virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29

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sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Very nice beginning 😃
Plz continue soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Great starting hope the person is virat plz do pm me whn u cont.

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manvilover18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow awesome update
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can't wait for next updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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I LOVED THE STORY.
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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Great update ...👏👏...loved it..⭐️⭐️...virman first meeting i guess...wow...looking forward ...plz continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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cont soon n pm me when u update

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Achulovesrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow, its really nice
like mayas charecter in ur
poor maanvi
hope that the person is Virat
virat mayas brother????
its amaizing...
continue soom & pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

plzzz update sooon😭

eagerly w8ing for the nxt part😛

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Silpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Thank u so much for all ur comment guys. Iam so happy that u guys r like my story. So iam here update the second part of my story hope u guys like this part. pls read it and comment.

PART 2

She nodded her head in to a "yes"
Then the person slowly take her hands from her mouth. She turned to looks him. First she saw his brown choclaty eyes. Then she saw his face. He looks so handsome & hot.

Person : who r u? let me guess. U r maanvi, mayas best friend

Maanvi : Iam sorry , i thought this is mayas room

Person : its ok, iam mayas brother, my name is...

Thats time they heard that Maya calling maanvis name from downstaire. Maanvi suddenly run out from his room

Person : nice girl...

Downstair, daining table,

Maanvi, Maya & Priya sitting around the table.

Priya : Maanvi beta, i know everything about u. Everyday maya told me about u. u knoe that?

Maanvi looked maya. she just smiled.

"Hai girls, gud evening" they heard a voice &all of them looked there.
There is he standing. Mayas brother.

Maya : dada (she run towards him & hugged him)

Person : hey chutki...

They came towards the table. He sat beside of Maanvi. Priya gave all of them tea.

Maya : Mannu, meet my dada, the one & only Virat. Virat Singh Vadera

Virat : hai

He take his hand forward for a shake hand.Maanvi looked him. Then she take her hand forward and they shake hands.

Virat (himself) : so soft hand,

After the tea

Maya : Mannu come with me, i'll gave u something

She take maanvis hand and goes to her room. she gave her some dresses & jawells

Maya : Mannu, u like this pearl jewell set. once u said me that u like pearl jewells and i told that to my dada. then i forget that. but he didnt forget and now he bring this for u.

Maanvi : i dont want all this this maya,

Maya : its all for u, pl take it yaar, dont disappoint me

Maanvi : ok, ok meri maa

Thats time virat came there

Virat : whats going on here girls?

Maya : nothing dada, and dada, can u pls drop maanvi in her house?

Virat : ofcourse chutki, y not?

Maanvi : no maya, i can go in bus

Maya : no no, u r going with my dada

Virat : ok, c'mon maanvi

Maanvi take things and goes with virat. They both came towards the car. Maanvi opend the back passenger seats door.

Virat : Iam not ur driver...

Maanvi looked virat & he opened the front passenger seats door for Maanvi. Maanvi closed the back door & get in the front seat.
Virat smiled & get in the driver seat. He start the car. They both r very silent in their journey.

Virat : r u ok?, i mean u r lookimh very sad.

Maanvi : iam ok

Sometimes later

Maanvi : pls, stop the car

Virat : here is ur house

Maanvi : yes

Virat : where?

Maanvi : actually i want to walk some

Virat : i can drop u in ur house

Maanvi : no,no if my chotti maa saw that i came with a man, todays my sleep is gone.
Ok,thank u, bye

She get out from the car and goes from there.

Virat (himself) :whats she mean? i didnt understand anything

Maanvi came to her house and goes to her room. she keep all the things in her cupboard. Thats time girija came to her rom.

Girija : Maanvi, where were u?

Maanvi : chotti maa, iam with maya

Girija : is u go mayas house?

Maanvi looked her surprizingly, "how did she know about it?"

Girija : Tanya told me that u dont have any classes afternnoon. Now its evening , 5.30pm

Maanvi : yes, i goes to mayas house

Girija : i saw, some packets in ur hands. where is it?

She opend maanvis cupboard and saw that some new dresses in it. she take all of them.

Girija : maya gave u all this things,

Maanvi : yes, pls gave me back...

Girija : i think all this dresses suit for my Tanya

Maanvi : pls chotti ma, gave me back this dresses, maya gave these for me

Girija : shut up u stupid girl, just shut up

She goes from there with that dresses. Fortunatlely she cant find the jewells which maya gave to maanvi. Bcoz she already keep it in her secret locker.

Girija : Tanya dear, look these dresses, how is it? u like it?

Tanya : wow maa, its really nice and very costly. By the way where is it all from?

Girija : its maya gave to manvi, u dont want this?

Tanya : ofcourse maa, i want this...

Night ,
Maanvi is in her room. she is very hungry. They didnt call her for dinner. Then when she goes to kitchen she saw that the kitchen is locked from out side. She came back to her room.Thats time her phone started to ring. That is Mays call. She attend the call

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Here is the pt 2 guys, hope that u guys like it. pls tell me that can i continue this story? pls, hit the like button & comment...

Achu
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Edited by iam-in-love - 12 years ago