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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Loved the take on her being called Butterfly here too , Arnav wants to buy her home? What is it just a business interest or more?

Khushi in green?

Khushi falling into his arms, khushi wanting to earn money to help her parents, Payal a genius with stiching reminds me of the show...he flicks her nose...looks,for her, she works in a place he partly owns...

Loved the sowing of the wild oats bit...nanny !

He is mesmerised by her, she confronts him, they speak in silence ...just wonderful ...am going to keep reading ...please do pm me!

So in the beginning the guy with the turquoise bracelet is that SMJ ...the jury is still out on him...

Love the twins...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

have to thank rasgulla for turning me on to this. great story and wonderfully written. very evocative of the wild west.

loved the transposition of the characters to this different setting.

looking forward to the continuation

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alisondi

@alisondi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Oh my freaking Gawd!!!!!
Read all the chapters in one go n absolutely loved them to the core...
.a new ambience n beautiful ARSHI ..
Already famished for more updates woww :)

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Wow perfect ff love it update and pm me soon:)

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

It's beautiful and interesting Madhu, I don't mind you updating on the blog. But please send me the link, thanks for the pm.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

It's beautiful. Thanks for the pm Madhu.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

i love it

its our IPK in WWW. agree with Saiyu on al counts. reminds of beast and bleeding roses by Aquiline where the back drop is entirely different and yet so IPK