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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 11:

That Arnav feels ke he is the person from whom Khushi needs protection couldn't be truer...but he doesn't realise that the danger from him is paler in comparison to that from the striking S people.

It was interesting to see the way of healing of the diyi...the traditional approach, both of the treatment and pain bearing. This chapter also brought forth Arnav's caring side😊

Chapter 12:

With the Apaches being Arnav's friends, I suppose they'll help in the eventual action that is to follow.

It was only when the kiss ended did I realize why Arnav had said he hadn't wanted their first kiss to be so...perfectly described, with all the mind numbing, toe curling, blood vapourising effects on the reader☺️

Its been two days right? Arnav did mention that her parents might be worried but with the already passed time have they been given an intimation about her whereabouts?😕

Loved both the chapters!😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

First tell me

Shi'a ad ...what does it mean... Women wife...

What a cracker updates... Both of them are super...if Khushi spent her time in chuck wagon...

The next night at the indian village was awesome..

Shikaa..

Shi'a ad

What do they mean... I bet they mean husband and wife...😆

I was expecting a native style wedding between the two... But Khushi had broken her shoulder.. Still u gave the first night...thanks..😛

Do they Victorian values in states.,, then he has compromised her and as a honorable man has to marry her...😉

Edited by msin - 12 years ago

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Wow ... a double treat ... Thanks ...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Im dead. After chapter 12, can you blame me? And no it wasn't the kiss though that was spectacular. It was the merging of dreams. Poetic. Perfect

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

WOW..what an amazing update..
from googleji..
shi'aad - my wife
shikaa - husband

Sweet 😊

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

i thought carrying a gun would help her but i guess not with a rattler😕

very dramatic updates i only hope they move forward from this and she does tell him about shyam. specially as shyam might show up at circleR as well.

your imagination astounds me I have now read three of your stories and they are all so different Love it 👏👏👏

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

So many updates! *happy dance* I love you dammit (to the power gazzillion)

I like Shining Cloud, his name and the man he is. A friend in need is a friend indeed :D

When approved by the forces and the spirits, what could stop them? Sure they have to work through a lot of things, but they are meant to be :D

I love the way you write out the dreams., they are.. dreamy(you're allowed to say "duh!"), like one of nature's elements. And the kiss too, like it was the most natural thing to happen. Like they are meant to sleep in each other's arms. Poetic. Lovely!