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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 4:

Of subtle glances and faraway looks; I'm sure Akash is looking forward to dinner just so to extend the interaction with Payal😉

A bilingual translation of Sanka devi!😆 Hadn't expected this from Tia Abeja!

What are the Guptas running from?😕

Rockyji ka bhi role hai? There's so much suspense with the Guptas and Arnav and the Rocky ka boss (which i'm guessing is Shyam) that I'm already biting my nails.

This Shyam sure is a bold one😆 So are nanny's practical(?) thoughts...who would have expected the matriarch of the house to be the one saying that Arnav should sow his wild oats?🤣

I'm guessing although Arnav is Ela's (I'm liking the name Ela more than Lavanya) business partner, she secretly (or not so) has the hots for him. And Arnav finds a way to be Khushi's boss, doesn't he? Even if the setting is in the wild wild west?😉


Chapter 5:

So Anjali reciprocates his feelings as well...hmmm.

You know what starting a paragraph with 'Arnav was hot' does to readers☺️...pucho mat!

Pink cheeked, pink nosed spitfire😆...accha hai😳

Horse ride? yeh toh aur bhi accha hai😳 😳

This double update sure made my Sunday😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... He reallyflick her nose
What guptas arerunnng away from?...
Shayam has feelings for ajnaliii hmmm,
Conti ue soon
Thanks for m

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update.
suld i trust shyam or nt?
he seem 2 rely lik anjali but he is arnav's rival.
jst hope khushi tell her stry soon 2 arnav 4 y d guptas r nt stayin at 1 place 4 long tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
two chapters at once...wow...and loved both...so shyam makes an appearence and that too as a nice guy...hmmm why does my instincts doesnt like him...howeverr his interference on the both the familis are a bit too much...
so arnav flicks her nose too when he holds her...loved it..he has become more comfortable around khushi though she doesnt looks so..and khushis huffing and puffing was adorable...so buaji has kept the same name for her...suits her by the way...
garima doesnt love the moving...but shashi thinks of arnavs decision...does this whole thing happens after khushi sees that murder...is that why they are always on move???
so wild bull is arnavs too...loved the part on ella...they are good friends...and im happy on it...

the sunday was wuite nice actually and more than ever akash ji and payal ji got a chance to be together...
the kids are attached to khushi that is lovely...but im worried about anjali...is she falling for the charms f shyam...
so khushi cries and it hurts arnav...loved it...and the way he held her on the horse...some ones falling and falling real hard...

loved both the update...want to see what happens next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow khushi sweety,I feel bad for her.but I can see the chemistry already.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just got the link to this story from rasgulla..will start reading soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
what did arnav thought that khushi wanted to talk privately?😛y Gupta's moving often?
nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me likey the title and me loved the backdrop <3

It is the most unique concept that I have comd across on ArHi and since you are writing it, I have no doubt its going to be as great and exciting as the first chapter suggested.


I couldn't stop myself from reading this after Rasgulla_sp fangirled so much about it and I don't read incomplete stories but for this one I made an exception :-)


Also I would have done exactly what Khushi did to hide but I wouldn't have decided to run that moment. It also looks like the murderer too is familiar with the streets and lanes as he easily chased her :-)

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb..
read all d chapters just now..both our western asr and kushi are amazing ...
especially i love d way u have described a fiercy kushi a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is brilliant so far!

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