their anniversery .....she looked stunning as always ...sujal looks charming and handsome in black ...they reached to party ....
the hall was decore with white curtains ....and pink roses ....red carpets ....the light music was in back ground .....they entered when some one taps kashish's back ..she turned and hugs the person ..

kashish: oh angad .....ahaan man in black tu suna tha but today ..man in white bhi dekh lia ....
angad (with his sweet smile ) : oh di ...u are also looking stunning and jeejo ..u r looking ..outstanding ...he shakes hand with sujal and lightly hugs him ...
angad: how is ria dong ....
kashish: she is fine ...and where is kripa ...
angad: she is there ....he pointed ...a beatiful lady ....of nearly 24 years old in white saree ...angad a handsome guy of 26 years old .....he lighly call kripa
angad: krips ...she turned around ..she was enough to take once breath away ...
kripa: oh di hiii ..she hugs kashish tightly ..
kashish: so how were vacations ..and how is baby ..she lightly pats kripa's slightly puffy belly ...
kripa(blushed): fine
angad: arey theek kesey nahi ho gi main jo hoon ....
kashish: i m so happy ke finally u are together ..werna us sneha ne tu koi kasar nahi chori thi ..
angad: forget her di ....i dont want bother ...about what she did ..that was past and i am happy man with present i have ..and future i will have with my beautiful wife and lots of naughty kids ..
sujal: if i m not wrong ..angad always want a cricket team kripa ..he laughed ..kripa blushes .....
when sneha come over there looka t kashish , kripa and angad with sujal ..she says hi to all and lightly hug sujal and give him kiss on his cheek kashish was pissed off ..
sneha: i m unlucky for the reason i m not with u today ..
angad: but i guess ..mr.lokandwala is unlucky to have u today ..right sneha ...
sneha: oh u plz keep ur mouth shut ..u a coward a chicken heart rat ..
kripa: mind ur anguage sneha ..u r talking to my hubby ..secondly i wonder how come ppl like u ...are here ...duh .lets go angad ...di jeeju chaliya ..sujal say sorry by glance to snha she understand and leave ...

the annoucer announce karunya's name ....he come over the stage .....ppl clap for him .....and he start the song with an instruction that there should be a couple dance ... the song was like this
You got some thing
That sound gonna back u girl
My heart saw some thing
When u never around
My heart goes up side down
Tenu le ke jana apney naal haa
Nahi jeena hun yara inney sa
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey

Girl I senses
I become over drink
Ur face keep buzzing around
My world keeps up side down
Tenu le ke jana apney naal haa
Nahi jeena hun yara inney sa
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey

Girl tenu le jana
Aggi raat neend aawey
Girl tenu le jana
Aggi raat neend aawey


Do u want more
I know its bit late
Girl use the door
I think u should go
Coz I might loose control
Tenu le ke jana apney naal haa
Nahi jeena hun yara inney sa
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey

Girl tenu le jana
Aggi raat neend aawey
Girl tenu le jana
Aggi raat neend aawey
Din nu chain terpawey
Aggi raat neend aawey
Din nu chain terpawey
Tenu le ke jana apney naal haa
Nahi jeena hun yara inney sa
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey
Aggi raat neen na awey
Din nu chain terpawey

angad kripa dance well but angad was keen abt kripa ..as she was wearing high heel .......sujal and kashish were superb ...speech less ....they dance so good that ....karunya himself goes to them and ask them

karunya: u guys are superb i m gonna ...sing .....some portions of this song ..will dance again alone ..only u two and i will sing ..

sujal: our pleasure ..
karunya ..sing again and two of them dance perfectly :

COMING UP AGAIN: what happened eight years ago ...akshat come back .....angad beats him ...sujal ....sneha ask him to fire kashish ..and marry her .....!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
Didi
Look I'm the first one to comment this time and it gives me immense pleasure saying that your story is really a very nice one. I love it and I love you for writing it 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
amna dear a too good part......i totally loved it dear....... 👏 & u know what i think dear the next part is even more intresting as angad will smash akshat. 👏 but then y is sneha behaving like this.. i'll kill her if she separates sujal kashish... 😡 ab please continue soon.... 😃 dear waise i have a feeling jab sneha sujal se kahegi to fire kashish the first thing sujal will do is he will fire sneha out of his life... 😆
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
👏 rocking part !!! too gudd.......amna di u rock !! yaar very gud story its addictive......fantastic job 😃 😃 plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
no suri ....sujal will do some thing more interesting do wait n watch 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: cute_face86

no suri ....sujal will do some thing more interesting do wait n watch 😆



ok amna me will be waiting to know what sujal will do...😉 i think woh sneha ki baand bajayega...ya phir akshat sneha ki shaddi karwa de...😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
amna di ........to koollllll..............plz cont soon.....

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