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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Two updates...amazing one,why Arnav wants to buy that apary from bussiness which Akash mentioning... Khushi is eorking on a saloon which Arnav is the partner... Loved the ride n confrontation... Shyam jha remains as a mystery,but hoping he will be good with Anjali n the twins..btw whose photograph was that which Anjali watching...

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I just love it plz update and pm me soon :)

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Two updates in two days? You're on a roll, woman! Am I glad!

Oh, I am loving this Wild West meets IPK adventure - the nose flicking, the Rabba Vey moments, Arnav moving forward-Khushi moving backward until she hits the wall (or in this case, the trunk), the wrist bruising, Arnav's helplessness at watching Khushi cry.. Wonderful!

And then we have these lovely characters - Arnav is an honorable man, I like that... one who commands respect. And Aakashji and Payalji are playing their little waving game, how nice!

I love grandmothers. Needless to say I love Nanny Raizada. Wise old lady, she is. Perceptive, caring but not overbearing. But I am not comfortable with Shyam. No, not one bit. But I will wait for you to tell us more :)

Greedy Twiggy wants more updates jaldi 😳

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

How do you do this lady? You came up with such unique names for JP HP NK and Happy was a big surprise. I was wondering who this injured man is :-P

I think situation back at Khushi's place is not good enough. No wonder they have packed their bags and are changing towns.

Haye ArHi finally met. I feel as if I am watching a movie :-D Are you by any chance a fan of fantasy novels?

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Hum kar sakte hai

Tum har kaam akele nahi kar sakti

Haan hum kar sakte hai

Lagi shart?

Bas ab shart lagna baaki hai :-D

Did the doc and the shy meet eachother? Is the cure for excessive shyness lies with the gentle doctor?

Whats with box lightening?

Is the murderer and the Black guy the same?

Oh God they are going to trace them! But I hope ASR oops Arnav reaches them before they do :-)

Meri saamne wali khidki mein ek chand ka tukda rehta hai. Afsos hai ke woh humse kyun ukdha ukdha rehta hai

Ankhon hi ankhon mein ishaara hogaya. Bethe bethe jeene ka sahaara ho gaya ;-)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Whats up with Ela and Aman? Arnav seemed friendly with him but Ela was very reluctant and hesitant towards him and I could feel the wave of animosity she emitted for him.

Khushi will be working in the bar? I am sure of one customer who is going to visit this place often. Yes Khushi! Give it to him! I am proud of ya!

Oh so the doc meets the shy :-D and the shy gave an extra smile to the doc

Whats up with box lightning? Why didnt Rudi give it to Arnav? Why Gupta? Were they friends? Why do Arnav wanna buy it?

The first thing that Arnav notices is her horse or rather the absence of her horse and her

How will I-will-bend-your-finger-Gupta take the news of Mr. Hotshot wanting to buy her homestead?

Perfect timing I should say of pulling and pushing. Since Arnav is the stronger of the two, the unbalanced force worked in his and our favour ;-)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Recommended by charu...we both met spamming our favourite writers...so I trust her judgement and I am glad I did...

Chapter 1

Was brilliant, loved the setting, the images you created for Aranv and Khushi, never imagined them in this avatar but you made it so easy...

Loved the take on the names, HP, JP, NANNY, NK, Happy!

Loved the fiesty Khushi and rugged Arnav...

Loved how he tells her she did not SK him his name and she says ASR only for him to respond ...it's Arnav...loved that ...! Will catch up on the rest and comment!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Two chapters...wows you're awesome girl...!

a lot happening...Box-Lightining falling apart...Shyam wooing Anjali...Aakash making inroads to Payals heart...Nanny Raizada aligning her heart and opening up to Shyam and his advances...!

Why does Nanny Raizada also not know about Arnav's part ownership in the saloon...? And yet Shyam is privy to this info...probably as a rival...will we be seeing a Shyam and Arnav meeting soon..?

Does Arnav know that Shyam comes calling at Circle -R often..?

So what is Shashi...if he's not able to take care of a ranch...he has no experience...what's the reason he got the ranch from Rudi...? And why did Rudi not give it to Arnav...?

Kushi always gets to the point with no preamble...! I wonder what else Arnav has placed on the table when he offered to buy Box-Lightining...? Sure he was not planning on making them homeless...?

Payal the seamstress...we have a fashion quotient here as well...! Love the riding boots with a dress...a lil bit of defiance and spark ...the Kushi trademark...! Loved both the chapters...waiting for the next one...!