VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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virmanlvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

gd hey plzzz ryt smthng about virman's baby, mannu's pregnency plzzz

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deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

really nice :) and da flashbacks were truly amazing. i wish you post da next part soon cz i cnt wait to find out wat went wrng wid such a beautiful love story

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

ittsss awsomeee really awsomely written nisha loved it thnx for the pm update sooonnn

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Crazyvirmanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

That was an awesome part! I really loved it, the way you expressed Manvi's feelings were awesome!

The story was sad and really touched my heart :) I 'm really eager to read the next part :D Please do pm me when you update i have sent you a buddy request :D keep up the good work!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

nisha ye kar diya tune... maine title ke naam padha n i was attracted to it...!!! n the second thought that crossed me mind was " may be it will be virat who will try n get over manvi " but no it was a shocker for me atleast... it was manvi who was trying to get over virat... the falshbacks were very bfully written that i could see them being played in front of my eyes... they were just perefct and the way virat proposed manvi was soo cute... absolutely loved it... no adored it... i love everything about the first part... the part when manvi said "He doesn't like it when I dance with someone else." i was like awww... she loves him soo very much...

now i am waiting for part 2...

PS : i still have to read part 9 n part 10 of manvi virat from the beginning n break my heart... please do wait for me to catch up but dnt forget to send me pms regarding the same...

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nia-holic

@nia-holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

WOW 👏

amazinggg

i loved the concept

seems lyk she still loves him

but i am very curious to know wot happened btw them

why did they split up

u are very creative girl

nd update ASAP !!!!!! 😃

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mika17

@mika17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

awesome update
thnx for da pm

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nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Nisha,

Again a wonderful story, I can't wait to read part 2. You are a very talented writer, and I love all of your stories. 👏 Thank you for the pm. Could you please pm me chap 24 to break my heart a million times too. Keep up the good work and thank you for the wonderful stories. 😊

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@wanderlust09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Awsum work...
The past wz just beautiful...virman r madly in luv wid each other...luvd those parts...it wz magical...n present...shezz too much hurt...plzz...dont temme virat z nomore... 😕
Luvd ur way of writing...like hw u connected the past n present...everything around her reminds her of Him..
Plzz cont soon..would luv to recieve pm fr al ur future updates!!! 😊

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Maridda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Hey i'm back from my little break from the forum. Exams really get the best of you. Guess whats the first thing I did when i got back? I searched nisha33 (i was not stalking) and saved all your work. Still got to read and comment.
Coming to the OS, can i just say that you need to stop whatever you are doing right now and start writing a novel. I don't how you do it but the OS was so full of emotions. I loved how you wrote about her flashback and they sometimes matched the present. Btw would you like to write my french essay for me??? (I'm suppose to be doing it right now but i have wi-fi and your work bookmarked. Going to need lots of self control)
Please pm the next part.
Marissa

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