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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Firstly, I loved your take on JP, HP, NK, and Happy's names. It was funny 😆

Secondly, I love the image of a strong Arnav, with two guns slung low on his jeans clad hips 😳

Thirdly, I love the image of a daring Khushi with a sharp tongue and jeans tucked into her low heeled boots...

The chapter was all about Arnav, his past, his family, his friends, his responsibilties, his opinions, his nature, his attraction.

It was good to know him better. 😊

Will wait for the story to unfold and will keep my thoughts about the dream to myself 😛

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Oh yay!

And we're off!

I love love LOVE this story.

It is so awesome! Because I've never read an ArHi fanfic set in the Wild West and also because I love how much attention you pay to detail!

The tribes, the names, the landscape, the mannerisms-- all of it!

I love how feisty Khushi is and how sexy Arnav is (obviously)!

That dream in the beginning-- the doe is Khushi isn't it?

And I bet she's more involved with Arnav's past than meets the eye.

HP, JP, NK and Happy. I LOL-ed at that.

OH NO! Widowed Anjali! I do hope she doesn't fall afoul that Shyam.

Ooh! Doc Akash. What does Payalji do? And Lavanya? And Aman?

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riyya6

@riyya6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

👍🏼 res

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

😃 ...

The Wild Wild West ... Arnav in a Stetson ... A feisty fiery Khushi ...

what more can one want ... 😉

Po Jianguo ... JP and Po Heng ... HP... 😆

Hidalgo Alejandro Pablo Pascual Yago ... Happy ... 😆

Thanks ... Looking forward to this story ...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

If the prologue had me intrigued...chapter ! sucked me into the FF completely!

ASR as a ranch head, the cow boy setting which you presented is not only hatke but just fabulous! And we already got the first Arshi confrontation. I like that your Khushi is a fiery one👍🏼. Loved the NK description as well😆

Looking forward to the next part already!

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

super super sixer chapter madhu and such new new new concept muaaah i learned a lot of new words

Po Jianguo became JP and Po Heng became HP.ha ha i loved it

'Hidalgo Alejandro Pablo Pascual Yago-happy OMG what was that

im loving this story madhu and this new arnav and khushi and nani, anji and their ranch wow wow wow

is it called a ranch

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Wow whattay blast !!!

First of all HP, JP,NK, AND HAPPY !!!! That was hilarious and only you could conjure something like that !!!🤣

ASR was the inimitable knight in shining armor for Shashi Gupta and family !!

What a lovely description ... totally reminiscent of the Wild Wild West !

And of course when ASR and Khushi collide sparks fly all over the place !!😳😉

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wow - what a meeting - it will be sometime till he discovers that the deer represent her doe eyes :)

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Aiyee, you didn't tell me you were writing another ArHI FF! Bahut na-insaafi hai!

Anyway, WIld Wild West! How exciting!

Already love JP and HP. The the Nino that is NK :D The hotness that is ASR and the fire that is Khushi.

Loved the description of the landscape :) I'm all set for this ride :D

PS - Do you send PMs? Can you send me one too when you update?

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Different concept.

Loved it.

Thanks for the PM.

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