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Madhu that was huge surprise dear

Both update esp second one was fatabulous. .your flow of writing Masha Allah , im just unable to express it in words

So the equations changed forever between them
but will they be successful in expressing the same

I think they wont need any words to express what they feel, they already said it

The deer and the eagle-superb

mujhako aankhon se dil mein utar jaane do

kuchh bigad jaane do

kuchh sawar jaane do

ik bahaana bane ik fasaana bane

abhi na bana toh phir kabhi nahi kabhi nahi

pyaar ko ho jaane do,

pyaar mein kho jaane do

aitbaar kisaka hai, intjaar kiska hai

abhi na huwa toh phir kabhi nahi kabhi nahi

pyaar ko ho jaane do

what is the meaning of shikaaa

Read the three chapters together...
Chapter-10 was mainly about Khushi and her & her family fears of Shyam finding them. I can't blame Shashi for asking her not to share the info with anyone including Arnav. He is protective for Khushi and doesn't want to take any chance with her life.
The kiss was one of passion telling that how much he needs to be close to her, desires her.

Chaptr-11 were of Arnav caring for Khushi. He cares for her deeply even though they are always ready to be at each others throat when they meet. He couldn't see her in pain. She is special to him.
I liked Shining Cloud and the family. He is an understanding friend.
Does Shikha, Shi'aad means husband-wife or lovers?😛 I'm sure it means one of these.
Chapter-12 was about taking that caring side to the next level of realization. They both having same dream of the eagle & deer and finding each other over there was so pure and magical. It was endearing. They sleeping in each other's arms and finding peace there was romantic. As much as this kiss was romantic it was as beautiful too. The connection that they have not only in their dreams but in reality too is amazing.
Loved all the updates...😊

I'm exhausted so I res to comment tomorrow.

interesting...well written..update soon..😊

Both updates are super….what do you mean by Shi'aad and shikaa???

The night at the Indian village was awesome….

Thanks for the double treat…

I loved the way you write their dreams…

Very well written…

Thanks for the PM😛

Loved their dreams
nice update dear
thanx 4 d pm

I loved the double update.bravo
Ahh this I'm sure helped them come closer.oh the man said khushi is his women. Wow this is becoming more beautiful by the day. Great job!

oh loved these two updates!! felt inexplicably at peace...the dreams are surreal and beautiful...the last scene at the cliff edge was amazing...beautifully written as always

I had my doubts about the words shiaad and shika, so i googled them ;) turns out my guess was right, husband and wife indeed. I cannot wait for khushi to find out the meaning.

I think this chapter 12 was the best chapter of this story so far, no arguments, just a genuine understanding of the situation, each others dreams, needs, it was a stunning chapter.

also, the way you wrote the entire scene of her falling off the cliff, I think my heart stopped beating for a bit.

love
sonia