Flight of the sparrows ~ ArHi OS (NOTE Pg10)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

beautiful..very well written..😊

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I read about the rape incident on the internet. Truly horrifying. Made me physically sick. I hope the rapist rots in the deepest pit of hell.

Coming to this piece, t emanated raw, numbing pain. Emotional and heart-wrenching. At a loss of words right now. Extremely well written, Rae.

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

A very beautiful OS

Sometimes when the story is written in Hindi it hits me way more, I know that sounds odd but the words and the deeper meaning they have in Hindi really get to you

I can't even imagine what the parents of that five year old are going through. My thoughts and prayers go out to them

You writers are super talented, the way you weave emotions thorough the story is just amazing

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

So so so heartbreaking! It was written so amazingly, made me cry! I really don't know what to say right now, so I'll probably come and post another comment later on xx

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

This was just too heartbreaking to read.

Loved your tribute to the kids who indeed, never get to see the bright future awaiting them.

Great work!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Superb...emotional and heart breaking

thanks for the PM

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

My God , you write so beautifully. My eyes were moist when I read this.

My heart goes out to parents who lose their kids.

This is the worst punishment God can inflict upon you.

Loved the way Arnav came and helped his son and daughter in law in dealing with their grief.

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

When I see little kids in pain or dying my heart cries. They are just so tiny, delicate, fragile and innocent. Unfortunately all over the world they have to go through things which neither can their mind understand nor their body can bear the pain :'(

You depicted the loss of a dear child through this OS very well :-)

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aveeshakiran

@aveeshakiran

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

beautifully written...lovedit...it was heartbreaking though...u r an amazing writer...please update me wenever u write a new one...

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dilectus

@dilectus

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

you know angel, i never spare people who make me cry!!! i hate them...and do let them know every possible chance that they are being hated. i dont have it in me to hurt anyone intentionally, but for me, being hated is worst possible punishment, and so inflict the same to anyone who has done wrong by me. i am very extrovert, loud-spoken and straight forward, and people think i fight a lot. but the truth is, i am never able to fight verbally, coz even before that the hurt appears, making me go quiet. i dont say anything, fearing that i might say something which would trigger hate for me in other person's mind. and people think i am rude, so rude that i dont even justify my actions.and i fear rejection, so much so that even if one of my comments on ff dint get like by the writer, i scrap/pm her and ask why she hadnt liked my cmnt and all others in near vicinity of mine. she actually had to tell me not to freak out, and that she read cmnts thru cell and that mine was left accidently.

and yet, this is the second tym i am letting myself speak about my very personal thoughts,life and ways, second tym on IF and second tym on your OS. the first one was on " my little girl", where i told you all about the rapidly increasing number of tearful eyes in my family whenever a girl is married off in any tv scene.

I know this feeling, cuz there is a history of women losing their first borns in my family. i cant share details, but i am scared. more than once that scary thought has crossed my mind, and i am really scared, so much that i cant even spell that fear. but i think you would understand what i am talking about. we galz have motherly affection even for dolls, and a broken doll gives the same amount of heart-pain as that of a sick child.

i pray to heavens that no mother should ever, ever be separated from her children.