virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29

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floral

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow superb i loved it dear i felt sorry for maanvi i will kill that girija one day please do continue soon dear😊

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manvilover18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

super update
plzzz plzzz update soon...
thanks for pm.

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Sofia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Loved the update!! Maya n Virat are siblings?? Haha thts a new one! N poor Maanvi, hate tht stepmother of hers! Plz plz plz continue soon! N thnxx 4 pm-ing me!

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sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Nice update 😃
Thanks for the pm 😊

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Achulovesrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

wow, its really nice story
like it very much
hate that girija & tanya
but when virat is there not to fearrr...

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Life becomes romantic when Eyes Start looking at someone silently, But Life become More Romantic When someone starts reading those eyes silently. ❤️

Iam so happy that u guys like my previous update. so here is the 3rd part of my story. Pls read it and comment . All is in ur hand guys. U guys know that , the readers and their comments gave the courage to the writer to write next part. So pls read it & comment, and guys dont forget to hit the like button
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<font size="3">PART 3</font>

Maanvi attend mayas call.

Maanvi : hello maya

Maya :hei mannu, how r u ?

Maanvi : Iam fine yaar...

Maya : Mannu dont 4get that u cant lie to me. Tell me what happend?

Maanvi told her everything that what happend to the house.

Maya : she is a devil. I hate her. How dare she is take all the things which i gave u? I dont leave that Tanya too...

Maanvi : Its ok yaar...

Maya : Its ok? how can u say that Mannu?

Maanvi : pls leave it maya. I dont want to talk about it.

Maya : Mannu, r u ok?

Maanvi : yes Maya...

Maya : r u sure?

Maanvi : iam ok yaar

Maya : Then ok, gud nyt mannu, take care.

Maanvi : Gud nyt maya

Maanvi cut the call.

In Mayas room. Maya cut that call & started to talk herself : Oh god, y r u doing all this to my Mannu? That Girija & Tanya r such devils. oh,god dont leave them.

Thats time virat came to mayas room & saw that his little sister talk to her self.

Virat : chutki, what happend? y r u talking to urself? is everything fine?

Maya : nothing dada, iam just thinking about Maanvi.

Virat : What happend to her chutki?

Maya : dada, u only know that Maanvi is my frnd & i love her very much. But u dont know anything about her family situation.

Virat sit near to maya. she telled him everything about maanvi.

Virat : what u just said now thats all true? I cant belive this? Poor girl.

Maya : yes , she is very poor. i hate that girija & tanya.

Virat : ok chutki, but now its time to sleep. Gud nyt.

He kissed her forehead.

Maya : gud nyt dada.

Next morning, Maanvi get up in early morning, bcoz she want to do all the household work. After that works she is getting ready to go college. She saw that Tanya is wearing the dress which maya give to her. She didnt say anything . She goes to college.

College, classroom

Maanvi & Maya sitting together.

Maya : Mannu, r u ok?

Maanvi : Everyday , everytime u ask me the same question. y dear?

Maya : bcoz i know that u r not ok.

Thats time they saw that Tanya came towards the class. Maya feel like to kill her. Maanvi understand that & hold mayas hand.

After the class they goes to the canteen. They sit beside of a table and ordered two coffee. Thats time Tanya and her friends came there. They sat next table near Maanvi&Maya.

Tanya : hey guys, what u want?

Her frnds : coffeee...

Tanya called the waiter and ordered the coffee. Thats time maanvi & maya finished their coffee.

Maanvi : Maya, u wait here, i want to go washroom.

Maya : ok, but come fast...

She goes to the washroom. When she came back , tanya saw her and dropped some water in the floor for to make Maanvi felldown. But Maya saw that.

Maya : Mannu, careful, there is some water in the floor.

Maanvi : Thank u maya .A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED.

Maya just smiled at her.

Maya : mannu, c'mon , now we want to go our home.

They both take their bags & get off from that canteen .

Maya : Tomorrow is sunday. so whats ur problem?

