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Posted: 12 years ago

really great start. arnav update! get to know him more.

yay! they both have met and exchanged names!! ;P

that spark has caught!

fab start and excellent writing style :)

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annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

Can't believe how good it was ...not that I think you don't write well , you write very well indeed but was wondering how you'd pull off the setting with A and K . But I am totally convinced with the wild west background and they all seem to fit right in ..Kudos !

Loved how you established NK , Happy ,JP and HP and how their names came into being . All the Raizadas and Guptas are in place with their entourage ,just not in Delhi but in a foreign locale ...loving it .

And he wanted her to know him as Arnav ... Bring on the love story ...

Took me right back to some reading ...someone called " Sudden " , if I remember right ...a gunslinger , laconic , mysterious etc etc ...was totally hooked on the genre for a while ...

Will wait for the next and thnx for the pm.

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meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok. So here I am again.

This is something else. I have to say that you've done your research well and except the names, there really is nothing to say that this isn't actually people in the Wild Wild West...

And I love the description of the land and the dream - It was the highlight of the chapter for me. Very well done, very mysterious...

I am hooked!

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great start! :D

Lovely style of wriritng :D

They have met :D Soon passion will follow ;p

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angeldream14

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it

wild wild west interesting

khuhsi is feiry

ASR is no word for him

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

I Like ArHi's Characters ; D

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shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loving it.any connection with the dream n th past?fiesty khushi n hot headed asr.waiting for more

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IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

Love it...ASR in a stetson on an appaloosa...lovely vision😳

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Summer99

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Posted: 12 years ago

the names of the characters were joy to read

really loving the story

always love spunky khushi

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saba

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome start can't wait to read more
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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