virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29 - Page 2

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tanishalnk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it sounds amazing...different concept
Update soon nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much 4 ur lovely comments guys. Really sorry For the late update. Here is the PART 1 . Pls read it & let me know ur opinion.

PART 1

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Maya : mannu, y r u so late today?

Maanvi : Sorry yaa, Tomorrow i must came in correct time.

Maya : all the day u said the samething. I know that u late bcoz of ur step-mom. I know her very well.She is a DEVIL.

Maanvi : dont say like that dear...

Maya : Ok yaar, c'mon, We r going to late for the class.

They both goes to the class.
Afternoon, collage canteen

Maya : Mannu, i know that u r suffering so much from ur step-mom & her devil daughter. I hate that Tanya very much. How many times i said u that came to my house and stay there. And my mom said she want to meet u.

Maanvi : I cant came with u maya. They want me there.

Maya : They want u as a Servent. I know that mannu. why r u so poor like this? I cant belive this.

Maanvi just smiled at her. She know that Maya is right. But she cant stay mayas right. Maya said this bcoz maya loves her very much. But she know that she dont have any right for that.

Maya : Maanvi, u know that my brother is back from london. I know that u didnt see him. He brings so many things for me&u. He know u very well. So today u want to come with me in my house.

Maanvi : but maya , how can i?

Maya : look maanvi, now its afternoon. We dont have class afternoon. So now we can go to my house and u can leave my house evening. ok?

Maanvi : but maya...

Maya : no more discussion, come with me...

They both goes towards mayas car & get in it.

Mayas house

Maya : mom, iam here...

Maya run towards her mother & hugged her. Mayas moms name is Priya.

Priya : maya...

Maya : maa, this is maanvi... my best friend

Priya : i know

She goes towards maanvi and hugged her.maanvi hugged her back. She think about her mother. Her eyes filled with tears.

Priya : What happend dear?

Maanvi : Nothing aunty.

Priya : No aunty, just call me maa

Maanvi again hugged her.

Maya : whats going on here? iam here...

They broke the hug.

Maya : maanvi, iam going to my room. I will be back with in minutes.

Maanvi : ok

Sometimes later, Maya didnt come back

Maanvi (to priya) : Maa, where is mayas room?

Priya : upstair beta, u go and check but first u drink this juice

Maanvi : ok maa

After drinking the juice she goes to the upstaires. She saw a room and knocked the door. But no response. She slowly opend the door. Its looks like a men room. Suddenly she thought that its mayas brother room. She walking towards the room, but she cant getout from the room bcoz suddenly someone grabbed her wrist and pulled her in the room. She trying to scream. But the person covered her mouth with his hand. She cant saw his face. bcoz he is in her back side. Her back touching his back.

Person : If u trying to scream then iam not going to take my hands from ur mouth. ok?
I must take my hand but first u promise that u dont scream.

She nodded her head in to a 'yes'

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Here is the first pt guys. u guys like it?. Can i continue this story? pls hit the like button & comment.Really u guys like my story??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Yesss for sure yu have to continue ok ...
Nice update ...
Maya cares for manvi sooo much ...
Update next part sooon and do pm me :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
superb update
maya is very nice she cares for maanvi
i think that persone is virat
plz cont soon
thanks for pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved this update and I liked it from the very first post. Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
liked the first part...
i know that guy is virat...
pm me next tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Awww it's awesome...Maya cares her so much that guy is virat na?????? 😉
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres...wow maya is really nice just like jeevs thoda ajeed lag raha ha but it nice n different too😃
n maya's bro knows manvi's likes n brought her gifts tooo😉
is maya's bro VIRAT OMG it will be shocking too see virat n maya as bro sis😲😆
its really INTERESTING plzzz cont soon😛
n thanx for the pm😃
Edited by amgud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
wow nice story continue soon waiting for the next part
Edited by athniamanvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Omg plz continue very soon!! Its really interesting!!

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