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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Ha ha wily minx you :). Happy, JP, HP WELL DONE!. Will be back to add to this

Added Here. Sorry I kind of forgot about this one :P

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Loved d names JP, HP, NK n HAPPY's
nice update dear

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Loved it M.

Love this Arnav. The image you've conjured up of Arnav with two guns on a horse. Woow.

Khushi is as fiesty as ever.

Love your take on HP, JP and Nand Kishore's names. That was hilarious.

Aakash is a doctor. Suits his personality to the T.

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

It's very nice.. I love reading western novels and watching movies..

Arshi are adapting well... I love manny Mahi...hp.jp,,happy .. Renames..

But nanny raizada 👏 so cute...

Anjali could have been angel .. Or Angie...

Arnav will be arnie for us...

I like the story.. And I get the indian concept of talking eagles...

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@..mrinalini..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Now that was one good start😃

I liked how you wrote this chapter from Arnav's perspective.😳It's all so different and new and yet it doesn't feel out of place😛All Thanks to you!!⭐️

So Arnav and Khushi meet *phew*👍🏼😳Now waiting for ArHi to paint the rugged town red☺️

I wouldn't lie...it's something I have never read before and it does look confusing sometimes but I guess the novelty of this concept is what keeps me hooked!!😛

Waiting for the next chapter🤗

PS:Manny is the wild-west version of Manorama,right??🤣

Edited by droopy-asleep - 12 years ago

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Really liking it
A different take on them
Do continue...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

OMG!!!! ASR is Ranch head...

Love HP, JP and Happy and not to forget our NK and his description...

Very new concept Madhu...

All the best...

Looking forward for the next chapter...

Cheers for the PM.😛

Edited by sunitikapoor - 12 years ago

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Woww nice update...

Fiesty khushiii always treat to read n sexy aranv 😊

Love the name oh hp jp, happy n nk but like happy name most😆

Each n every detail was written beautifully

Loved it

Continue soon

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

aww loved the chapter one...it was awesome...all about arnav...cool so a very strong arnav...thank god not much of past baggage...but he is great...built up an empire...

the fiesty khushi and i loved her dress...its cool...

omg the names of HP,JP,NK and Happy is soo funny...

nanny and anjali as usual looks like darlings...but anjali is a wdow...aww thats sad...

loved the update...about the dream waiting for more to unleash...

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

I liked ur veraion of jp , hp and Nk..!

So this was whole about arnav, who is Arnav in here.., wid two guns in his jeans..!
His life, his past, present, duties, reponsibilities..

Khushi's fast retort..! And a straight tongue..

Quite a different image that charecters potray..
Waiting to read more..;)

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