Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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~~**PART:2**~~

Kashish and sujal then sit on their comforty bed kashish look depress sujal stroke her hairs and then lightly ask ;
Sujal: what happens dear
Kashish: nothing today ria was asking weird questions
Sujal: weird questions is there every thing alright ?
Kashish: in her class from neighboring children ask her that are we dating with swayum and sneha?
Sujal: so ?
Kashish: sujal ..what happen when she come to know about ….
Sujal: about what kashish ?
Kashish: the damn questions sujal ..she yell and stands up keep her hand on her head then frustrated kashish sit on bed …sujal look at her first then hugs her ;
Sujal: don't worry kashish every thing going to be alright
Kashish look at him with eyes full of hope ;
Sujal: so how was the day ……when you are going to dumb swayum its now long ….aren't u now bored of your not so good looking boyfriend swayum shergill?
Kashish: I may also ask same question when you are going to dumb your ugly sneha?
Sujal: you are jealous kashish
Sujal: jealous who …me from that sneha ……not even my left foot sujal grewal ! saying this she through her coat on laughing sujal's face !
Sujal: kashish …he say while getting up …
Kashish: what now …
Sujal: it is now almost 8 years we are married …..but still you don't understand me …
Kashish: yes sujal even I don't understand why …akshat left me ….when I was pregnant with his daughter
Kashish said with tears in her eyes ..sujal become angry and tightly hold her shoulders
Sujal: why you always forget kashish that ria is my daughter …why damn it …….there is no relation between …ria and him got it! He leave to take bath …kashish was feeling sorry for him

Coming up: what happened 8 years before?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
amna dear too tooo tooooooo toooooooooooo toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
👏 so akshat ditched kashish..hmm..intresting very very intresting.. me wanting to know what happened 8 years back in their lives...... 😊 😛 😃 now you please continue soon as me eagerly waiting for the past mysteries to unfold... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks suri ....... 😆 i think some thing really bad happened ..... 😆 but that bad was good becoz sujal kashish are together for that reason 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: cute_face86

thanks suri ....... 😆 i think some thing really bad happened ..... 😆 but that bad was good becoz sujal kashish are together for that reason 😆



u don't have to thank me dear ur story deseves all the appreciation.....😛 i think whatever happened in the past was not good but very very gooddddddd.....kyunke aaj sujal , kashish saath joh hain..........😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 I can't explain in words that how wonderfully you write; the curiosity element is too much. I just loved it! I'll be glued to this space constantly for the forthcoming parts. Continue soon. Thanks for writing such a nice story 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woh wonderful story continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnks i have no words ..i m on ninth cloud and for this i thank neha _9 ...becoz her stories the way she writes ....although i never been in contact with her directly ...but she is my inspiration ..and this storry is the ebstes thing i can write ever............! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amna....gud job yaar...it was totally awesome...i m soo curious now abt wut happpnd 8 yrz. ago....plz. continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part
awesome....
mind-blowing
cant wait for the next part
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amna di tooo kool part..........it was fab.........plz cont soon.........but 8 years pheley kia hua tha..... 😕 ...... 👏

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