Maanvi : u know that.

Maya : Yes, after did ur house hold work, go to the childrens park & enjoy the full day with them.

Maanvi : yeah

They both get Mayas car and she dropped maanvi in her house.

Maanvi : ok maya, see u in monday.

Maya : Ok bye mannu, dont 4get to call me.

Maanvi : ok bye.

She goes to her house.
Night, Maanvis room. she is stand in her balcony looking in the moon. She really miss her parents very much. She remembered her old life which was she spend with her parents.

FLASH BACK
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5year old maanvi playing with her teady bear. Her mom is trying to feed her a apple.

Mom : pls my princess, eat one more piece dear?

Little Maanvi : no maa, iam not hungry anymore. look my little tummy , its already fulled.

Mom : One more piece for ur mom.

Li.Maanvi : ok, only for u...

She eat that piece. Thats time her dad came from his office. He gave somany toys & choclates to her.

Li.Maanvi : Thank u dad.

Mom : oh Raghav, y r u took all this things for her in everyday. already she have somany toys & the fridge is filled with choclates.

Raghav take maanvi in his hand & said to his wife : she is my little princess. I will gave everything to her. I dont want to see her in unhappy. I want her happy always.

Mom : oh god, a dad & his daughter.

/////flash back end/////////////

Her parents always treated her like a princess. But now she is...
Thats time Maanvi heard a thunder storm in the sky. she closed her ears with her hands. bcoz she is affraid it. She goes to her bedroom & covered herself in a blanket.
A drop of tear escaped from her eyes.

Virats house
Virat too standing in the terrece. He heard that thunder storm. But he didnt affraid it. Then his mobile started to ring. He take his phone and looked the id. That is his friend Naithik who calling. Virat attend the call.

Virat : hello Naithik, how r u my frnd?

Naithik : oh, god thats means u didnt 4get me?

Virat : how can i forget u? u r my best frend.

Naithik : oh , really. hey u stupid, u came from london the day before yesterday. And u dont have anytime to call me.

Virat : iam really sorry yaar, pls 4geve me.

Naithik : i will give u forgivness, but 1 condition. Tomorrow u want to came to my house for lunch.

Virat : ok then deal, i must came to ur house

Naithik : Hey viray , akshara wants to talk with u?

Virat : ok, then the phone gave to her.

Akshara : hey, virat how r u?

Virat : iam fine Akshara,

Akshara : hey, dont forget to came tomorrow, we will wait for u.

Virat : I musy come. Ok bye...

He cut the call & looked the sky. Then again his phone started to ring. He looked the id. Its again naithik. He attend the call.

Virat : hey naithik, what happend?

"Virat uncle, u 4get me?" He heard Nakshs voice from the phone.

Virat : hey Naksh, its u? iam sorry yaar, i thought that u mudt sleep. so i think dony disturb u.

Naksh : No, no u lie to me.

Virat : No naksh, god promisse...

Naksh : then meet u tomorrow. gud nyt.

Virat : ok gud nyt naksh...

He cut call & goes to his room for sleep.

Next morning,
Virat got up from the bed & take a shower. He standing in front of the mirror and lookef himself in the mirror.
He trying to remember the dream which is he saw in last night. "He saw that a girl standing in the beach. But she cant remember her face. she was wearing a white anarkkali churidhar. Her hair was open. Her bangles is very beautiful".
A smile crept in his face. Thats time Maya came to her room. She saw that her dada is smiling at himself to looking in the mirror.

Maya : what happend dada? y r u smiling?

Virat : oh, chutki...u...oh, nothing...

Maya : here is ur tea dada. so today is sunday. what is ur programme?

Virat : yesterday Naithik called me. So i want to go to his house.

Maya : oh, really dada, say all of them a "hai" by my side.

Virat : ok chutki...

Precap : Virman second meeting...
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here is the 3rd part guys. u guys like this?. pls comment & hit like button.

Love
Achu

Edited by iam-in-love - 12 years ago