Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 2

aamna wonderful beginning pls continue the story will b waiting for the next part. Post it soon. 👏

HEY amna superb intro... 😛 just 2 good... 👏
dear do cont ur story soon.... 😊

amna dear plz post soon..me very eager to read the first part... 😃

~~**part:1**~~

We see a beautiful master bedroom with wooden floor white walls glass sliding door opens in terrace indoor plantation is done to give room a beautiful look ….a wardrobe and bathroom are very inside sliding cupboards giving this sight also a new look. A wooden master bed with cream color bed sheet and pillows red quilt along with wooden bamboos and white net curtain covering the bed along with bed a table is there with 4 drawers so that a couple can put all necessary edibles there in front of bed there is 30 inches flatiron on wooden TV trolley ..Besides which a DVD player is placed beneath that racks are there to keep DVD 'S CD'S and video cassettes! On an other wall a dresser is that which has huge mirror ….on opposite sliding glass door open in terrace and two chairs are in terrace..Along with hanging sitter two floor cushion and two back cushion are on floor in front of which a glass table is placed on center piece …the room is magnificently designed . antique statue and beautiful wall hangings increases the beauty!

The door of room slowly open a figure enters in the room... Lady in white knee length pants and halter neck white top she has a small purse a white purse in her hand she through the purse on bed and her self fall on bed she seems very tired . when again the door open and small irl enter in rooms she as of 7 years old ….along with an old woman enter seems to be servant a baby girl wearing pink frock while the lady servant wearing knee length navy blue skirt and white dress shirt the lady servant give the lady of house a glass of water ! she drink it then smile at young girl ..and with her gaze allow servant to leave the place ….the little girl then jump on bed then on the stomach of lady ;
Lady: ow…
Baby: what happen mom
Lady: nothing I just drank a glass of water and jump on my stomach so just a bit paining it was ..
Baby: oops sorry mom
Lady: oh my bay u don't need to ….
Baby: ok mom …
Lady: so ria how was the day ..?
Baby: it was the same …u and dad don't have time for me …
Lady: oh my poor child ….
Ria: mom are u dating with swayum uncle?
Lady: who told u …the lady looked at her carefully …
Ria: hmmm my friend told me …mom ?
Lady: yes
Ria: mom what is daing and why are u doing ..?
Lady: I am not bacha ….actually swayum are just friends …and dating it is nothing!
Ria: ok dad don't like swayum uncle …right and u r still his friend
Lady: I don't like sneha but ur dad is her best friend ….
Ria: dad must be dating with sneha aunty right ..?
Lady: neither me and nor him ….
Ria then talked to lady for some time then left ..her room head to her own room …..the lady was disturbed now by her daughter's questions
Lady: sujal …kahan ho tum here are u damn it?
When some one hugs her from back …she leaned back in his chest …..the camera focus the guy he has dark deep brown eyes ..a charming face ..fair color ….and cute smile ..he …the word handsome is perfect for him …!
Lady: sujal kahan they tum
Sujal: with sneha kashish !

Coming up: are sujal kashish really dating with others …what will be the effect of this n their daughter ria?

great part
cant wait to see what happens next
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mind-blowing
great start
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that was so cool sis u should continue

kewl concept aamna......really waitin 2 read da nxt part.....

hey different concept al together... 😉
intersting... 😛 very nice part... 👏
do cont soon...

amna the first part of your totally ROCKED..this story of your's is so very differnt & very very very intresting...you keep up the good work... 👏 please continue soon..i'll be eagerly waiting... 😃