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alisondi

@alisondi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

oh my god!!!!!!!! it was a treat... nd love u for giving us two chapters together :)

absolutely brilliant !!! n unique in its own way of expression n analytical approach :)

way to go author!!!

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

with arnav's soothing touch, kushi's pain is bearable..

and they have found each other in their dreams...
i find this to be so romantic..!

tks for the PM. 😊
eagerly waiting to see where things go from here..

shiikaa...shyaad... are they terms of endearment..?

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

OMG! when Khushi's horse went off i was like Nooo!

Khushi got hurt badly but YAY arnav was there ;)

Aww Arnav was really worried. It sounded very painful though. damn.

WHoop Arnav kissed Khushi properly this time!!! :D

xxx

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

glad arnav was vth khushi... n khushi did get hurt badly

dy kissed 😳 n made it dr first kiss wow

loved d updt

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Beautifully written, your updates are so crisp and intelligent...

He thinks about the kiss, and I loved how he feels she was the piece of the missing puzzle,which is now complete, with her he finds himself at home, where he belongs, like she is the one who completes him and is the one!

He justifies his actions of trying to protect her whereas in reality he is the one who she needs protecting from, but he is so drawn to her...

Loved how it began, the setting and then the teasing, her going off on her own, I loved how he asks her if she wants him to go with, but of course she was going to say no...

The fear he feels when he sees her after the accident, also brought back that cliff scene from the show...

I love the angle of the friends who help him and realise her importance in his life and guide him...

I loved the spirits who give clarity to his thoughts and dilemma, I love how you are bringing them into the story whenever there is confusion!

I love his vulnerability concerning her, the dream said so much ...there was so much to it...loved it...just reinforcing their attraction both physical and emotional ...

Loved how she wakes up and finds herself sleeping with him peacefully and loved their kiss, loved that it was mutual and they both needed it and wanted it...loved how he said that he was sorry for their kiss, not because they kissed but that is "not " ( I think there was a typo in that line, you wrote " now how" instead of " not how". ) how he would have wanted their first kiss to be, loved her innocence and surprise to that..!

Sen his friends tell him that she is the one! A keeper.

I never thought I would love this story as much ask do ...cannot wait for the next update!

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Interesting and different kind of story! I like, like lot!
I knew that Shyam will be bad new. That man he killed, was it Anjali's husband?
Naani and Anjali want Arnav to get married to Payal, that was hilarious!
Khushi is the missing piece in Arnav's life but it wont be easy because both if them are like fire and khushi has lots of ego.

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Two updates...that was lovely...so eagle lead Arnav to Khushi in his dream,he now know she is the one for him...but what about Khushi,she did seen a lil boy,right?and all other sleeping arrangement n the Kiss making me *sigh*

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

You are really putting fire in the veins of Arnav and Khushi.

Was wondering why Arnav introduced Khushi as his shiaad and thought it was to protect her. But had a hearty laugh when Khushi called him shikaa! without even knowing its meaning. What will she do when she realizes that it means my husband! Is it any wonder they did not give him a separate mattress to sleep! So Arnav's name is night hawk? Does he have Indian blood? Apache! He seems to be familiar with their ways as well as they accept him easily. That is one tribe that is dangerous as they are mostly wild and wily along with blood thirsty!

Loved the update.

Enjoyed it a lot Agni Kanya!